My Brother Came Back as a Max-Level Succubus Loli

The setting is not bad, but the gap between the protagonist brother and sister is very serious, and they are very open-minded about the four years of unknown life and death. They are obviously the only relatives who can rely on each other. I don't see any guilt or apology from the brother to the sister. The sister does not care how she has lived alone for four years; Moreover, the gap between the two brothers is too big. The older brother is a boss, has numerous succubi in his harem, has a noble status, and is more tolerant of his younger sister. This makes the younger sister feel awkward as an ordinary person. She always thinks of cheating her older brother, which will make her character look "ignorant" and "can't tell the difference between kings and kings." Some normal interactions will also change the taste. I talked about so many brother and sister issues because I was attracted by the setting of the title "My Brother". At first I thought it was a story in which both brother and sister were the protagonists, but now it seems closer to "I Return to Another World, the Full-Level White-Haired Succubus Lolita"? (Scratches head) Give four stars to encourage new authors (◍•ᴗ•◍).

The story setting is very novel, and potential stocks were invested first.

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Okay, the subject matter is good and refreshing, keep up the good work Subsequent resets can change the perception of the sister to retain more people, or focus on the protagonist and the harem.

The author's writing style is very beautiful, concentrating on one point but not focusing on one point. The mood of the characters seems to be integrated into the scenery he writes about, and the scenery he writes about reflects the characters. The interaction between the sisters is interesting, and their respective experiences are narrated very naturally, which shows the depth of the author's study. All in all, it looks great!! 💕

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After thinking about it, I think it deserves five stars. First of all, the story is very novel. It is not the kind of guide one by one, but it is about taking my sister on a trip after completing the guide (I am sure) Then there are some shortcomings. The first and most important thing is-not royal enough!!! You are a succubus, brother. It is a shame for a succubus to do it once in three chapters. Please greatly increase the frequency of the emperor chapter😋 (fog). I'm kidding, the shortcoming is that I feel like it's not fun enough to watch a male channel. I should "feel obsessed with the situation... Killing bushi" (this idiot has watched too many killings, so here it's just a matter of speculation (getting fired)). When I watch a female channel, I feel that the psychological description is not enough, and I want to see the psychology of the protagonist more, even though four years have passed. The psychology is no longer as good as it was at the beginning (what are you talking about?) In short, the characters don't feel vivid enough (Xoyasu is like this after eating too much, don't worry about it here) and I am curious about the four years of the protagonist (I will definitely write it here, but we are a little anxious, you will write it, right (staring)) In short, I wish the author's literary talent will prosper and the more he writes, the better he will be. Finally, please update 100 times a day, I will do anything.

4 Stars to support new authors. It is my favorite subject matter. When I saw the recommendation on the homepage, I clicked on it. After reading Chapter 9, I felt that some settings were not mentioned, and the plot just emerged. It felt like I was reading directly from the middle of a book. Putting this aside, the white-haired Loli brother is quite cute. In addition, if the time flow rate in the different world is the same as that in the main world, becoming a full-level boss in four years is too exaggerated. I wonder if the author will explain it later.

I thought I was the only one who felt that this sister had a bad look. After reading the comments, I was not the only one who felt bad. The main reason was that the two perspectives were a bit uncomfortable and that the sister had an indescribable feeling. I deliberately went back and took a look and finally found out why I had a bad impression of this sister. In Chapter 6, the sister already knew that the other party would sense it when she said her real name. Later in the chat, she mentioned why her brother was so elegant and dignified. Then she just recalled the pain and said that you have a serious teacher and so on. At this time, as a sister, I didn't care about my brother for the past five years. Seeing the pain on my brother's face, she still asked questions to satisfy her curiosity, which caused the witch teacher behind me to sense and cause trouble later. In the first chapter, he sneaked back and stayed with her for a few days. In the second chapter, he was caught by his sister and went with her to the exploration group.

Our keynote is travel to another world. Seriously. Jpg[Working on draft]