The Whole Mess Between a Vampire and a Paladin

First of all, I can say that this book is well written. Although there are some problems (① the combat power is not clear, ② there is no specific description of the world view, ③ the description of battle scenes is poor, ④ the description of specific economic aspects is very low), but it is a very good novel to read, relatively readable, and it is a novel that is more creative than written.

To be honest, when I saw the name, I thought it was one of those old clichés. I didn't expect it to be quite amazing. The protagonist no longer starts as a rookie but as the man behind the city. It's quite amazing. The characters are very vivid and have their own standpoints and IQs. The protagonist also uses a lot of modern knowledge to improve his strength and develop a strong sense of urban immersion. It can be said that it is the food that has come out recently. It's just that the fighting aspect needs to be improved a bit, it's not as exciting in this aspect.

I personally feel that the writing is quite good. The beginning and the abilities of the protagonist are quite attractive, but it feels a bit like a group-oriented novel. If the frequency of the protagonist's appearance is reduced for a long time, it will lack attraction and sense of substitution, and at the same time make people lose the main line. I don't have the desire to be read anymore. There don't seem to be many people reading this book at present, but the book itself is still good. It just lacks traffic. You can write 200,000 words first to attract a wave of traffic, or you can ask readers to promote it more in the author's comments. If you stick to it, it will get better [Like] [Like] [Like] I feel that the protagonist "dotes" on her sister a little too much. At present, I only see the protagonist's investment and care for her sister and her boyfriend. I don't see the description of the value and dedication of the role of sister to the protagonist. It feels to me that the role of sister is a bit like a burden to the protagonist.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, White Mask would have died after this wave of M4 six-fold fire. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang Tu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Danking is proud, don't show off in front of the national football team." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks and his sympathy for Junior Wa. Fortunately, before his death, a helpless Q captured Junior Wa's mother to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

The protagonist has a relatively high level when he appears. There is no plot where the protagonist is busy running for promotion, allowing the novel to focus on the story itself. The characters in the book all have their own thoughts and beliefs. The most important thing is that they have normal IQs. The novel describes the bottom, middle and high levels very well. All in line with The basic characteristics of his class are also very logical. I've read sixty chapters, it's probably a group novel, and I haven't locked onto the protagonist for a long time. The perspective makes the story too monotonous, and the description of the supporting characters is also inadequate. Everyone is a human being of flesh and blood. Looking forward to the next story

It's a good-looking, non-traditional vampire story. The protagonist will go his own way (different from other vampires) and has a strong background. The vampire family is not the strongest, but it is also top-notch [cool]. At the same time, the protagonist is not simply improving his strength, but wants to do a great cause. The protagonist also has to establish his own power [blowing kiss]

Western fantasy, not an orthodox Western fantasy, but it's pretty good-looking. The writing is smooth and natural, and the narrative is gentle. The setting is not novel, but it's still pretty cool to watch. The story of the protagonist as a vampire develops his power to transform society. Since there are not enough words at present, it is basically not developed, but it is worth reading.

Rating: Three and a half stars Guide to entering the trap: It is considered a half-group portrait, behind-the-scenes flow, expect the protagonist to pretend to be big, and be cautious about entering the Magic Industrial Revolution. Personal perception: As a semi-group portrait novel, each character has its own characteristics, the descriptions are vivid and have memorable points, and the characters are all well grasped, with a score of 70 or above on Tomato (Because I was blown away by the ghost ship part, although the author has an explanation) I originally thought it was a suppression of combat power, but after reading the author's explanation More difficult to stretch without any foreshadowing Let the protagonist lose his strength for the recognition of "will" Without knowing the setting of "will" I have no idea why it is necessary to obtain the recognition of "will". It is very abrupt. As the protagonist of the chaotic good faction, he considers his subordinates and himself to be important. Why do we need to ensure the safety of the "experimental field"? Even though the protagonist was sleeping at the time and there were only a few bonds, why not change to another "experimental field"? I keep saying that I am not doing charity, but my behavior is to save everyone? In this plot, except for the Paladin and the union president who are working, what are they saving when all the high-level professionals run away? Just to highlight the nobility of the protagonist? Come out and save all the civilians? The protagonist's self-analysis and behavioral separation Although I am dissatisfied with this plot, I still agree with other aspects.

Yes, yes, basically the logic is self-consistent, holy but not mother There is a holy heart and holy power, but if you are not a saint, everything that is perfect is false, because only falsehood can make you perfect. As long as it is real, grounded, and existing in this world, there will be shortcomings. Use his strength to offset my shortcomings, and use my wisdom to support your strength. Cooperate with each other, unite as much as possible and move forward as much as possible. Not bad, not bad. The protagonist is well designed, and the world view is well designed. At least that sense of reality is really rare in novels.

This book is really good. The author carefully depicts a vivid world and presents his fantasy to everyone. At present, I think the 88 chapters are an excellent work according to my own level. I can read it in one go. There is no other system in this book that makes the protagonist fuss. It is just that the update is too slow. You can write it well first and wait for this book to accumulate experience and gain a reputation before it will be read by the audience. And I would also like to remind you that if you rely on novels to make a living, the author should give up and just treat it as a side job, because it is free in itself, and even if there are many readers, they will give it to others for free. You can watch it. Come on. Why isn't anyone watching? I feel like this book should get a score of 8!