An Ordinary Girl Knocks on the Immortal Sect’s Door, Starting with a Famine Escape

The first ten chapters are very interesting. The heroine is calm, decisive and quickly breaks away from the toxic family and takes revenge. She has survival wisdom. The author has good writing skills, and the plot of the first dozen chapters has a bit of a Chinese Cthulhu feel. However, there is a lack of female awareness. There are many, many male passers-by. The protagonist is referred to as a girl instead of a boy.

It's a very interesting article about cultivating immortality. The author's writing ability is not inferior to that of some authors from Qidian; However, there is a problem with the rhythm of the writing. The biggest problem is that it is "not exciting enough". The heroine is very powerful, hard-working and cautious. I think I want to write a lone wolf heroine who prefers killing and decisiveness. However, it is usually best to end the revenge within a few chapters. This kind of small fights are followed by others, and some brainless villains pester people who cannot see clearly. It is very tiring. What I want to see is the heroine's exploration of the secret realm upgrade stream, but after the heroine joins the outer sect, there are constant trivial matters, and there is a problem with this part of the rhythm. The above is my impression as a reader

The writing style is okay, but the obvious phenomenon is that there are many supporting actors! Too much! The female to male ratio is about 3:7, emm, and I saw that 90% of the more than 60 chapters are senior brothers. The only one who was good to the heroine in the early stage was described as being involved in the relationship. On the contrary, the "senior brothers" accounted for a larger proportion, so the impression is that they are all friendly... There are not many supporting female characters, but there are many supporting male characters. I originally liked the writing style of this book, but why are there so many so-called senior brothers! Emm, there is something I really want to complain about. They are all senior brothers and junior sisters. There is only one senior sister who appeared once (never called her again in the later period). There are no junior brothers. Moreover, women who are obviously top sects rarely appear. Instead, they are portrayed by passerby male costars a lot. You can refer to it yourself.

It's a pretty good slow-burning growth story, I recommend you read it after reading it. There are no major poisonous points in the plot that need to be avoided. The overall plot and character descriptions are very detailed and appropriate. The characters are not black and white and can be seen to the end at a glance. The plot can explain everything clearly most of the time without making people confused. Occasionally, there will be some small foreshadowing and reversal that serve as surprise easter eggs. Those who like slow development will like this arrangement very much. The heroine's personality can be regarded as straightforward and decisive. She has a certain level of pretense, a certain level of morality and knows how to repay kindness, but she also has her own bottom line and principles. Even the savior will find a way to solve the problem when his own interests are involved. Although some people will mind this, as a female protagonist of the video, being able to do this is already rare. However, every cautious and cautious effort of the heroine to gain a chance of survival often ends up with no good results. This kind of plot is a little too much, giving people hope but also disappointing the plot, which can let everyone have a deeper understanding of the cruel reality of the world of cultivation. However, every time we see the heroine struggling but not getting a good result, it is easy to be discouraged, even if we are just bystanders. Just like over and over again, and again, and again, and again, as the plot progresses, the sharing of perceptions between us and the protagonist will be deeper, and we will care more about the protagonist's mood and situation. After going through all kinds of hardships to the end, we thought we were seeing the light of day, but in the end we found that it was just another desperate situation. After repeating the cycle several times, we can Some people may feel desperate and give up. For readers, they click in to read the development article hoping to see some results. However, they find that the heroine will encounter a dead end no matter how she goes. In the end, she may give up after raising her because she cannot see the fruits of victory that the heroine can pick after accompanying her to grow up. Although I will struggle with this kind of plot, it is actually quite good to write it like this. Instead of blindly pursuing the excitement brought by the exciting plot, it is a different flavor to write the story with all the hardships and joys when conditions are ripe. It's just that the plot advances slowly, and there is a tendency for long serialized articles. It is most difficult to follow up on articles like this in the early stages. I can't wait to see the rise of the heroine in the later stages, but once I see the progress, I can only look forward to it anxiously.

It's really good. I don't know why people are so picky. They say that the heroine is a doormat. This is a grassroots cultivating immortality. If you want to see a cool novel about a heroine cultivating immortality, there are a lot of them in 🍅. I just got tired of watching that kind of thing, so I chose to watch the grassroots type. Secondly, the heroine is very ambitious and wants to get involved in everything. I want to say to everyone, others are writing novels and not really cultivating immortality. How can you write something without plot? I talk about farming and cultivating immortality every day. Aren't you bored? The author has deliberately spent a lot of space on the heroine's caution, and has tried his best to pave the way for the heroine's various outings and experiences. But this is how the grassroots female protagonist cultivating immortals wants to develop. The last sentence is, don't give five points for fear of being proud. (I hope the author will work hard to update more)!

I feel that this is not the first time the author has written a book. The plot of the first chapter is very attractive. Every progress and breakthrough of the heroine is very interesting. The plot of the secular world is also very exciting. The author will work hard to write a full-length novel. As a bookworm of ten years, I feel that the rating of this book will rise to above 9 in the future.

Highly recommended, the writing is very good, and the psychological description of the characters is particularly realistic. What I like the most is that the protagonist almost always gets something from his treasure hunt, which is a great article in terms of rewards. This is much more enjoyable than some articles that like to have the protagonist experience nothing but gain nothing, and even post the resources to the people around him. The plot of this article is twists and turns, but the protagonist can always benefit from it, and his cultivation and various skills have steadily increased. Second, there are no entangled interpersonal relationships around the protagonist, and there is not much emphasis on any supporting characters other than the protagonist's experience. This is very good. I only love the protagonist when reading the article. It's not that I don't like to see any supporting characters appear for an extra second when the storyline requires it. The most annoying thing is the kind of novel where the main character is trying to cultivate immortality by dragging along a plane with frequent relationships. This kind of novel will only be described when it is useful for supporting characters. The protagonist's handling of relationships with everyone is in line with my expectations for the protagonist of immortality novels. The best relationship between the protagonist and anyone else is such that the friendship between gentlemen is as light as water. Seeing that there is nothing that makes me uncomfortable now, it is a refreshing article that I prefer. As of the latest update, the logic of the story of Moon Village has become smooth, and the actions of the protagonist also fit the character. However, it is still a little unreasonable and too unsuitable for cultivators. That is, the protagonist is obviously a monk, but his method of dealing with mortals is too simple - when facing a frightened and crying person, he can only "softly comfort"? I feel that the method is weak, which reflects the kindness of the protagonist too much. Instead, there is no sense of immortality. I can neither cast a spell to make them tell the truth, nor can I use a spell to make people calm down. When handling the case, the lack of means makes the protagonist very weak. The logical description has not been very smooth since the Moon Village dungeon. After reading Chapter 224 and some subsequent chapters, I am reviewing it. Starting from this chapter, I entered a Shadow World dungeon. The plot of this dungeon is very unsmooth. The actions of the protagonist seem very inexplicable. The author does not use the inner thoughts of the protagonist to indicate this behavior. The reason for the move is that the medical center exploded for no reason, and then he met several partners. The protagonist also had a headache for no reason. Many chapters have been describing the protagonist's weakness, but even the protagonist himself did not investigate the cause. The readers have been kept in the dark and have no idea what the reason is. What is the purpose of this copy and what is its significance. The plot arrangement of the story seems to be unrelated and has no logical turning point.

It's very good. It's very similar to the traditional fairy tales from a few years ago. It can be seen that the author has a good foundation in writing and the writing is very solid, but it is too short. I also wonder if this is the author's trumpet and whether he has a vest.

It is a particularly good-looking and authentic ancient fairy tale. The heroine is beautiful, and she is struggling to pass every step. It is really all about survival on the edge of life and death. It has a comprehensive description, no surprises, and slow plot development. It is a traditional fairy tale. The proportion of proficiency panels is not high. The heroine is very defensive. She is very cautious, but she is also very humane and has a high proportion of female characters. The heroine is not a brainless golden finger, each one is obtained by herself through hard work and perseverance on the edge of life and death, a type of self-made genius novel.

I've read more than 100 chapters, so I'll update it quickly! ! ! So far, the plot is still tight and exciting, with some flaws in the details, but the plot direction is very reasonable. Although Golden Finger arrived late, the heroine's resilience, diligence, and sense of crisis are all empathetic. Finally, I see that the protagonist is forced to do so by various circumstances, rather than a smart one. I have a small suggestion. For example, in the life-devouring formation in the mortal world and the Baicao Pavilion being used as bait, the heroine only touched the edge of the truth. She doesn't know the truth, but she can't make it unclear to the readers. She can use the perspectives of other characters to clarify the truth, so that the readers will have a more sense of involvement. The world view is grand and it feels like a long novel, and the main character is from the physics department. I want to see the combination of physics and immortality. I look forward to the author's long and steady updates! @ My rice jar