Born with Sword Bones, I Slay My Way Through the Cultivation World

This book is really great to read, but the rating is so low that I, who am just a fan of reading, can't help but write a book review for fear that the author will stop updating. To be honest, I feel that the author's writing style can be improved. There are no inexplicable group portraits or inexplicable ignition. The heroine has a growth line, and the heroine's emotional line is also light, very soft, not reckless, and not inexplicable. It is very logical for a few people to set fire to each other and then fight against the whole world. It is not a story about a strong woman and her spoiled wife. Generally speaking, seeing that there is no thunder yet, I am really a person who easily stops reading after watching it. I am always criticized by inexplicable things, but this book is quite good. I hope the author can continue to write and let us see the heroine become a strong person and become the number one swordsman! ! ! And what I like very much is the portrayal of the supporting characters. They are not vicious supporting characters in the traditional sense. Everyone is three-dimensional, has what she wants to do, and has an explanation for why she does it. She is not inexplicably vicious, but I like it very much. I hope I can continue to write more. This is my first time to write a book review, and the writing is not that good, but I hope this book can get better results and the author will be more motivated to continue reading!

Although the storyline is of the old-fashioned "real and fake daughter" type, the author's writing style is good and the details are clearly described. The reborn heroine does not return to the original sect to confront the original heroine, but finds a new path and starts over in a different sect. It should be given 4.5 Stars, and an extra half star is given to encourage the author to keep up the good work [blowing kiss]

Finally tied it. The following are some of my thoughts after reading it. 1 The female villains described by Baobao always impress me. Miss Shen's character and character, which were affected by family affairs, were not created blindly. Instead, there was a bit of an O. Henry ending. I said it was a movie-style development. I actually don't understand it. I only know that the characters you wrote are full and three-dimensional. 2. Regarding Wen Zhao's previous life, it plays a role in promoting the story and continuing development in many plots, but it is mentioned too many times. It is really a lot. There are more than 4,000 pages. Just mentioning the repetitive arm, broken arm, kneeling as punishment, and younger brother, there are really too many chapters for these four. I understand that this is Wen Zhao's heartache, and it can be regarded as a bright line in the article. Because it has not been resolved, it has been emphasized, repeated, and mentioned again and again. But I want to change it, maybe it will be better. 3. Baby is really good at describing scenery, characters, and the so-called "Tao". It seems to have brought me to the world of immortality you described. It is so glorious and beautiful. The descriptions of "Tao" babies are also different from those of other authors. Some of them may be borrowed from the Taoist Sutra, the Diamond Sutra, etc., But the meaning is always not their own. They just changed the words and wrote them in a similar way. 4 Regarding the group portrait, I find it a bit funny, but also a bit sincere and simple. It's something that happened in the early stage. Whenever something happens, the other four people will always bring their iconic items neatly to the destination to comfort and encourage Wen Zhao. Of course, there is nothing wrong with this way of writing. As I mentioned before, it is a bit funny, sincere, and simple. 5. There are several typos and missing words in the first and middle sections of the article. I still hope they can be corrected. There is a paragraph that is repetitive and written a lot. I remember there were comments and I hope to delete it. According to my scoring standards, if you have no typos or missing words, then I will definitely give you a better score. I always feel that articles like this are careful and careful. 6 In the article, the world of cultivating immortals is a bit old, which makes me feel the difficulty of cultivating immortals. Unlike other articles, it is great to become a powerful person at an early age, which is great, but it also leaves no trace in my heart. My baby allowed me to see the meaning and connotation of cultivation. 7 Babies seem to like using parallelism very much. Many parallelisms are used in the article. You can try other techniques. I think the articles written by Bao Bao are very good. There are times when the article should be young and weak, and there are times when it should be sketched. In this way, the article runs through to the ending. I believe that the rating will not be bad. A good book is not afraid of the precipitation of time and the reading of later people. I hope that there will be no Internet memes in my future writing, and it must have an ancient feel, otherwise it will make people uncomfortable. Of course, it all depends on how you want to write, baby. I am just making an opinion, and I apologize in advance for any offense. There is also the city lord of Peony City. Her character is really infuriating. I think this understanding of Tao and the retribution of cause and effect can be reflected in the subsequent inner demons. The inner demons are not only a barrier for oneself, but also a consideration of the family and bloodline. The retribution of cause and effect belongs to the surviving person. Even if there is a legitimate relationship and process in the law, as long as there is a cause and effect relationship, it must be borne. So I can be regarded as a country bumpkin. I hope that the karma and retribution of the Lord of Peony City can come faster and fail more miserably.

I followed up the review directly. I particularly like the heroine's style of conduct. The author portrays the characters very delicately. It feels like the author is raising a daughter. He has given her the opportunities that suit her, made like-minded friends, and allowed her to hold her head high and move forward. Sister, every step of your step counts!

It's good to read. The heroine's personality is pretty good so far. She doesn't have any particularly virginal behavior or any inexplicably embarrassing lines. It's ridiculously awkward and makes me laugh out loud. I think this book is worth reading. Personally, I feel that the author's writing is pretty good and the fighting scenes are pretty good.

For the first time, I stayed up all night and published a short review of a book. The heroine is quite to my liking. As long as I don't kill Master Feng Yi, I will definitely keep chasing her. Please help me. Don't kill my master. [Admiration] Wei Er doesn't think it's too harsh on me, but I respect the author's ideas. One is that my senior brother was raised as the core of the next generation of sword sect since he was a child, and then he ruined himself because of love. I don't understand it, but I respect it. One is that if this article is uncensored and the authenticity is warped and the group portraits are highlighted, it may be more palatable. However, I feel that the male protagonist should have relatively few scenes and it can be read as uncensored. However, the author's big words are already very good [Love] [Love] [Love]

The writing is super good. The protagonist becomes cold-hearted in order to protect himself, but he is not cold-hearted. He wants to help someone when he sees someone bad. He has the stubbornness and tenacity of a swordsman but does not take advantage of others. Because he had a bad master in his previous life, he will not kill everyone with one stroke and refuses to become his master! It's really good. The author has divided the middle line very well. If you go over it, it will look too sharp, and if you stay away, it will look like a coward. This is good! ! ! Recommended!

It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. It does not stick to the love between children, but focuses on the journey of life again. I am looking forward to its growth, which will enrich the world view little by little, reveal the persistence of oneself, and the way to achieve oneself.

I think it's worth watching. Although the plot is a bit cliche in some places👁👄👁, it doesn't have any interesting points. It's not embarrassing and can make people watch. I think the character portrayal is more three-dimensional. The heroine doesn't hate everyone because of her past life. She has the sense to distinguish the past life from the present (I am not very good at describing the first time I write a long review, it is not very detailed). You can go and take a look👁👅👁

It's also a very good-looking one. I saw it right away at three o'clock in the morning. Zhao Zhao said that the little bitter melon must be better and better in this life. He punched Xie Xuan and kicked the bad guy Lin Chaochao! Okay, I will continue reading the article🤗🤗🤗I love you more🥰🥰