Apocalypse: My Doomsday Fortress with My Childhood Friend, the School Beauty

I saw the latest 40 chapters. How should I put it? This work should not appear on Tomato, but at 7 o'clock. This book is destined to be a hit on Tomato, but it is a top-notch article. The articles on Tomato are too fast-paced, and the apocalyptic themes are mainly pure and refreshing articles, and those who are unhappy are basically ignored. The writing style of this work is about full marks for the apocalyptic theme. The environment, atmosphere, and emotional description are all very good. It comes from the affirmation of a 15-year-old bookworm. But the plot is too procrastinating. Chapter 40 didn't lead to the main plot and there was no revenge. Not to mention the fact that the logo was cheated for more than 10,000 yuan. Is that called revenge? It's still pretty childish. If the subsequent plot content remains the same as now, unless the writing can make people become saints, otherwise... You know. Meaningful foreshadowing is called foreshadowing, meaningless foreshadowing is called hydrology. Foreshadowing can be transformed into three things at once, and hydrology can promote unsubscription. Take care of it, my dear.

At present, it seems that there will be a single female protagonist, but it is not certain whether the male protagonist will recruit subordinates in the future. If it is a single female protagonist, then there should be no ambiguity or plots about giving away the female protagonist to show how good the relationship between the male and female protagonist is. If you have multiple girls, don't be like a stallion who falls in love with each one you meet. You have to control the number of heroines reasonably.

It should be about pure love, a single woman, the only one about the apocalypse, and the writing is pretty good.

As of Chapter 65 (the current update progress), it is very good. One star is missing because the first 4 chapters are too boring. Maybe the author wants to describe the disgusting side of the woman (the green one) and the protagonist boss to make readers more sympathetic? However, the first 4 chapters are all about the main character being arrogant, which is too depressing, but the rest are all enjoyable stories with no problems (currently 65 chapters). Of course, if you are trying to find fault, some data descriptions are unreasonable (not consistent with reality). For example, the fortress was built in 7 days (if forced to pick, the cement may not be completely finalized in 7 days, and even some parts of the fortress need to be professionally customized in 7 days, which is unrealistic even if you have money). Advantages: A refreshing plot, no green and no turtles, making up for regrets, multiple female protagonists? Disadvantages: The first 4 chapters are too long-winded, start low and go high, the data is not returned, and it goes against common sense (in this world). Summary: A cool article about rebirth after the apocalypse with less standardized data, but it does get really fun later on, especially when the protagonist and the heroine are having a meal while looking at the apocalypse outside, all the humiliation and hardship are worth it. If you want to read interesting articles, you can come in and take a look. It's not bad. It's best if you don't want to be picky. If you like data standardization, you should wait and see. -4 Stars (one star deducted for the first 4 chapters and some data irregularities.)

A good apocalyptic article with innovation

The author is very talented and has good ideas. You can read it with confidence.

It's okay so far, five stars for encouragement.

The first part is all about preparations before the end of the world. To be honest, it's a bit long-winded, but the second part is pretty good.

Is it a single heroine? Is the author great?

Not bad, very pretty