After Canglan's Boss Set His Sights on Me, I Relied on the Comments to Survive

Let me say it before: This review of this book is based on my own feelings after playing Ni Shuihan before and now reading this fanfic. It only represents my personal views on this work. I have retired from gaming now and have almost forgotten some settings. So don't tell me which character is OOC. There aren't many good fan fictions, so don't be so harsh. This fan novel is really one of the best written ones I have ever read. Luo Ming's beautiful and strong character also really touched me. As a person who accidentally traveled through time, he has the instinct to panic when he first arrives at a strange place. He also has the tendency to go alone regardless of opposition when he sees fishermen being caught. He has his own arrogance and persistence, as well as his own ideals and obsessions. He gives me the feeling that he belongs to both Nishuihan and Nishuihan. He seems to have really lived in Nishuihan, so I often forget that he is actually a time traveler in the introduction. As the leader of the Canglan Sect, Luo Xishui needs to consider various consequences in his actions. He needs to minimize the danger as much as possible. Therefore, it is inevitable that he and our other protagonist Luo Mingxiu will have disagreements or even fight. However, no matter how they quarrel, Luo Xishui will always be in danger when Luo Mingxiu She showed up in time when the situation was dangerous, and when Luo Mingxiu wanted to seriously consider the relationship between the two people, she told her feelings generously, sincerely and enthusiastically, and gave him enough time to think about it (although she had been secretly trying to make Comrade Xiao Luo accept it with subtle concern [laughter], but it was still measured) The relationship between the two of them is also very close. A person who is awkward and dare not take a step forward (Luo Mingxiu has an emperor's poison in his body and is carrying a blood feud) should be surrounded by someone who is unwavering and always in love and cannot be driven away no matter what (personal understanding!). Although they are destined to be together from the introduction, at least at this moment they love vigorously and have no regrets. I think this is enough, at least there are no regrets. Finally, can you suddenly make a big explosion and scare me more? It's really not enough! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry] Let me reiterate, the above opinions are all personal understanding! ! ! Does not represent anyone's views Edit: Another feeling I have about the relationship between the two is that it is not so much that Luo cannot accept the gay sexual orientation as he is worried that they will have no future. As a time traveler, Luo will definitely look forward to going home, and going home often means that Luo Yangxiu's personality will completely disappear in this world. Bringing another person's perspective is that the person you have always loved suddenly becomes extremely strange one day. From the perspective of both of them, this love is tragic, so Luo will be very resistant at the beginning. They are both passionate and free, and he does not want this relationship to become a chain that traps them. Then I am honored to understand the core of what DaDa wants to write, and I look forward to the chapters that will become more and more interesting.

This book review is not about fan content haha. I think this new dungeon is very surprising, especially Lin Mo's character creation has taken a big step forward. Compared with Wu Ya, who is also similar to the shadow of the divine halo, the play style of this dungeon, especially Lin Mo's at the end, it is obvious that regardless of her lines or the way she collects and turns disasters into good fortunes, her core is a truly benevolent and compassionate guardian. A person with a compassionate heart, it is her duty to protect the ocean and help sailors return home safely. As the leader, Lin Mo has inherited this mission and is the guardian of the people of the South China Sea. She not only represents Chaoguang, but also represents all the people of the South China Sea. In this copy, especially the lines and details of the clearance method, you can feel a strong sense of responsibility and mission. As the battle progresses, Lin Mo will also show a new "prayer" form, which is simply the incarnation of a god. She can predict good and bad luck, and needs to turn bad luck into good luck and overcome difficulties. This form also enriches her character. And it can be completely distinguished from Wu Ya, who has a divine temperament in appearance, looks full of divinity from the front, has six pupils, and a wide open eye, where illusions arise and die. Wu Ya's language style has obvious ethereal demagoguery and sophistry. She will express her views in a tone that seems to be compassionate and rational, trying to distort facts, confuse people, and let others fall into her thinking trap. After finishing the genre dungeon today, I still found it very touching. Then Boss Luo, hahaha, helped me test the damage twice in seconds hahaha, good guy.

This is the first time I use shock to describe a fan. I am a veteran Nishuihan player. Before I clicked on it, I thought it was just another ordinary time travel guide with all kinds of vulgar plots. It turned out not to be the case. The teacher's delicate writing laid a lot of foreshadowings. When I saw the main controller and Brother Luo getting along, he portrayed the characters very fully, and the plot had ups and downs. I'm also stupid, so I can't say anything gorgeous. I can only say that it's grand and shocking. The various character self-narratives at the end of the whole story make people immersed in the transition of the plot. Great teacher [crying][crying][crying]

It's so good. It's the best Ni Shui Han fanfic I've seen so far🙈🙈. The teacher's writing is really good. I suggest the teacher update 100 chapters a day. It's so good. It's so good. I'm going to become a crazy person now. To be honest, there are very few Ni Shui Han with such good writing in Tomato. I think this one is still good. The fight scene is very well written and satisfying. Good luck to the author.

After reading it, I have a lot to say. First of all, I just came back from school and haven't read the last dozen chapters yet, and I'm also playing Nishuihan. However, I haven't been online often because I'm in school. The following comments are purely my personal thoughts. Please don't scold me. I think the writing in this fanfic is very good. There are not many good fanfics, and there are also many OOC ones. This one is not very OOC, and the characters are well drawn. It is much better than most fanfics. Secondly, while I was reading it, I forgot that Xiu Bao traveled through time. Because it is written as if he has been living in the cold, and it can also describe the beauty, strength and misery of the introduction. Without saying too much, in summary, the image is well portrayed, and you can also see his perseverance, and he is also super cute when he acts coquettishly to his brothers and sisters when he is wronged ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧, and then there is Boss Luo. Boss Luo is also very well portrayed. He considers the loss of personnel when doing things and tries to maximize profits. Of course, he and Xiubao have different considerations, so they had a quarrel earlier because of this. Later, it was also written that Boss Luo changed for Xiubao. He was very nice, very nice [shy][shy], emotional line The writing is not abrupt, the two of them slowly develop feelings for each other, and slowly fall in. Boss Luo just teases Xiu Bao from the beginning and then falls in, worrying about Xiu Bao. It's very good and very good [laughing], and then the characters are also very well written, not just to set off the protagonist, the villain is also written in a way that makes people want to fight ⌯ᐢᗜᐢ⌯ಣ. I won't say more, but in short I think it's worth reading. There are very few texts about Nishuihan, let alone about bisexuals. Some people shouldn't be picky, this is already super good, and even scolding the cook while eating, what do you think? [Pout]. Okk, I'm done, the author must update more! ! ! I watch it when I get back from school [laughs][laughs] Today is September 19, 2025! ! The story of Boss Luo and Xiubao is over! They will live happily for a long time somewhere we can't see! Super well written! ! ! And time flies by so fast, it's all over now! ! I hope you will be happy every day! Be happy! ! So do you readers! ! I also hope that everyone's life is as easy as Rilakkuma. I love you =˃ ᵕ ᵒ=

How to say it? Although the author tried his best to write the emotional line between them, it may have been too fast. I don't even know why they fell in love. In fact, the emotional line can be written more delicately. The sweet story is not sweet enough, the sexual tension is not enough when it is ambiguous, and the sexual tension is not enough when it is sad. To be honest, I don't feel it, but this is not a common problem for new authors. Most new writers have this kind of small problem. Hmm... I am now looking forward to the author's next book. There are still some character issues, but I have sorted them out myself. As a newcomer, the writing is actually okay. After all, writing skills are developed slowly. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement.

The writing is very nice [Sending my heart] What I want to complain about are those people who are not used to it and are complaining about it. If you are really not used to it, just don't read it. [Pout] And they all say that they are the same person. They are complaining about it every day. You really can't stand it and just write a book by yourself. [Awkward laugh]

It's so beautiful. Boss Luo and the protagonist's cps are so good that I can't move my lips. I beg the author for more, (๑> <๑) Hey~ It's so bumpy in front, so cruel in the back

The teacher wrote very well, wonderfully and very funny! So can you tell me there will be a knife in the back? Scared

The plot is well-written and you can see that the author has a lot of intention to create it. There are many private settings in the early stage and the character portrayal is a little OOC. The later stage is much better (praising the chef). He is very diligent in updating. If you want to read the recommendation of Nishuihan fans [like]