
Harry Potter: Stay Away from My Sister
HP:离我妹妹远一点
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- Fantastical Romance
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- Female-Channel Fanfiction
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Harry Potter Fanfiction Rated 9.0 or Higher
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Looking for Recently Launched, Obscure Hidden Gems With Potential
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A feel-good novel with no romance! Any gender is fine~~ The key is that it should be satisfying!
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In a Terrible Reading Slump: I Drop 9.8-Rated Books After Ten Chapters and 9.7-Rated Ones After Five
I'm so out of books to read, but I'm incredibly picky. For *Ten Thousand People Are Browsing*, I made it only thirty chapters before dropping it. I used to read *Dragon King* past chapter 400, but now I dropped *Slay the Gods* after just twenty chapters.
OMG!!! I Found an HP Fic That Blows All the Others Away!
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Harry Potter: Premium Reading Slump Recommendations
The person who posted this has a separate bookshelf category for Harry Potter fanfics, with over 200 books.
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Two Female Leads Rated Above 9.0
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Teacher, the teacher is really beautiful, super beautiful, especially the part where Dursley and Petunia said, "Protect your child. If she doesn't protect her, will she die? Those weird guys say that a dangerous guy took her away. I never think so." "Her child took her away. A child who had nothing to do with me came to me and took my sister away. They are all debt collectors and a group of monsters!" This paragraph is really well written. The teacher is like the god of inspiration from heaven [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
It's really good-looking [shy] [admiring]. Finally, I didn't break up with Lily, and my character design doesn't have occ. God knows how many books I searched for before I could find one that didn't slander Lily [crying]. They were all slanderous about Lily licking Snape, or they were both slanderous.
This is the second book where I felt that the relationship between Snape/Lily/Petunia was written smoothly. I like Penny in this book very much. There is no time travel or paranoia, and the friends she makes are also portrayed with their own characteristics. Her strength comes step by step, and her tolerance is a boost to her family and friends. I really like this story. I hope the ending is cp-free, but everything depends on the author's wishes.
I like the portrayal of this heroine very much. She is very gentle and has a very novel perspective. Just like the food she cultivates, it has vitality, is delicious, and is useful. I haven't seen much of it so far, but there have been two scenes describing the heroine's special characteristics of having morning glories. One was when her senior said she smelled fragrant, and the second was a Christmas gift given to her by Snape. Morning glories also represent It shows diligence and persistence. At the same time, the heroine has also emphasized many times that the original Penny was born in the heroine. Although the two are together, they are different and special entities. They are the most dependent on each other, so that the heroine will not be lonely. When the heroine talks to others, her language will imply it in her body. The soul of the original Penny, although the two of them are not They are one body, but they seem to be one body, and there is another meaning. The former Penny is in the current Penny. The current Penny has the diligence and tenacity of morning glory, and the original Penny in another meaning of morning glory is a short and brilliant life. Moreover, the heroine and Lily get along very well. I like them very much. They are both very alive and can think. The portrayal is very good. Snape is very consistent with the first impression of Petunia in the original plot. Lily is very keen and will defend her sister and will speak out when she feels uncomfortable. And the current heroine Petunia is also aware of this strange relationship. It is a really gentle family. Morning glory also represents loyalty and perseverance, optimism and cheerfulness. The flower written by the author is very consistent with the original Petunia and the current Petunia, their people. Although this flower is often used to describe love, the words of morning glory are also very consistent with the matter of two souls. The eternal dreams, eternal attachment and quiet thinking, as well as the conditions of the two of them. The morning glory vines are intertwined with each other, just like true friends supporting each other, even through wind and rain, this mutually dependent friendship will always be unwavering. I'm halfway through reading it, and the author has his own opinions on each character, which is gentle. Every character, no matter how they are in the original work, has a kind of warmth of family reunion here. Every character who appears, no matter whether they are controversial or not, is written in a gentle way, and is not very bad. The occurrence of the incident is actually very consistent with the innocence of children like them in my eyes. In the original work, the relationship between the parties is tight and the undercurrents are surging, forcing these brainwashed people or various things to have to make... Choices. Moreover, the heroine does not pay much attention to the colleges. She feels that each college has its own characteristics and beauty. I have read Chapter 200 so far. The author wrote about Lily and Snape's breakup, but it was more silent like water, waiting for someone quietly, and found him like this. The sisterly love is so warm, it makes people's eyes light up, and seeing Lily and Petunia now, in this article In the article, Lily has not suffered any grievances or unhappy emotions during the night. Lily has become very brave and will take the initiative to fight back against those malicious people. With strength, those who bully their sisters will be counterattacked the next second. There are also many friends around them who will help them speak and be with them. The heroine is such a vital, tough and gentle person... I hope that your next pain can be exchanged for the smiles of those who continue to protect your family and friends, and you want to pay for it. After three days of pursuit, when there was not much left left, I deliberately slowed down and still had more to say.
It's a subject I like very much. Fan fiction that favors the original work The characters of Lily and Snape are well grasped, and it can be seen that the author has carefully studied the characters of these two people. Especially Snape. In the original work, Snape was a character who highly resonated with Voldemort's thoughts. Because of his native family, he hated Muggles who advocated magic. Although he said to Lily, who was born as a Muggle: everyone is no different. But from the bottom of his heart, he felt that wizards were superior to Muggles, which was why he and Lily later took different paths. Moreover, the aspect of suppressing his inner emotions was also described in the original novel. From beginning to end, he only thought that Lily left him because of the "mudblood" he accidentally blurted out, but he did not expect that Lily would understand that they had already embarked on different paths because of his various behaviors after entering school and his current words of "mudblood." There are not many descriptions of Lily in the article, and I don't have a clear impression of Lily's character, but I very much hope that the author can write about Lily Evans in the movie, putting aside her identity as a wife and a member of the Order of the Phoenix, and just acting as a student at Hogwarts. Looking forward to looking forward to it.
I have read the other two books by the author HP. The protagonists in those two books are very "light", even too light. They are depressing and "light", and their emotions will only be revealed for a moment when they experience certain important events. I think the most interesting thing is that the protagonist is often an extension of the author's will. You can see the author of different periods in the protagonists of different books. The character of Penny in this book is completely opposite to that in the previous two books. She has a strong sense of strength, does not suppress her emotions, and is unwilling to surrender. The atmosphere in the book is also very "live". It can also be seen from this book that the author has probably changed a lot in the real world. I am looking forward to the next book.
It's very warm and the heroine has a very charming personality. A very novel theme, one body with two souls. Penny and Penny really feel good getting along. We are so close that even our hearts resonate at the same frequency. We are the closest people to each other and we will never be alone. "We are born as two people, and we will be two people from birth to death in this life. We will come into this world and leave this world at the same time. No one is closer than us. We will never be alone, and we will never leave each other." Of course the writing is good, "I really like you. Magic is a very mysterious existence in this world. For a wizard, it is the first time to feel the magic flowing in the body, like being watched by a god and being favored. This is a gift and a miracle." Some people think that the heroine is like a little sun, but I think the heroine, Penny, is more like the moon with a faint moonlight, gentle yet firm and brave, optimistic yet delicate.
Looking at it now, Penny is a heartthrob. It's not the kind of person who becomes a millionaire for the sake of being a millionaire, but one who creates his strong personality charm, which is Little Moon. Pei has friends from various colleges. It's a really good friendship.
It's very interesting, a very heart-warming story line, not OOC at all. Although Petunia is ordinary in Snape's eyes, in my opinion, it is not ordinary at all. If Lily is like the fiery red sun, Petunia is like the vines in the woods, inconspicuous but full of vitality. She is not ordinary at all, she has every learning ability. Good friends in the hospital, friends of different races, living their normal lives every day. The only thing I felt a little uncomfortable watching was because the author wrote that Penny looks very ordinary, but of course this is not the author's problem. After all, Penny is also ordinary in the original book, not OOC, it is entirely my problem hahaha
A very heart-warming non-CP fanfic. The setting of this book with two souls in one body is very interesting. Penny who died in the original world and Penny in the new world healed each other. My most solid support is my other self. Magic has not given up on you. Lily is a sister-controller, and Petunia is a sister-controller. Discrimination in the academy has also been avoided very well, such as the controversial bullying incident (it may also be that Petunia's slap is very painful, but under the slap, all living beings are equal [laughs]). The most important thing is that Petunia is not used as a holster, CP Snape, and then secretly blackmails Lily.