Western Fantasy: An Atypical BE Comic Rescue Guide

The book is really good and every character is very good, but when I read it, I always felt that the perspective was a bit messy. The storyline is a bit fast and I always feel like something is missing. Although I personally like to watch the protagonist who can get through it with just one click, I think the growth process of the protagonist in this story still needs to be a little bit of a wandering story to better reflect the story in the first few chapters of this story that human civilization was almost wiped out by the devil. I think the author paved the way for more emotional processes. If he cuts it again, it can better reflect the situation of that era. @ At this point, I suddenly remembered a sentence from a certain story I saw. When you hesitate to do something, you actually already have a choice in your heart, but you don't have enough reasons to convince yourself. But what you need to know is that the God of Luck comes often just because you took another look, thought, and took an extra step. If you don't chase, you will never have it. If you don't move forward, you will always stay where you are. As long as the road is right, don't be afraid of the distance. Set out for the moon. Even if you can't reach it, you can stand among the stars. The slowest walker as long as you don't lose your goal. You can also walk faster than people who wander aimlessly. As long as your heart is determined, no genetic or psychological trauma can control you. No matter where you are, no matter what happens to you, your destiny is determined by you. You can still choose the future now. Come on, it feels a bit like a book written by a novice to practice writing.

Overall, I think it looks okay, but the perspective is very... Well, maybe I'm not very used to the first person. I can't help but be drawn into it when I read it, which is a bit weird. So, I think I will replace my characters with the protagonist's name, so it will look much better. Except for the person issue, overall it's okay. I think the character development of the protagonist is okay. The protagonist's character is very cute. (Personal pronouns are actually not a big problem, mainly because of myself) The only thing is that sometimes I feel that the connection between each chapter is not very good, and I feel that I suddenly jump from the perspective to narrate another thing, and my brain is a bit frozen. I think if you want to jump from one perspective, for example, every other page, you can write a little bit of the previous content before writing the next one to let us know that it is a jump in perspective, or give it a little transition. I think it will look better this way, and the editing will be better, making the reader more comfortable. In fact, there is no big problem. The author's writing is still very good. I feel that the connection between each chapter can be enhanced [blowing kiss]

I like it very much. ꒰^ↀωↀ^꒱❤❤ Although I have read many Western fantasy novels, this one is indescribably delicious. I thought that Western fantasy novels with college themes would be very boring, but I have almost never seen traveling (I have read about traveling, but the writing is very boring). The writing is very interesting, and the plot is also very novel. At first, you may feel that the writing is a bit novice, but the more you read, the writing gets better and better, and the author is also making great progress (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ. This is a plus! I revised it a lot before I dared to post it. I was really afraid that some of my words might accidentally dissuade others, because the writing in big letters is really good. Anyway, please read it to me! վ'ᴗ' ի The only flaw in this book may be that so few people have read it. There are only 17 book reviews besides me, but come on, author, I believe you will have more and more fans in the future, more and more people will like you and this book, and more and more people will reward you. This is all a matter of time, but I believe it will be very soon. V վ Because I really, really like you and your writing (๑´ڡ`๑) (This is my first time posting a long review, so I'm so nervous (๑>m<๑) The writing is very good, very novel, and the plot is very interesting, but. Why did the author stop updating? Tonic. ᕦ༼༎ຶ_༎ຶ༽ᕗ Dad, please, please, don't stop updating థ౪థ Editor 3: It's okay, it's okay, just don't give up and don't abandon the article (≧w≦)

It's a very interesting book. It's slow-paced. Although the protagonist is a bit lonely on the outside, he actually likes to complain. Sometimes he will complain on the outside. But for the protagonist, he always wants to go home, but he has no home. He has some psychological problems and low self-esteem. He thinks that no one will wait for him (or no one will love him?), And there are two ID cards in the system. The one currently used by the protagonist is a pure mage and the other is a necromancer (I want to know what situation will use this identity in the future plot). The protagonist of the original comic is a rebirth. After experiencing all the despair and sadness, when he returns to the beginning of everything, a brand new variable appears that has not been seen in the past. In order not to repeat the same mistakes, I want to hold on to this hope (? But in some aspects, I still don't believe in the protagonist (that is, I ignore the protagonist's strength and think he needs to be protected), but it has changed. The interactions with other protagonists are particularly loving. I like the plots of writing letters to each other and the little habit of remembering each other. I like it very much.

The writing is young, but the progress is visible to the naked eye, and the content is quite novel, but sometimes it's a bit incomprehensible. Come on, I hope you won't stop updating [Like][Like][Like]

It's great to watch, but the change of perspective is messy, and the protagonist's character is well developed.

It looks good, I hope the author won't stop updating it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's good-looking, and the subject matter is relatively new. ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ I was attracted by the cover when I first saw it.

The person switching is a bit messy, but it's very interesting. Come on, author. I want to read this book Rise🥰

So beautiful 😍Goddess, I will follow you forever