I Became a Magical Girl, and Now I'm Under Arrest

It's barely a good book, and it looks pretty good. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is the male body (the male body will change into the appearance of a magical girl, and is currently a handsome boy like a girl). I went to get a short haircut. Imagine your brother (such as Cai Xukun) suddenly had his hair completely cut. The shaved look feels quite inconsistent. I am an old reader of this kind of novel (sexual transformation), otherwise I would not have more than a thousand fans. I am not the only one who thinks so about the hair problem. I hope the author can improve it and your book can become better. Come on (*≧▽≦) How should I put it? The plot about Ji Yuting (the little girl who was kidnapped together with the protagonist) may be the downfall of this book. As a supporting character, her length is too long and she is also quite depressing. Taking up so many words, I hope she can play a bigger role later. If it is to promote the development of the plot, the update speed can be faster. After all, many readers including me have been following it for a week and basically can't see the protagonist. Some of them are contrary to Tiangang.

It's very interesting. Since the forced transformation didn't go back for 3 hours, let's extend it a little longer and go back after more than 10 hours. In this way, the protagonist has to set aside 10 hours every day to transform. It's hard to tell from the back. The supporting character in the front almost has more scenes than the protagonist. Who is the protagonist? The male-to-female protagonist is a story about a magical girl. The little girl is the protagonist. It's a coming-of-age story about an abuser in the early stage and a darkening in the later stage.

Generally speaking, it's okay. However, from Chapter 50 to Chapter 55, the protagonist does not appear. The subsequent appearances are basically guest appearances. From Chapter 60, the role of the protagonist gradually increases. I think it is not necessary to write so many things about Ji Yuting and Ji Xinxue, but it may make readers If you don't understand who the protagonist is, it may just be to explain the background, but you also need to understand the priorities. This part can be omitted. If not, the protagonist must appear at least once in each chapter. Moreover, this part is relatively boring (personal feeling), and not many people can persist in reading it. I personally guess that between chapters 50 and 60 is one of the reasons why most readers abandon the book. The protagonist has too few roles and the plot is dark, making readers confused about who the protagonist is. If the plot cannot be skipped, they should speed up and finish this part. All in all, this book is pretty good [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

There is still room for improvement in the first few chapters. From chapter 10 onwards, we get to the part that everyone loves to read. I won't reveal too much, but as a 10-year old bookworm, I can confirm that this book is indeed quite good. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, if it is rated normally, it is basically It is about 9 to 9.3. I also hope that the author will not abandon this book and continue writing. After all, the current rating of this book is really scary. I am a little afraid that it will suddenly be discontinued one day. There are indeed not many good books that meet our appetite. Please give it a boost, author. Although the pace is marked as fast, the progress of the relationship is a bit ridiculously fast. I just brushed it off in one stroke, and it even felt a bit frivolous and uncomfortable. Let's wait and see.

It looks good. It would be even better if it was 100. I can accept it as long as it's not a change of marriage [laughs]

Miss you prison dream @ [crying]

Not bad, forced to transform for 6-8 hours every day? Then it seems that I will transform at night when I sleep.

Different from the introduction, the plot is a little slow, and the role of the male protagonist cannot be seen until more than 50 chapters. The burden of repaying kindness is not as toxic as the lack of any action at present. Later, the protagonist becomes smarter and can see that he has to pay more to repay the kindness.

The pace could be faster, there are already 60 chapters, and the time has not passed a few days, and there are no scenes where the protagonist's battle escalates. They are basically encounters and dealing with messes, and it is easy to lose interest after watching it for a while. Come on [blow a kiss]

I finally found it. There are so few books of this type that I can't even read them. Come on, author [I'm about to cry]