Harry Potter: Two Worlds

It's a good read, but it requires some understanding of British politics and official language, but generally the author will write notes, so it's not difficult to understand. By the way, I recommend "Yes, Minister" and "Yes, Prime Minister". The first part writes more about the protagonist's growth background (that is, the civil service system), which may not meet the expectations of some readers for HP fans to "get to the point quickly and start a magical journey." But this is also the theme of the "two worlds" that the article wants to express, just like what is written in the introduction about how non-magical governments view the magical world. Most of the other protagonists in the fanfic still act from the perspective of a person in the magical world. A few of them write about non-magical attitudes and rarely involve the response and behavior of the entire government. The entry point of this book is very unique, I hope the author can continue writing it.

The heroine is of mixed race and indigenous origin during her childhood. The writing is excellent, the plot is novel and reasonable, the characters are three-dimensional and the entry point is unique. The heroine is independent, sober, mature, thoughtful, and observant, comes from an upper-class society, and knows how to advance and retreat (my ideal character😭) There is currently no trace of the male protagonist, and I personally hope there will be no cp, because it is difficult to imagine what kind of boy can keep up with the female protagonist. It doesn't matter if the love line is well written. There isn't much space about the parents, but you can still tell that my mother is free and rebellious, exactly like the person I imagined Alphard would like! My grandfather is the person who gets the most attention. He is a strategist, calm and restrained yet still affectionate. He has a network of people all over the world. He was a former cabinet secretary and civil servant and still has great influence. The relationship between him and his mother is a bit sad. Dozens of chapters of family background were laid out in the early stages, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Even if you don't understand British politics, you won't panic at all. The author explains it in detail. If you really don't understand it, just skip it and it won't affect the development of the plot. I was even planted with ym and ypm, let's see how it goes this year👀 I really want to read the author's book list, it's so well written, and I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it!! 🥺Please be sure to write it down, this kind of writing makes me want to make money!! 😍

The writing is really comfortable and the details are well handled. The early stage is mainly about some explanations of the political situation (history brings ecstasy!) And the portrayal of interpersonal relationships, which is particularly good... Each character is portrayed in such a three-dimensional way. I particularly like the heroine's character, she is independent and sober and has her own unique insights. Ravenclaw deserves it! Ella is really nice! I look forward to her playing Quidditch in the later period, and enjoy your sky~ I am also very moved by the friendship with Hermione (currently only updated to her hiding in the toilet). When I read the original book, I was thinking about how our Miss Hermione is so miserable😭... The best girls! The character of Arnold was also positioned very well. When I saw the part where Arnold read the letter, I really wanted to cry. Everything Elira ever had, plus understanding and freedom - Arnold, you did it. And the heroine's father turns out to be Alphard Black! I'm kind of looking forward to the scene when I meet Sirius later hahahaha (there will be a plot of returning to Black's old house, I want to see the reactions of Kreacher and Walburga) All in all, a great book~recommended for everyone to read!

The writing is excellent and fluent, and many of the stories involving British government affairs are very professional and easy to understand. The protagonist is very three-dimensional and attractive, and each supporting character is also described very vividly! The rating for such good writing will improve quickly 😘

Very creative angle of entry. It details the history of the relationship between the Minister of Magic and the Prime Minister, and also relates to the craze for research on supernatural abilities that was prevalent around the world in the 1980s. The protagonist is a girl who was influenced by British civil service education. She has the curiosity and innocence of a little girl and can handle interpersonal relationships skillfully. The magical world was originally just information from the heroine's grandfather. As the protagonist enters school, the veil of the magical world is gradually lifted and becomes clear, and the protagonist wants to further explore the magical world. The difference between the magical world and the ordinary world lies not only in magic, but also in the rules of social operation, people's different perceptions of various things such as injuries and talents, and even ways of thinking. I hope the author will write better and better in the future.

This is a HP fanfic with a novel angle, cleverly integrating British politics and the magical world, just like adding cocoa powder to a cake, introducing a new flavor, novel but not obtrusive. The author's writing is powerful, the story logic is clear, the characters are full of influence, and the history is rigorous. In fact, compared to Ella, what attracts me most is my grandfather. My grandfather's language has the restraint and obscurity unique to civil servants, and he tells us the world picture of the late 20th century. The British humor from time to time sweeps away the seriousness, and implicitly expresses his love for his family. His view of the world is rational and cold, full of Cold War official colors. This, together with his rich life experience, constitutes his personality charm. I believe that the author who can create such a character is also a knowledgeable and sharp-thinking person in reality. Many novel authors write works based on the magical world, but few write HP fans based on the real world. This is the first one I have encountered, which makes me more and more curious about the subsequent development. Judging from the current structure of the article, this article will not only tell a conventional story about defeating Voldemort and ushering in peace. Will Ella be the one to break the invisible "Iron Curtain" between the two worlds? How will the art of balance for "non-magical people" profoundly change the wizarding world? I really look forward to the development of the subsequent story, and I hope the author can make more updates [Blow kiss] P. S. When I was reading, I always imagined my grandfather and Ella to be Harry Hart and Eggsy in "Kingsman" 🤔 I can only say that for this image of an elder who has gone through many years of hard work, but has shown complete care and guidance to the younger generations, a clear and stupid college student like me is completely unable to resist, and can only abandon my armor. P. P. S. I found out that the author followed me. Is this the original fan welfare? Hahaha. One more thing I have to complain about is that some parts of the article gave me a faint human-machine feeling. Maybe I am too sensitive, but since gpt-4, I have PTSD when I see the "not but" transition sentence. I feel uncomfortable writing it myself 😂

Super well written! Big cheers for the author! Faster and faster! This article gives me a sense of rational and restrained beauty, structuring two completely different worlds from a political perspective. I love Arnold and Cecilia so much! Arnold is a patient guide for Ella, guiding Ella to understand the world in multiple dimensions. For Cecilia, I admire her more. From the daughter of a pastor to the wife of a high-ranking government official, the cognitive differences brought about by class crossing, it seems that Cecilia should have been a little painful when she first married Arnold, right? The elderly Cecilia gave me the feeling that there was a certain degree of progress and retreat, and she herself became part of that system. This transformation is like throwing a person who doesn't know English at all into a pure English environment to survive, right? I feel like she is so powerful. The interaction between grandparents feels so loving, that kind of tacit understanding that belongs to an old couple.

It's great. It's the first time I've seen the magical world from another angle. The identity of the heroine brings this perspective to a different level. The description of some things related to the British high-level government is very interesting. It's like watching a drama. Some of the dialogue flowed into the cerebral cortex along my eyes and then disappeared hahahahahaha. I just saw the letter from Hogwarts. I'm really looking forward to the story behind it. The most important thing is! The author's writing style is very good. It's rare to see such a good writing style in Tomato!

A very novel perspective, like the County Party Committee Courtyard version of Journey to the West, the political and power struggles in the magic world and the real world are connected. The heroine is not only among the best in magic and professional skills, but also in diplomatic skills. I am looking forward to the subsequent development, especially the part where Umbridge comes later~

So far I have only read the first few chapters about arriving in London, and I have a good impression. It may be a bit obscure for people who don't know British history (like me)... But it is logically rigorous and more based on reality. The writing style is my favorite type, and the setting is also interesting to me. When I quit it, I found that it was a completely new book and I realized that I had to follow a long way to follow it. And seeing that it is a child generation, I don't know whether the follow-up will interact with the original plot. By the way, the current AI covers are very unfavorable and seriously inconsistent with the impression of the writing style. Although there are a lot of AI-generated novel covers now, I still can't help but hope that thoughtful creators can avoid using AI-generated images.