Another World: A Dungeon Leveling Journal

This is a slow-paced dungeon construction story with well-managed settings and is worth a read. The author is very active, interacts frequently with readers, and accepts submissions from readers. I just feel that there are too few traps at each level, and the protagonist's current levels are too few, so I always feel that my ability to withstand stress is relatively weak. Overall it's pretty good, nothing bad about it. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. 😄😄😄

It's okay, it's very interesting to write. The protagonist is not a virgin, the adventurers are not brainless, and the characters are very fleshed out. There is just no story line in the dungeon. It would be nice if there was a background story related to the dungeon itself as the main line. I have read 92 chapters so far.

The dungeon construction article is generally good. The writing is not very good but it is definitely readable, and the author is very active. If you have any questions in the article, you can tell the author directly. At present, at least I feel that the current dungeon is a bit too barren in terms of creatures, decorations and space. I have now read Chapter 17. It is now a three-story dungeon with five extraordinary creatures. Level development and creation of extraordinary creatures are done by adventurers who are about to conquer the lower levels. There is no buffer zone. The current three floors are all caves, there is no boss at the end, and the mechanisms are relatively naive. Of course, this may be some discrimination caused by me reading too much other dungeon texts. Don't read it if you are too soft-hearted. The protagonist of this book is quite hostile to adventurers.

The story is overall complete, with no obvious logic or common sense problems, and a lot of details. It can be seen that the author is very careful. However, the protagonist has little interaction with others due to the setting, so the sense of existence is slightly low. It seems easy to put yourself into the explorer. However, the explorer is the villain and basically suffers, so it is not fun. Secondly, this book lacks a funny character. After all, an environment like a dungeon where people often die needs some laughter. It doesn't need to be too much, just write an interlude occasionally.

It's not bad, but it's just not enough to read. I deliberately read it slowly in case the author hasn't updated it yet.

In my opinion, this book is good. Although Kexi's style will always have some weird points no matter how it is written, at least the author is very humorous. You can be careful about blood in the dungeon (at work), but when you leave the dungeon (after get off work), everyone has quite a personality. At least it made me remember a few people. You must know that people who normally read books without characteristics cannot remember them!

It's quite good-looking. It's a rare subject. The author's portrayal of the characters is pretty good and makes people remember it right away. Maybe it's because it's the early stage and there are really few creatures in the dungeon. I hope to add more in the future. I'm also very curious whether Greedy Wolf and the others will return in the follow-up. In fact, I really want to see their follow-up ˉˉ

I quite like this type, just don't be a eunuch

The idea is quite good, but the character dialogue always feels a bit stiff, a bit like the illusion of NPC dialogue in an RPG game...

This subject matter is rare, it's good