If Bella Had a Child

WC boss, your writing is really awesome. . The plot and characterization are the best among Tomato HP fans. . There are very few OOCs, and unlike some novels that have too many personal settings to look like fan fiction, the rhythm is also very awesome, and the style is very similar to daily dramas. And what I like most is that the style can be freely switched between dramas and comedy. Daily life is very relaxed, and seriousness is very reliable. This kind of setting is the best in the world!! There are no shortcomings except for the fact that the author is not in good condition in the first few chapters and the plot is a bit confusing and it is being serialized in one go. !! Why is such a beautiful book not popular😭😭😭

Very good! Unlike the original work and many fan fictions, Harry must be from Gryffindor House, and he became a member of our Snake House, but isn't this the charm of fan fiction? When the initial choices are different, will the development of the story continue as history, or will new sparks arise, and how will the character's personality change? Novelty + creative imagination, this is really the joy of fan fiction 😆. If you can't accept or resist, it is recommended to read the original work 99 times, because that is the template and world you believe in

A very excellent HP non-CP fanfic, too good to be described. Malfoy, who puts his family and interests first, Deura, who never feels at ease and resolutely embarks on her own path, another possible snake house, Harry Potter, Cedric, who is willing to strengthen loyal friendship, the only uncle in the Death Eater family who truly cares about his niece, Samuel who guides Deura's growth... There are few overlaps between the plot and the original work. Except for the major nodes that have not changed much, the fate is changed by the efforts of the three children. Even Dumbledore gave up the original route arrangement. "The savior is the savior, and Harry Potter is Harry Potter." Snake Ha has walked his own path, which may be more difficult and lonely, but he has friends who will never doubt him, gains a friendship that is stronger than love, and grows into a wise, firm and reliable adult. This is another development that the original Shi Ha could not imagine. As the eldest of the trio, Draco is more responsible and responsible than other fanfics, and he realizes his responsibilities as Malfoy earlier. Maybe from the task arrangement, he is considered dispensable and has little contribution, but without Draco, there would be no trio. He is the nail that connects the three protagonists, a neutral Malfoy, and a Malfoy who is loyal to his family and interests. The original heroine Deura was "born bad" and was taught little by little by Samuel to understand right and wrong. She is more like a replica of Tom Riddle's childhood, with more difficult sewer survival and street wandering, and more twisted family relationships, but Father Samuel is like a lighthouse on the sea and brings her back to the harbor and her real home little by little. She is a person who is more determined than Tom Riddle, understands love and friendship better, and knows the difference between right and wrong. Deura, who once had expectations for her parents but failed to get a normal family relationship, a child who was not expected to be born, the person who carried the sin of killing Voldemort, the last successor of Lestrange, Draco's sister, Harry Potter's friend, and an outstanding Slytherin student - together constitute a Deura Lestrange.

It's very interesting. I think this is also one of the top categories in fan fiction. The heroine initially talked about dividing Ravenclaw, but due to some uncontrollable reasons, he went to Slytherin, but this did not obscure his light. I really think it is very interesting, and I hope it will have a good ending. If you are more interested, you can really try it. The heroine in it is calm and self-possessed, has her own brain, and can think on her own. I think if he comes to the Muggle world, he must be very good at mathematics 😫 I hope I don't stop updating. The author needs to keep at it [star] Squeeze your score. If your score is too high, you will most likely be banned.

It's really super good-looking, all the members have online IQs, and the Snake Yard is also very novel. Moreover, this is the most Slytherin Harry I have ever seen. He will not be reckless like the one in the original book. He has his own ideas and persistence, and he will not let the wind lead to rain. The relationship between the three little ones is really impressive. It is Harry who is willing to put his life in the other's hands even if he does not know the other's plan; it is Yura who is still willing to care about Harry with Draco when he is exhausted due to the Dark Lord's mission; it is also the arrogant and noble young master who shows his fragile side in front of his sister and friends. Harry's IQ is really super online. Is this the charm of Snake Ha? The dark Harry is really attractive. Harry threatens others with a smile on his face, and even turns around and asks Draco, "Am I your savior?" Draco replies, "Yes, my savior." There is an inexplicable sense of fate, which really pokes me. It makes me feel that the good, impure, bad, and incomplete young master in the movie has been saved and met his savior in this world, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! There is also the friendship between Ced and Yura. I really disliked them at the beginning, but later I found that I still prefer unforgettable friendship to love. Sure enough, the little badgers are all little angels ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з And Yura, I like it very much when he and the Dark Lord are in the same frame. It's not a knock, but the feeling of a strong duel. It really pokes me. It feels like every conversation between the two of them is a confrontation. If you are not careful, you will fall into the abyss. I really like it!!! I hope Yura can be a free crow, and after everything is over, she can go see the scenery she wants to see and do what she wants to do with Chocolate! Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author. The writing is really good, and all the members have no OOC, so remember to call me when the teacher runs away!!! I really can't lose you!!! ૮₍♡>𖥦< ₎ა

It's so good to watch, I like the heroine so much, and Cedric hopes there will be a good ending so that he doesn't die 😢, the heroine doesn't want to die in the end, Harry and Xiaolong are so cute, don't let anything happen to these four little ones, I really love it 😘 Come on, author!

Keep writing along the plot, I believe you can do it. Come on, author, I really like the heroine's character. Oh my gosh, especially the part where she and Harry argue, holy shit, I think I could watch it ten times. Furthermore, an extremely protective, crazy, cold-blooded, rational person... Oh my God! So exciting.

Ahhhh!!! I really liked it 😘 Both the characterization and the plot development were very nice 💕 The lasting and soul-deep friendship of the trio, Father Samuel's gentle love and guidance, Ced's promise to always be a friend, Rabastan's awkward love for Yura, even Rodolphus's death curse without murderous intention at the end, Bella's complicated emotions, and Tom's resignation and dissatisfaction. There is no absolute standard for judging right and wrong. Taking responsibility for one's own mistakes is also a matter of valuing the lives of oneself and others. Eleven years of Azkaban brought a lot, but also lost a lot. Deura is not an unloved child. The priest and chocolate will accompany her in their own way. May God bless Deura with a smooth journey.

The heroine Yula is smart, powerful, calm and curious, talented and capable, a very good Slytherin! The strategist of the trio, the big daddy in strategic guidance, and the external brain of Draco and Harry! Harry in the Snake Yard is very novel. He is not a simple and extreme black savior, but a feeling that he has become obviously transparent and smart. This is under the influence of Yura and Draco. Looking at it recently, there is even a feeling of being put out, especially when I was being judged, the words I complained about were so cool to watch! The original Father Serriol is also very magical, a man full of wisdom and powerful spiritual energy. If he were a wizard, he would be the real Dark Lord! To promote changes in the magical world, we definitely still need smart and provocative people. The author's style is also very humorous, and he describes animals such as Basilisk, Nagini, and Cat very vividly and a bit cutely. There are also some psychological descriptions of the characters → complaints, which make people hahaha

It's great. Deura, Malfoy, and Harry are the best trio. The ending was so sad, I kept crying while reading it. I really thought that the priest was dead and Deura was dead too. I never felt this way when reading other books. I would think it must be he, but the author's writing style in this book is really good. I really thought it was be. Fortunately, Deura is still alive and so is the priest. There is another character who impressed me deeply, the little uncle. From the beginning, he didn't like Deura but later he expressed dissatisfaction with her integrity. He is also a relatively important guardian to Deura. It's sad to think that the little uncle stayed in Azkaban until his death. Deura also stayed in Azkaban for eleven years. She was not yet an adult when she first entered. She was forced to kill people and hated Voldemort. There is also Deura's father. He probably loves Deura more than Bella. He probably wanted Deura to fake her death by issuing the fatal curse in the end. I don't know, but he even gave it to himself in the end. He also came to accompany Deura. I was really sad and sad when I saw this. Overall, the author's writing is very good and it's worth reading!!!