I'm an Immortal Witch from the Start, and You Call Me the Villain?

This book has strong versatility and average countermeasures. The main problem is that the plot twist and duration are short. It does not have enough emotional dps and the details are weak. But the good innovation gives this book a strong ability to attract readers. However, compared with books in the same category, the performance is mediocre. If there is a lack of such articles in the bookshelf, you can add it to the bookshelf as appropriate. Overall, the strength of this book is a big one [Like]

Good food and good writing - a witch game with a popularity system theme. The protagonist of Weibai (Wife Chasing Crematorium [laughing]) is an immortal witch. The plot is smooth without losing its ups and downs, and the interaction between the supporting characters is good. It mainly relies on using vests to attack the protagonist group and the players, while also laying foreshadowing. The highlights are great and there are no negative points so far. But~ the poor author didn't get the recommendation [face covering]

From the very beginning, the idea of ​​creating a clone and making a grand sacrifice was, to be honest, a bit disappointing. It's better to be a real behind-the-scenes person, not visible to others, with an independent plot. You can also be a plot commentator, similar to Star Iron's Black Swan

I can only say that you can watch it purely because of the main character, Sword Man. Some other little logic is very strange. The protagonist, as the ageless witch, actually does not have a doppelgänger behind the scenes, but changes her appearance and appears in person. The author said it was single, but this is suitable for using a clone as a behind-the-scenes person. It doesn't make sense even if you are on the stage in person.

I have my own ideas about the plot and setting, but there are so many such articles written that it doesn't read as anything special. Chapters 59 to 70 are all from the player's perspective and may be written continuously later. It can be completely separated and interspersed to form a plot review of more than ten chapters. I can only say that I am completely immersed in my own artistic creation.

It's beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the author's writing style is good. I can't wait to read the book and the player will cry inside the knife Livia knitted [heartfelt]

It's very well written, I hope I can finish it

If the subsequent writing is good, this book will be a potential stock. I am optimistic about your author and must continue to write it.

Hundred, married, single?

There are only 13 photos at the moment, which is a bit too embarrassing. Can you write less embarrassing content like this? The rest of the story is actually okay, and the writing is okay too, but it's just too awkward.