
I'm an Immortal Witch from the Start, and You Call Me the Villain?
开局成不老魔女,你说我是反派?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 211k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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Synopsis
Other names
- Transmigrating into a Gacha Game: The Villainess? The Witch Miss Is Pure Through and Through穿越二游:反派?魔女小姐白切白Alternate title on Fanqie
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74Reads · 30 days
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This book is versatile with average strategic depth. Its main problems lie in the short duration of plot twists and insufficient emotional impact. The handling of details is also somewhat weak. However, its good innovations give it a strong ability to attract readers, but compared to other books in the same category, it is rather mediocre. If you lack similar works on your bookshelf, you may consider adding it. Overall, this book is a strong contender. 👍
A decent read, well-written—a popular theme based on a witch game's popularity system, slightly yuri (with a "wife-chasing-after-the-cremation" plot 🤭). The protagonist is an immortal witch. The plot is smooth yet full of twists and turns, and the interactions between supporting characters are good.
The trope of immediately creating a clone and sacrificing grand gestures is, frankly, a bit too overused. It would be better to remain truly behind the scenes, unseen by the public, with an independent storyline. One could even act as a story narrator, similar to the Black Swan in Star Iron.
The only reason to read it is to watch it purely for the protagonist's swordplay; some of the other plot points are quite illogical. For example, the protagonist, an ageless witch, doesn't create a clone to orchestrate events behind the scenes; instead, she changes her appearance and acts personally. The author claims it's a single story, but a clone would be more suitable for this behind-the-scenes role. Her personal involvement makes it hard to believe it's not a single story.
The character design of Viya, the protagonist, is a bit strange. Is it a matter of perspective? The omniscient viewpoint feels too disjointed; she acts differently in front of everyone. Or is it because the protagonist's acting wasn't good? Sometimes the character changes drastically without any transitions, making it feel abrupt.
The plot and setting have their own ideas, but there are too many stories like this, so it doesn't feel particularly special. Chapters 59 to 70 are entirely from the player's perspective, and this might continue later. They could have easily broken up the interwoven elements, but instead, they've forced a ten-plus-chapter recap of the plot. It's safe to say they're completely immersed in their own artistic creation.
It's great! The theme is fresh, and the author's writing is excellent. I can't wait to see the players weep bitterly inside the knives woven by Livia! 💕
It's well-written; I hope it will be completed.
If the later parts are well-written, this book will be a promising one. I have high hopes for you, author, please keep writing!
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