Becoming a White-Haired Evil God Starts From Wearing the Ring of Seven Curses

For the time being, it can be regarded as a good novel. There are currently no poison points. The overall performance of the novel is that the protagonist has a high numerical value, and there are some but not many mechanisms. Common ones include directly banning resurrection, direct instant kills at low levels, etc. In addition, the current strength of the protagonist. From the current point of view, there are still some people who cannot be beaten, most likely gods, or some old monsters, but it is enough for the protagonist who has only developed for less than a week, and the novel is only 19 chapters. It is also very fast. …😓 I just finished saying that the writing was good, but I was poisoned by the new plot... The only flaw in this book is probably Edward... Although it was a little bit poisonous in the early stage, at least it was understandable. Let's talk about the flaw here? First It's the issue of Edward's identity arrangement. He met the protagonist because he was chased and then saved by the protagonist. Then the protagonist is very strong. Secondly, there is a green plum who is very good to him and he has been chasing him. Secondly, he went to the library to complete the task assigned by the protagonist and then encountered an assassination. The assassin was a girl. She solved it cleverly and got a reward. Later, he was arranged by his master to form a team with his assassin. And then this master also has a very strong identity and strength. Are you familiar with it? As for the protagonist, there is currently no female character around. All the named female characters currently shipped are around Edward, including the protagonist. The protagonist even lives with Edward. The usual meals are cooked by Edward. The protagonist also gives Edward 500 million gold coins during the process (this book says that this 500 million (Whether the gold coin Edward may not be able to take out)), the mission arranged by the protagonist and Edward in the climate, Edward did not complete, the protagonist who was politically harmed almost had to eat the ectoplasm because of this, and then in the latest chapter (not because of this, it completely exploded me) the protagonist faced the final boss of this copy (although However, it is here to open a plug-in and add a little plot), the protagonist can't beat him (mainly because he can't wait for seconds, and then the protagonist will be beaten to death by him). After that, he got a strategy map for this copy due to his identity in the previous life. After that, the protagonist went to the treasure of the first strategy. At the officially cool moment, the author directly switched to Edward. From the perspective of Edward, Edward was very surprised and unexpectedly entered the first treasure. It usually goes before the protagonist or the protagonist encounters it. I won't say anything about Edward's later memories, but he was so stubborn that he arranged for the protagonist to harvest the plug-in... I can only admire the author's writing style [awkward laugh]

From what I can see now, Edward is the real protagonist. He has a harem, a chance, and an escape from death. The chapters have more scenes and more memorable points than the protagonist. He is also more profound than the protagonist. Let's just change the name to The Road to God Beginning with the Alchemist.

Who is the protagonist? I have no fondness for a certain alchemist at all, and I don't want to see his plot at all... It feels like the male protagonist of an early harem comic has a sense of immediacy.

So the protagonist is Edward, right? [Rolls eyes]

The subject matter is good (≧w≦), the numbers are weird, the writing is invincible, and there are many jokes. It's not too bad, but the number of chapters is too few (in my personal opinion, there were not even 50 chapters when I read it). In short, the author should not stop updating ~ I really want to read the follow-up. (PS: I'm not asking for help. I don't have money to take it. I don't know the author. I'm a pure bookworm. The time is short because I read it on the computer most of the time.) Well, my comments were not rigorous before (although they are almost the same now), but I have to point out that what I saw was the author's revised plot. I didn't see many of the poisonous points mentioned in other comments before (there may be more, but I didn't pay too much attention. As we all know, nothing big will happen if you read without thinking). When I commented, I saw Chapter 50 of the revised plot, so I hope everyone knows.

The plot is very good, the protagonist is a white-haired lolita, very good!!! It makes my lolicon heart spin. I hope the author can write more cute plots and have live broadcasts!!! Cute loli just want everyone to like it, live broadcast more often!!!

The author's writing is good, but the value has increased very quickly. I feel that I can't write more than 200 chapters. It feels like a typical novice online game novel 🤔

I don't have much meaning, I just want to ask which chapter of this book can be read [what]. This Edward made me sick to the point of [vomiting]. I thought it was about a change of marriage. I wanted to leave a negative review and saw that Shen Nong said that the later part is okay. I want to ask which chapter to skip to.

The early stage is very good, and it is definitely a work. But in the later part, I don't know if it is different from the kind of novel that travels into the game in my mind, or something. I don't like it very much. Otherwise, this novel is still worth reading, but I still hope that the author can focus more on Xie Bai [Blow kiss]

To be honest, I don't actually think that having more supporting roles will have any impact, but what makes me most uncomfortable is that Edward found the well in the abandoned village before the protagonist [👽👐I'm crying], and letting Edward find it first was like robbing something that originally belonged to the protagonist (I actually prefer that the protagonist can fully control himself. What I mean by this is that there is no need to be beaten by anything. (Of course, the author has the final say on what the protagonist of a book is. However, this book should not have a group portrait component, so it is not suitable for a more concentrated description of the supporting characters. It may be that the author is relatively new. In short, I classify it as inexperienced) (Although I have made these comments, I do not think that I have the ability to write at the same level as the author) [Originally, the protagonist got the guide, so the things in the guide should belong to the protagonist (later I found out that it was because of the plot design that Edward was asked to discover the well first, and the protagonist actually wanted to complete the 28 achievements himself...) (I mean, all the settings should actually be When the protagonist is the main character, the "game protagonist" setting of the supporting role still needs to make way for the protagonist. Therefore, in the village plot, it must appear that the route to the well is "given" by the protagonist. Edward's movements should be explained after the protagonist decides to complete the 28 achievements himself)] [And in fact, the importance of Edward as the "game protagonist" can be gradually reflected in the future. You know, the importance of a character is mostly due to the amount of text and plot assigned by the author. The author also said that he still lacks experience and does not know how to deal with the ratio between supporting characters and protagonists. Moreover, the protagonist of this book is a favored type that easily arouses protectiveness (after all, she is a white-haired little loli 🤓👍). Readers will have a greater reaction when they see the protagonist suffering, so the protagonist will be criticized because Edward was hungry that time (and in terms of character design, it is even more unsuitable for the protagonist to suffer) (Of course, some necessary pain must be endured. After all, nothing in the world is free, the only difference is who will bear it)] And in fact, I am actually quite tolerant, and I think the author is a fan, so my evaluation is more tolerant & praising the author. And I rewarded Great Health Care (there will probably be more in the future) [The author hasn't created a group yet, please help create one 😘]