I Was Only Fixing the Plot, So How Did I Become a Tragic Beauty?

I think the author's setting is very good, but as the protagonist (whether the protagonist of this article or the one in the setting book), he spent too long in the first small "dungeon". I feel that the development route of the subsequent two protagonists Ying Helin, which is the direction of the entire book, was not revealed. You can only see the entanglement of characters in a small copy, which is too one-sided and limited. If the author wants to bury a foreshadowing in the small copy, or add important subsequent characters, then the content of this "copy" will be too protracted. I came here for Ying Wu Shi Long She. Before reading it, I hoped that he would have divinity written on him, but everything depends on the author. What I mean is that many readers actually want to see the relationship between Ying and Lin because of the foreshadowing of the previous content. When I saw this "copy", I thought it was just a transitional chapter that would end soon. Because this "copy" was too procrastinating, I tried to skip the content of the "copy" from the table of contents and focus on the relationship between Ying and Lin. But I didn't see it from the title. If the author's book does not focus on Ying and Lin, but only on Ying, I can accept it. In fact, as long as the content is interesting, it doesn't matter who the protagonist should interact with. The main thing is that the content of the "dungeon" is too protracted and there is nothing to see from it. In addition, the plot has no ups and downs and is boring. But the setting of this book by the author is really rare. I am super looking forward to the development of the plot in the future!! I hope the author will not take this comment to heart. This is just my personal opinion. Big cheers for more updates!!

The storyline is pretty good. 🤔 The characters are also very distinct, but the text doesn't need too many "..." Ellipses. It's a bit uncomfortable to read the book after a few pauses. Overall, it's okay. I don't know if the author wants to enter the forum/comic theme.

It's okay. I was a little impatient when watching the fantasy. I hope I can finish it quickly. In fact, I think that for this kind of subject, I prefer to read the forum body. I hope I can fast forward to the forum.

I just realized that I didn't post a comment after I tied it, I was so fascinated by it haha😄 I would never say that I was seduced by Ying Wuji's beauty with black hair, red eyes and long hair [rolls eyes] The setting is quite attractive, the plot is also very touching, and there is a lot of suspense. The "ex-husband" plot is written very naturally, and there is also a fan meeting plot (I won't say which characters are punned) haha, but it feels like the tip of the iceberg is revealed [smiles], I hope there will be a happy ending😘 There are some questions: 1. After reading the first copy, I have been wondering how Lin Xuan passed the original work alone. Could it be said that the original work is fake? 2. I still don't understand what is going on with the protagonist and his true nature, that is, the part where the fallen angel explains it. I love this book so much. I don't ask the author to update it, but I just ask him to keep updating it. At least give it to me until the finale! Although the fragments are scattered to the corners of the world like a goddess scattering flowers, and the collection process is probably very difficult, I believe that they can be put together safely😄 Don't end up with the protagonist turning into darkness and directly blending into the world to moisturize things silently. Author, you'd better say that the last drop of scales in the introduction is actually a feint shot without any effect. You also know that respect between people is mutual🤭 There must be a happy ending 🙂

It's a rare book that doesn't look like a tomato! 🥺🥺🥺 Although I can't write a long review yet... But it has stolen my heart in just a few chapters, and the characters and everything are quite touching! Looking forward to the next plot🥺🥺🥺

Nb666 is so good-looking, and the protagonist's personality is really good! The author updates so many times a day, it's true, there is no crash point at the moment

Cold-faced cuteness is so delicious!!! The cold-faced Xiaolong is simply not too cool! I ate a lot!

I have read Chapter 48 so far. Here are my personal opinions. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist has traveled through time in an unfinished novel, but as far as I can tell, it has not yet reflected the characteristics of a time-traveling novel. Occasionally, there are mentions of plot modifications, but very few. The layout of the first story is too long. The article is about the protagonist, who came to a "cocoon" because of a series of things. It does not expand too much about the world view, and it does not show the characteristics of the protagonist's new identity. Instead, it allows the protagonist to use another identity to help the other person realize his dream. (I haven't finished reading it here, but I personally don't want the protagonist to fulfill his wish for the other person in the ending. It's a boy who has a crush on another girl. Maybe it's because of the disparity in family backgrounds between the two parties. The way the boy chooses to chase her is more like a prank, such as being funny. At least from the girl's perspective, there is no good point about this boy at all, except for his academic performance). Original text: The vague memory about the wristband and the toad was brought back, along with the secret joy of succeeding in the prank, the inexplicable excitement when seeing her angry, and the deeper feeling of annoyance afterward... All came to my mind. That desire to be seen, even in the worst way; that kind of hand that you know is wrong, but can't help but reach out... The protagonist at the beginning is a background board in this novel, but the protagonist Lin Xuan in the novel does not have anything special in the previous chapters, and is more of a person who relieves the protagonist's mood. (In the original work, the protagonist met Lin Xuan after a very tiring day, and saw him complaining and let out a similar sigh.) The first few chapters were very attractive to me. The identity assigned to the protagonist is also quite big. It is a pity that I did not see this special identity again later.

I finally came across a uncensored game where the main character is a dragon. Coupled with my favorite settings of beauty, strength, misery and death escape, the writing is also very good, and it perfectly meets the preferences of this dragon controller. . Also, no one understands that dragons can be mothers, right? Especially the kind of cold-faced and cute dragon, wouldn't it be nice to sneeze at it? 🥺🥺🥺 Anyway, author, I will follow you forever! 😳😘💕

It's nice to watch, but what does this illusion mean? I feel like I've lost my B-frames, and I still want to see the real world.