Huh? I Fell into the Dark Realm and Was Corrupted into a Witch

You can continue to divide long paragraphs into several paragraphs. In addition, the witch creation at the beginning feels like a grassroots team meeting together, without that awesome feeling.

Why did the author stop updating? (Already crazy)

I want to see the moment when my sister knows the identity of my brother as soon as possible 😏

Accept Lord Gray Wind's praise.

There are fewer books that have changed orders now. I would like to give you a good review. I hope the author can persist in writing this book and develop to high quality.

It seems okay. I would like to ask if the heroine in the back is on the magical girl side or the dark side?

It's me again. Apart from the problem of paragraphing at the beginning, if you read further, this book is quite good. The characters are vivid, the plot is smoothly connected, and the scenes are well drawn. The only drawback is that the protagonist's current perspective may cause discomfort (but this is part of art). It can be seen that the author is working hard to learn and revise. In fact, this word count is not suitable for writing a long review. The reason for writing this now is to expose the author (ps: when will it be updated)

Oh my God, this writing style and technique are much better than some conventional magical girl + witch stories 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

This is not a traditional and formulaic Mahou Soju novel. There is no conflict between the identity and performance of the protagonist, but it is still a single character, a love letter in a dream 😢 😢 😢 I feel bad when I see this kind of book with a score of only 6.6

As expected of a science student, his writing is too scientific 🤦