Marrow Corpses Descend: Human-Skin Kites Fill the Sky

It's very interesting. I've just read the latest 53 chapters. So far, there are no surprises. The subject matter is very good The plot is smooth, thrilling and tense, and has many twists and turns. Not dull or frustrated The protagonist's character and brain are ok The protagonist's mother and father are currently equipped (brain, mobility, etc.) OK. Although they haven't reached their plot yet, the few paragraphs are quite good. The protagonist's current companion (female, a fellow traveler who fights side by side) is OK; (male, a fat man) I hope not to be low and don't pretend, I will be more harsh on male characters It is a high opening, I hope it can be maintained or exploded.

It's quite interesting to read, the plot is exciting and logical, and the author sometimes becomes silent, so the whole story is not particularly dark and depressing, and is even a bit joyful. The heroine is smart but not reckless, and knows how to avoid dangers and detect dangers in advance. The heroine's character is well portrayed, and the heroine's roommates are also good. They work well together and don't hold anything back. Seeing that the current ratio of female to male characters is 6:4, or 5:5. There are no conventional insulting words for women, which makes female readers feel at ease. The author could pay attention to the use of neutral words. There are quite a few issues that could be revised throughout the text.

Yes, not only did I give my book a five-star review, but I also gave myself a gift of ten yuan. Mainly focus on one, pamper yourself [eat melon]

The concept is very novel and the plot is okay, but I feel that the teacher's language organization skills are still a little bit behind. Many paragraphs are difficult to read and need to be understood several times. There are also some sentences with grammatical problems. For example, Leping's sentence in the paragraph about "solving roommates": "Leping is... (Omitted here) again, and 'Chen Yuanyuan' who is going to the theater is also... (Also omitted here)." Why does the sentence pattern "will... (Object) be..." Appear? "Will..." Already has a subject, which is "Leping"; and then "will be..." Appears again. Why does the object become the subject again? Isn't this a change of heart? Either remove "being", or directly change it to "Chen Yuanyuan was Leping..." Why is the sentence structure mixed, teacher? Just a little opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, the synopsis of the novel is still very attractive to me [Thoughts] [Sending Hearts] 1. Put words (active) Leping Jiang Chen Yuanyuan wipe h 2. Passive sentences (passive) Chen Yuanyuan was wiped h The results were pieced together: Will... Also be... This is a mixture of sentence patterns - the two structures are fighting, and the grammar directly explodes. 2. The second mistake: repetition and verbosity -"Another knife" -"I was also wiped out with a knife" "One knife" appears twice, which is completely redundant. 3. Write it correctly (just choose one of the two) ① Use "will" Leping struck again with the knife, wiping "Chen Yuanyuan" who was watching the theater, and her head rolled to the ground. ② Use "being" Leping struck again, and "Chen Yuanyuan" who was watching the show was wiped out and her head rolled to the ground. Brief summary: "Jiang" and "bei" cannot be used at the same time, only one is enough. This is the most commonly tested and most common faulty sentence in Chinese. There are also: 1. Original sentence Teachers and students ran wildly on the avenue, their shoes "clicked" on the fallen leaves and their chests were about to explode, but they still ran forward without looking back. 2. Where is the speech defect? 1. "My shoes clicked and shattered when I stepped on the fallen leaves." It reads like: The shoe is broken, but what you want to say is: → The fallen leaves were trampled and made a "clicking" sound. 2. "Run to where you are without looking back." Obviously there are too many words/typing errors and it is not fluent. It should be: run forward without looking back. 3. Wrong use of "" "Run forward without looking back" → Use "" as the adverbial → Run forward without looking back 3. A smooth and graphic version Teachers and students ran wildly on the avenue, their shoes clicking on the fallen leaves, their chests feeling like they were about to explode, but they still ran forward without looking back.

What does it mean that Hongmeng has not developed a rating system? I finally came home to play on the iPad before rating. I thought I would never see Yan Feng's story again. Our sister Yan Feng has become a magic weapon again. I personally like to read adventure novels and anime about zombies, but the blood zombies in this book are smarter and more conscious than ordinary zombies. In comparison, the wrestling and wits between the two camps are more exciting. I don't know why the rating is not high. As a short and medium story, every character image is established, and the reasons and results of each change are explained clearly. This is a good novel. Selfishly, I still like Yan Feng the most. This time, I hope that we can stay together longer. Have you ever watched the Korean drama Zombie School? I feel that Yan Feng's story can be made into such a wonderful film. Every time there was a twist, I cried out that I was screwed. But in the end, with everyone's wisdom and even sacrifice... We still got through the difficulties. You still need to protect your body, I will always follow you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

After reading this book, I feel like the zombies are all pretty... The early stage is slightly thrilling, and you race against time; in the later stage, passive turns to active, and the sisters have to fight! The ratio of women to men is pretty good, and the highlights are basically on women. Overall good.

It's really good to watch. The heroine's IQ and vigilance are really high, but the marrow zombies have IQ and are very smart, and they have evolved later, and some marrow zombies have awakened their memories. The flesh zombies have no brains but can be reckless, and the skin zombies are not very smart but can fly. And later on, the marrow zombies have mastered human weapons, and the state agencies seem to have fallen. It's so smart. This situation starts with a collapse, but I don't know how to win. It's very well written, it's really good to watch, and it can be seen that the author has written it very carefully. I look forward to the subsequent plot.

The author's plot is very well written and really makes people feel immersed in the tension, but to be honest, it really makes me feel a sense of despair. In this case, I can't think of any way to turn the situation around. I hope the author can quickly update it.

It's good-looking, scary, and has some humor mixed in.

It's very beautiful, and the interaction between the heroine and her teammates is also vivid and three-dimensional [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]