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I took a quick look at it, and overall it's good and quite funny, but a reminder, if you're a fan of the original books like me, the author will swallow the setting. But if you're not a firm fan of the original Harry Potter books, you can take a look, it's very good.

I've read a lot of battles of wits and courage, and this "Pure Magic Pills" is a good book that doesn't require your brain to read. It focuses on a person who does whatever he wants and doesn't know how to think about any conspiracy. I just want to have some fun. This is a really good book where you can let the protagonist do whatever he wants without thinking. Don't force strict logic or anything like that, and the characters in it are not too bad. I would like to ask if the author will have a female protagonist? I don't want it selfishly, I feel that the heroine will influence the protagonist to wield his sword and cause destruction.

The characters in the original novel are not particularly OOC, there is no small head controlling the big head, and there is no forced pretense and obscenity... It is very comfortable and reassuring to read. Who knows that Akaashi finally has a normal book after so many books? Yimanli

I didn't expect to see a fanfic of this level in Yangshizi. Although the author said it was a happy novel, in fact, the plot development is reasonable, the writing style is considered to be outstanding in Yangshizi, and the characters are more close to the original work, without stepping on the original characters. Under the influence of the powerful golden finger, the overall rhythm is better than the original work. It's relaxed, but not abrupt, and the details are changed very naturally. I really want to tie the author up and finish the book right away. It's really good to read, and I'm a little suspicious of the author's gender. The plot doesn't have any strange gazes on various female characters, and the emotions are delicate. Author, do you see yourself when you look in the mirror?

The unique writing style abandons many of the fate theories of the original work and rewrites many of the plots, but it is not offensive to the senses and the plot is also very interesting. The article is humorous and really interesting to read.

Why did I finish reading Chapter 300 [crying] [crying] This book is so good and I like it very much. It's refreshing and funny but not poisonous😋😋The author also listens to suggestions But why did I finish reading Chapter 300 like this? [Crying] [Crying] I feel uncomfortable if I don't read it for a day

Charlie's character design is very good, but there is no female protagonist now. Very good, hope it keeps up.

This book is really amazing, especially the depiction of Zhao Yun fighting Optimus Prime for a whole day for Daji. But the White Bone Demon is too strong. If it weren't for the blind monk's Tianyin Wave + Raptor Tail Swing, this wave of AK47 fully automatic strafing would never have been able to withstand it. In addition, I really appreciate what Jia Baoyu said to the 100,000 heavenly soldiers of the Tiangong: "Young man, you are arrogant, don't act arrogant in front of your brother Bao", which made Baoyu full of homesickness after being struck by Erlang Shen's three-pointed two-edged sword. All in all, the plot of this book is wild and unrestrained, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.

In fact, if you are not a die-hard fan of the original book and don't care so much about some differences from the original book, this book is quite good. The concept is novel and innovative; the plot is smooth; the atmosphere is relaxed and humorous...

I like it very much. Except that she is not finished, I can't say the rest. His shortcomings, his progress and writing style are all very suitable to me. It is a very standard kind of cool writing, but it does not make people feel particularly boring. It is very novel.

Very nice. The character of the main character Mamaru.

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and overall the plot is okay. The protagonist has a system and is strong. Although it still follows the main plot, there are some expanded plots. [Chigua] [Chigua] It's a pity that the protagonist, the foolish king, does not have a heroine. Anyway, I don't seem to see the heroine. Instead, I introduced Zhang Qiu to Cedric [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua]

This book is very interesting. It can be seen that the author may not have wanted to write a female protagonist at the beginning. Even around chapter 196, the protagonist rescued Hermione when Hermione was at her most desperate and wanted to change the plot to a route without a female protagonist. However, after more than 250 chapters, the author completely gave up and started writing with a female protagonist. Although the progress is very slow, it can be seen that there should be a female protagonist. If you don't like to read with a female protagonist, you can read about 200 chapters. If you like it, you can keep reading. This book is really good.

Such a beautiful book only has a score of 6.7! ! ! This damn rating almost made me miss this masterpiece. Although I don't want to say "it's so beautiful" and "just impeccable" and other common praises, but it is really that good. At least it makes me feel happy after reading it. It's really great. I give the author a thumbs up 👍 ((It's not a review, I really feel good))

First of all, although there is a cheating protagonist, the general plot of each book will still develop according to the original book. There are many small characters and small details, the names of items, etc., Which made me recall the original book after not reading it for many years. It was really good. Secondly, some knives in the original work have been changed. For example, Wormtail was killed by Snape in the third book, Cedric in Goblet of Fire was replaced by the protagonist and will not die, etc. There is no special OOC, and some funny plots triggered by the author changing the plot according to the original character's personality have been added. Although the addition of a cheating protagonist means that there will be no foreshadowing of the original work, it is very good as a second-generation online novel.

CP Hermione, kissed and confirmed the relationship in Chapter 373. This article is very interesting and I like it very much, but I like to be alone in beauty and claim to be king alone. The author's relationship between the two is not obtrusive. I don't feel that in other articles, the relationship between the man and the woman is negative or the nanny has nothing, it is a natural relationship. There is nothing very toxic, such as the kind of scolding people for no reason, and then targeting a certain person. There is no such thing, nor are there those big shots who wrongly accuse the protagonist for no reason, hate the protagonist, and then fear the protagonist. They always feel that the protagonist is going to do something to harm the world. I am just a fun-loving person who likes to go to the theater and sometimes gets angry. If you like Xiaolong, don't come here. Xiaolong lowers his head. After all, he is a foolish king. There is a plot in the article where Harry and Ron dress up as women. The one with half enchantress blood is an M in the article. She liked the protagonist and wanted to kiss the protagonist several times, but the protagonist didn't let her succeed. However, she only appeared in those few parts, and she was not seen in the rest of the story. That's all. Although the king is a foolish king, he will not abandon his loyal people and will protect his people (although sometimes the storm is caused by the king)

I think the single heroine Hermione is very good [smile] [smile] [smile] Anyway, I also like it very much. The ones with high ratings are definitely worth watching. [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] Everyone, just take a look at it. I remember that I have chased it from 200,000 words or 300,000 words to 900,000 words. Anyway, I don't think there are any surprises or dissatisfaction. Just watch it Anyway, brothers, that's it for watching ~ [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Five-star anti-theft After reading Chapter 18, this book is suitable for you. You can know the author by reading the novel. The protagonist is a combination of a little fairy + a giant baby.

The first 300 or so chapters are all very interesting, and they are powerful in a natural way. The author's writing style is very good, without any stiffness. Shout out to Charlie! ! ! But why I only gave it four stars? Mainly because I couldn't bear to eat Charlie and Hermione's CP, and the food was a bit sore in my throat [crying]. It would be great if there was no CP. The Emperor should have no CP!

This book is simply divine. The protagonist is chaotic and kind-hearted. It is so entertaining. The author is full of details and the protagonist is very vivid. You can see the gentleness and delicacy of the protagonist from a small detail. You can also laugh because of a certain sentence. This book is very funny. Moreover, everyone's ending in this book is really good, and they got what they wanted. The author's great portrayal of Ms. Ravenclaw is really amazing, which gave me a new understanding of this character; the ending of Grindelwald was also unexpected, and it was very fun💪🏻

After reading dozens of chapters, my evaluation is excellent! Very nice. There are no small mistakes, the logic is very smooth, and the protagonist is not overpowered either in combat or in combat, and the protagonist is also intelligent and not just a fool of a man with great strength. Excellent!

At present, I have seen chapter 290, and there are indeed some surprises. For example, in chapter 18, the protagonist fell asleep in class and then beat up the teacher and insulted him. I almost didn't get through it, but I still saw the latest chapter. It seems that I am sure that I will be with Hermione. I have danced together and even met the protagonist's grandmother. I deducted one star because I personally don't like this relationship line. Apart from the above, everything else is well written, and the character design is not too bad either. It is considered to be one of the best among the HP fics I have read.

It looks great, but why is there no extra love story between Charlie and Hermione? What a pity [crying] I used to think that there would be more female protagonists who would accept Hibiscus. After all, the emperor usually has three thousand beauties in his harem. It's a pity that the top three will have no role in the future. It feels a bit pity, but the pure love of Hermione, the single female protagonist, is quite good. The protagonist's chaotic and kind-hearted character is also quite good, but I felt that after Charlie saved Hermione, Hermione's interactions were weird. One moment, she acted like a devout believer. Charlie did everything right, and then it was normal, and he would roll his eyes at some of Charlie's actions. After that, he became more unified. All in all, this book is very recommended and very interesting.

I have never seen the movie, only played Hogwarts, and some fragmented videos on Douyin. I am not clear about the setting issues mentioned in the comment area, so my subjective feeling after reading this book is that the author's writing style is nothing to say, the plot development of the story, and the characterization of the characters are also delicate enough. Goldfinger's presence in the later period is not strong. The main reason is that Goldfinger is settled by time. There is no need for Goldfinger to appear frequently in the later period. There is no doubt that the heroine is Hermione, but I think the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine has a very good transition, and it is not the kind of mindless and rigid relationship. Generally speaking, it is a casual and funny book. It is a pity that this is the only book. The author's writing style can easily be seen as an old author. I don't know if there are other vests. In fact, regarding the setting issue, when I read the commentary, I also discovered that there are many settings in the movie and the original work that are inconsistent. Everyone can accept the movie and the original work, why can't they accept the author's setting? At least I think the author's setting is logically reasonable 11111

To be honest, I was still hesitant to give it 4 stars, but when I saw it only had 8.3 Points, I decided to give it 5 stars. Personally, I feel that although this book is an invincible and refreshing start, it is not necessarily a smooth read all the way. There is no shortage of the author's little ingenuity and design, and from time to time there is an unexpected laugh point, which is quite interesting. Overall, the writing is smooth and logical, the characters behave logically, and the characters are not compromised for the sake of the plot. It is an excellent and refreshing article. If we want to talk about shortcomings, there really aren't any. It's just that it may be a little dull, because there are actually a lot of well-designed twists and turns in the story, but depending on the setting of the protagonist Goldfinger, it anchors the final future. But there's nothing wrong with it, it's just that it's good but not great. All in all, it looks good and I recommend it.

I finished watching it in its entirety, and it was very exciting, with no regrets. It was like a completely different timeline. It cannot be said that everyone has exactly the same character as the original work, but the behavior of the characters in the story is not very inconsistent with the settings in the book, so it does not prevent you from reading this different story. It's very relaxing and interesting. In addition, the story develops smoothly. Although the combat power is like taking an elevator, it shortens the story line better and does not increase the fatigue of reading. And I personally feel that there is a bit of a problem with the portrayal of Slytherin, specifically the Lucius family. I'm not particularly outrageous about splitting the official match, mainly because in the case of this book, the official match is indeed not necessarily a better result.

This novel is amazing. I originally thought it would be the kind of Mary Sue novel that is mindless and enjoyable. However, the plot is coherent, the original logic is reasonable, and there are no bugs (it should be enjoyable, and there is no such thing as abusing the plot), and the protagonist is not the kind of arrogant and omnipotent person just because he has a golden finger. The protagonist is relaxed, has brains, and has the moral bottom line of three views. He does what he needs to do without being excessive and blindly passionate. Moreover, the protagonist has a relatively comprehensive understanding of the world, so he has depth of thinking, knows how to advance and retreat, and can also talk about the love line later (Hermione CP). Especially innovative! Based on the innovation of the original work, it is very interesting and not boring. I like it. Thank you to the author for your love.

This Harry Potter fanfic skillfully integrates the essence of the original work and outlines a new chapter in the wizarding world with delicate writing. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is ups and downs without losing warmth. It pays homage to the classics and is boldly innovative. It makes the eyes of old fans bright and new readers can be quickly immersed in it. It can be called a model work of fan creation.

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The writing is really great, and the main character is a little bit funny. I really liked it after reading the first chapter. Now it's tied, and the plot is developing well. I just want to sincerely ask, is there any cp?