From Ant to Rogue Cultivation Powerhouse

Nice! ! ! This is the only story in which the female protagonist failed to break through and then regressed in cultivation since I read the fairy tales. Except that the plot started when I was 50 years old and is relatively compact. The author does not delay in updating, and still maintains a dozen chapters every day. Much better than those writers who squeeze out toothpaste!

The advantages and disadvantages are quite obvious. The author updates very quickly, with more than a dozen chapters a day, and it truly describes the hardships of hard work at the bottom and the cautious and tenacious character of the heroine. It is good as a coming-of-age story (the growth of a 60-year-old lady is also a growth [face covering]). But the shortcomings are also obvious. There are too many inner dramas in the front. The main problem is that the details are not well controlled, not just in one or two places. If the audience for this type of article does not like to read cool articles, it will have high requirements for details. When readers calm down and read it, they will find many contradictions and bugs. This kind of article should be about quality rather than quantity. I hope the author can change it later.

It's a very good novel about hard work and hard work from the beginning. There's no pretense or unnecessary awkwardness. It's just like me and other mortals who climb all the way and read it all the way to the end. Generally, the novel starts to get better after a hundred chapters or continues to work hard. It's wonderful after reading at least two hundred chapters. The fight never stops, and Golden Finger is not big. Basically, it just keeps fighting again and again. The occasional small flaw is that I forgot the setting. I am an old girl [laughing]. I hope those who work hard to cultivate immortals will not miss it. It is not the Long Aotian type, but it must not appear in the CP type, but I feel that it should not be the case.

It's quite good. The author made some mistakes in the first few chapters, such as spiritual stones, but it gets more and more exciting as you go to the back. The second and third time I changed the map, it started to feel that way. The writing is getting better and better. Come on, author! It's rare to see an article about a female nun, and the heroine also has a good friend. I really admire the two of them! ! ! It feels like it can be written into millions, and the two people behind it can even establish their own sect! ! ! [Laughing][laughing]

The story is very exciting, but I have a few questions. The original owner was a handyman of the sect, so what about her family members? There will always be a few of them, right? The heroine has always been cautious, but she seemed very confident when she took the elixir to forcefully upgrade. She knew that the poison would affect her future journey, but she actually took it twice. The first time was helpless, and the second time she was too panicked. It was obvious that there would be no danger for the time being, but she was also overconfident. This led to the subsequent detoxification journey. So wouldn't the heroine be in danger during this period? Obviously not. It is a good thing that the heroine dares to fight hard, but it is too risky. If it were not for the heroine, she would have died long ago.

Although sometimes the inner monologue is too cumbersome and too long, the flaws are not concealed. The writing is good. I really like the female supporting characters described by the author in addition to the female protagonist. They are not male supporting characters who have too many roles in other non-CP female protagonists. The most important thing is that the author writes more than ten times a day! Cool!

The original protagonist had poor qualifications, and the heroine who came from time-travel relied on "modern people" and the aura of the heroine described by the author to improve her qualifications and continue to have "opportunities". There is no golden finger, just "fight" step by step. The heroine described by the author is smart and witty and never gives up. The Four Arts focus on attacking talismans, and they can draw the talisman with arrays and tools easily. I don't know anything about elixirs! The Qi refining period is written in the atmosphere of the Golden elixir period, and the foundation building period has its own feeling of becoming a god. The author may have made a fortune, and after writing about the seventh level of foundation building, he arranged for the heroine to be taught by a certain late boss that she would cultivate her whole life to the stage of divine transformation, and then arrange a mission to save the world and ascend. And then there's a random spoiler at the end: the heroine's friend and apprentice will also ascend – the end!

I saw Chapter 65. The author wrote it quite well. The protagonist has made steady progress. From being poor and useless at the beginning, he has now firmly taken root in the new world by relying on the talismans he has practiced day and night. At the beginning, even eating was a problem. Now he can rely on his own ability to form a team with others to take adventures. In addition, the author describes the talismans very carefully. When writing about talismans, he also writes about how the protagonist practices hard. Just like practicing calligraphy, this article has different ways of writing runes with different attributes, stroke by stroke, which is very interesting. The writing is quite fluent, but some of the plots in the early stage are a bit mediocre, hahaha. Later on, the author becomes more proficient in writing, so there is no problem in reading it. Oh, there are some small bugs in the front, but I choose not to use my brain, which doesn't hurt. The author makes the supporting characters who interact with the protagonist very real and logical. Now there is a friend who has experienced life and death with the protagonist. He is a swordsman, which is very good. One is the main attacker and the other is the assistant. They will go on adventures together in the future [laughs]

Four stars for the female cultivator. I don't know if the author wants to write a work about mortals cultivating immortals. I would like to give the author some suggestions. I have read Chapter 76 and the heroine is still practicing hard. This may be in line with the "reality". After all, smooth sailing is too difficult and in line with the mentality of modern people. However, perhaps some of the hardships are too ordinary. The heroine is too calm. In modern times, she may be an emotionless work machine. She is no longer attractive after reading it. I hope the heroine can interact more with others and be more interesting. If she is too calm and withdrawn from the world, she will become dry. Come on, author!

I like to watch Cultivation without CP, the mini-map is very rich, and the fighting scenes written by the author are really good, each has its own characteristics, and the more you write, the better. There are few people who take the casual cultivation route, come on!