The Cannon Fodder Becomes a Popular Beautiful, Strong, and Tragic Character in a Comic

From the current point of view, the author's writing style is getting better gradually, and the character of the protagonist is also distinct. It is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling + a complaint. It is generally slow, and there are some scoldings of the protagonist (Qing Feiyan) in the novel. The protagonist can choose to skip this comment directly. And sometimes comics and forums will occupy several chapters, which is not very friendly to those who are pursuing the progress of the novel. Moreover, the early stage of the comic seems quite boring, and it is easy to be persuaded to quit. Moreover, the protagonist of this novel is a system called Kouga, a very cute little bat. In fact, in the early stage, the system didn't like it when it was annoying, but who can refuse a host's praise that it will save the recording, and the little bat will be played in a loop when the host reads comics! I'm so cute [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Good: The author's writing style is good, the protagonist's image is also very good, the characters are also very vivid, the plot behind is interesting, the little bat is really cute, the cute creature in this novel 🥰🥰 Medium: The progress of the novel is slow, comics and forums take up a lot of chapters, the author does not only write about sweetness but also about swords [full][full] Bad: There are a lot of comments criticizing the protagonist in the comic forum. The updates are very slow and the early stage is quite boring [Salute][Salute] Overall, it's worth reading, with more good than bad (this review is only a personal opinion, you can read other people's reviews and book reviews (Chen Ken) because I'm not very good at writing book reviews) [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Overall, it's super slow-burning, and not recommended for bookworms who like fast-paced and cool writing. The author's writing style is improving as the chapters are updated, and it is not recommended to be disturbed by the previous chapters. I think the story line is long (there are few updates so far, and I don't know if it will be unfinished or messed up in the later stages). I am looking forward to Feiyan's transformation into a villain in the comic book world. I haven't read many novels about later villains... Note: This book contains anti-Afrikaans comments on forums, which are quite extreme and extreme, but I believe this is all part of the play* Uneasy The protagonist is a bit spiritually advanced. If you like watching pure evil or pure good, I don't recommend it but I recommend giving it a try. Summary: A newcomer's writing style, the protagonist's image is outstanding, the characterization is vivid, the plot is slow and interesting, it's not a bad idea to check it out. This book review is only a personal opinion, it is recommended to refer to it in conjunction with other book reviews! I will write a review once there are more chapters.

It's really beautiful, and the beautiful, strong and miserable setting really pokes me!! The other vest is the character of a fraudster, and I just ate it up!! At present, it seems that Dada's writing style is still good, but there are too few articles at the moment (Da Dada will update soon (இωஇ)). The introduction is very good and attractive. Come on Dada!! Giving a five-star review is a great encouragement and affirmation of this book!!! Very well written, please keep updating!! (I feel like I didn't write the long review well this time, sorry!! ∠( ᐛ ∠)_) Hehehe, I read a new chapter today. I feel that the author's writing on this vest is really beautiful. I am particularly looking forward to some of the future vests. Qingqing is still so mysterious and cute. I really love you to death!! Today's small system is still maintained!! I've been busy lately and come here late (இωஇ) Daddy, a lot of people have read you now, and I've been working hard to help you promote your books. I'll be an old fan when you become popular, so don't forget me!! (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) Come on, your writing is getting better and better. My suggestion is that if you are halfway through the plot, you can change the synopsis based on the exciting plots. The more attractive the synopsis, the more people will read it!! Hope it gets better and better!! I will always support you!! Come on come on!! (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊ Dad, I'm going to help you gain some visibility. Don't worry, with me here, your books will definitely get better and better, and I will help you promote it!! Come on, everyone!! 💕(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

It's a very delicious book. The main character is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling + a cold-faced and cute character. The little system deceived us so much that we almost couldn't find the answer. The relationship between the original protagonist group is also very interesting, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. I look forward to the future.

The writing is very beautiful, and the interaction between the system and the protagonist is also very good. I look forward to the appearance of the vest! But Dad, can there be more interaction between the vest and the protagonist? Let me comment on the CP between the protagonist and the vest. Of course, it all depends on what Dad thinks. I love you so much (=^▽^=)

It's so good that it ties it up in one breath, the plot is great!! The writing is okay! It's just that I think the content of the comic is too monotonous. I've read the forum article and found that the "reader" in this book is a bit weird and the author himself is portraying this weirdness. I suspect it's foreshadowing. Then it's about the old thief drawing comics. I think the old thief can learn more. Otherwise, the protagonist's strength is a bit slow to improve. In the later stage, he can gain power more quickly! I want to see another vest and the protagonist's strength increase! (The teacher does not mean to preach, just to give some suggestions, you don't have to accept them! Teacher, keep writing. I don't mean to give guidance. Qaq just gives expectations. Don't be too stressed! If someone scolds us, we will scold the teacher back and concentrate on writing the book! Don't give up. It's rare to see a good book that is so new! Don't support books and give book reviews to have more weight! 🥰) Anyway, I hope the plot will be faster in the future and not too much daily ❤️ Teacher, come on

After reading the book for so long, I almost forgot about the book review. Let me add it now. At that time, because the introduction written by the author was too attractive, even though I was still a young seedling, I still fell into the pit vertically and didn't want to get up. After chasing it for so long, I still like the white and black Qingqing in the author's works. I really like this kind of horse story. The relationship between the fraudster and Qingqing is like hating from love for the past, and fear from love for the past. It's so refreshing to hate the sea! It's simply a delicious meal that couldn't be more delicious!! But I am secretly looking forward to the love-hate entanglement between other characters and Qingqing. It is really delicious and I am really looking forward to the appearance of other new characters! The author can also put some highlights in the introduction. Sometimes the essence of the novel is in the introduction. After all, I am attracted by the introduction and I know this very well. Once again, I really hope that the author can make more updates. This wave is a trap without any loss.

| ┣┫████ Onto ┗┻—┛ Fast update Dear Daddy: Seeing the words is like meeting each other, and the letter is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box?

This is mainly about the plot and the characters are very delicious, especially the kind of gentle smile, and then give you a knife, no matter how you explain it, that kind of gentle beauty with a wilted and bad wilting, oh, my god, it is so cool. When I saw the protagonist inserting the knife into his brain, and then put his hand there and turned around, I was already oh, my God, you scared me 🙂. Then I took 3 seconds to accept this setting, and then fell in love with it even more. I can only say that it is the kind of crazy beauty, a beautiful woman who is strong and miserable. [Admiration] But one drawback is that there are too many chapters describing the comics and barrages, which are too wordy. I suggest it be more concise. As for the content of the comics, I think 3/4 chapters are enough. Then, don't describe it in such detail and make it more detailed. Forums and barrages are also better if they are concise and sparse.

Some time ago, in order to improve my cultural literacy, I signed up for a calligraphy training class. Because my peers were all primary school students, everyone ostracized me and looked down upon me for still learning this at such an old age. It was nothing at first, but the maliciousness of the primary school students was really beyond my imagination. They said that I came to learn calligraphy with my foot half in the coffin. I was so angry that I cried. I wiped away my tears and ignored them as they continued to practice calligraphy. I swore that I would practice a good calligraphy and not let my money go to waste. I calmed down and carefully wrote a line of words on the paper: Teacher, you are a god. 😘😘😘