[Don't Become an Oniichan] Chihiro and Mahiro

This book is pretty good, the interactions are engaging, but the way the protagonist overcomes the psychological trauma of being bullied is a bit lacking. Because, sigh, I was bullied in elementary school, and even now I don't want to go out, and I have serious problems socializing. And then there's me, for example. If I changed like the protagonist, I'd probably self-destruct.

This is a rare fanfiction about Beppuku, please keep writing it, author! 💕💕💕 If it's broken, how can I tell it to come back to normal?

It's a good read, and I really enjoy it. The character descriptions are excellent and very faithful to the original work. The main character also has a strong personality. However, the two most recently updated chapters were a bit confusing to me. But I guess I genuinely didn't understand them.

[Please refrain from criticism or insults if you disagree. I'm in a bad mood and will automatically assume that anyone who insults me is dead. You can express your dissatisfaction, but please don't be overly emotional.] I feel the premise of this book is excellent.

In terms of writing style, it's generally good, and it creates a sense of immersion, especially in the protagonist's experiences. Although I've been through similar situations, I can only say that it's truly admirable to have survived such circumstances. He really captured the feelings of both the abuser and the victim. Personally, I think this book is quite good.

I want to write a similar story 😗😗 (Please don't criticize if you don't like it) Ooyama Chin-Yu is a kitten that Chihiro's mother gave her after she was bullied at school. It keeps Chihiro company and likes to sleep on Chihiro's head. 💤 After being transported by the computer, she underwent a change, gaining the ability to understand human speech.

I'll be blunt, Chihiro is someone who could be my mother 😡

Overall, the book is very good 👌🏻, but I think there are a few parts that could be improved (in my opinion). 1. Why can't Mahiro catch the toilet? It happens way too often. 2. Chihiro is too perfect, she doesn't seem like a real person. I feel that one or two minor flaws could be added, such as being afraid of cats and dogs or not being able to drink alcohol.

It's so good! ^ω^ The best fanfic I've ever read about "Don't Be an Onii-chan" ^ω^

Enough said, just two words: beautiful.