My Tsundere Childhood Friend Got Jealous Again Today

The plot is very good. I don't want to spend too many chapters on starting a business in the future. It's better to have more sugar, otherwise it will be like being reborn in 2000 and Qingmei is 18 years old. One more thing, the author should update it quickly, it's not enough to read [Punch Out] Although the ending is a bit sloppy, I just enjoyed reading this book [shy]

It's very well written, and the stories are all about common things in life. They're all very detailed, and everything touches people's hearts. The handling of emotional conflicts in the early stage is relatively smooth, and it's not like a world domination. I hope it won't become an entrepreneurial drama in the future.

After reading 6 chapters, I have been attracted to it. The author writes very well and has good writing skills. After explaining the time period when the protagonist returned from time travel, he started to crack down on the female supporting character. It was just a little refreshing. It was very comfortable. The image of the female protagonist was well portrayed. She was lively, beautiful, cute, and quirky. I liked it. If you like this character, you should use the word "joyful enemy" to describe it. Childhood sweethearts are also happy friends. The girlfriend who accompanies you crazy and makes trouble with you is too cute. I like the Sichuan Tyrannosaurus 🦖. I feel uncomfortable if I don't get beaten for a day. I also like skin very much [learned it] and like to roll back and forth on the line of death [learned it] Yeah, the stepmother in the plot of Chapter 45 gave me some brain congestion. It was so ridiculous. It was so bloody that I felt like I had seen that ridiculous TV series 10 years ago when the TV remote control was taken over and I had to watch it with my mother [crying]

Overall, it's a pretty good book. Some details, such as the relationship between the male and female protagonists, are interesting. However, I feel that the ending is a bit rushed. I didn't see the ending of those annoying supporting characters. More details on the marriage could be described, which would be a lot more sweet. Also, I think the details of the heroine's insecurity are also well portrayed and there is no artificial feeling. The only shortcoming is that the ending feels like an abrupt end. Anyway, it is highly recommended. I hope the author will write some extras (I downloaded it with my watch in school and watched it secretly. Maybe I didn't pay too much attention to the details. All the above are personal opinions. If you don't like it, please don't criticize)

1. Content level The overall rhythm of the book is bright and compact, which is very suitable for the reading taste of Tomato readers. It is a typical campus love-oriented online article. The story before rebirth belongs to the classic if parallel line of "I don't know Qingmei is good, but I prefer school beauties". The biggest difference from similar themes is that the role of Qingmei's role is greatly weakened, and there is almost no excessive appearance. Although this writing method makes a difference, it is a test of writing skills. The story after rebirth needs to be paved with delicate words, which naturally supports the atmosphere of Qingmei. It is a pity that the author's narrative conception can only ensure the overall integrity of the story and the smooth plot, but it is slightly weak in the opening of the foreshadowing and the shaping of the emotional background, which makes the atmosphere at the starting point of the story slightly lacking. 2. Logical level Taken together, the overall level of this book is probably below 8.5 Points. The core problem is that the plot advancement method is slightly deliberate. The author does not let the male and female protagonists interact and grow to promote the plot, but relies too much on supporting characters to create conflicts and interfere with the main plot. In particular, the female supporting role and the deliberately created conflicts are slightly excessive, which to a certain extent destroys the original love atmosphere of the story and makes the overall plot feel unnatural and comfortable. 3. Personal level The overall character behavior fits its own setting, and the comedy-oriented character style is relaxed and lovable. It can not only adapt to the overall relaxed tone of the story, but also smoothly promote the development of the plot. But the fly in the ointment is that the character creation is relatively single and flat, with few highlights and thin layers. Although there is no problem of collapse and disharmony, it cannot support a fuller plot tension. The overall character perception is relatively homogeneous and lacks impressive unique highlights.

This novel analyzes the feelings of the second female protagonist in this type of novel and the male protagonist's thoughts when he starts a new relationship after letting go. There is no transition and thinking about the people around her (whether she likes her or pursues her because she likes him). In this book, the male protagonist has some thoughts. I think it is very good, but I did not get the male protagonist's pursuit. The plot is still too little. If this is added, it feels like it can be improved to a higher level. The scenes with the heroine's family are a bit toxic, I really can't bear to wash my younger brother

The plot has a lot of bad points, and the character creation is not transparent enough. But since the author is a newcomer, I would like to give you a good review and encouragement, and I look forward to the improvement of the author's writing. Come on, author

The writing style is slightly lacking compared to Tomato, but it is more than enough compared to the previous one. The emotional description is in place, the heroine's characterization is in place, and the relationship can be said to come naturally (combined with the background of the male and female protagonists). It can be seen that the author has made progress, and it is very beautiful. If you consider not finishing the book so quickly, you can start from other aspects to reflect the relationship between Lu and Tuo.

It looks good, but the updates are too slow. All authors update 10 times a day [laughing]

I just started reading this kind of novel. Rebirth may be a necessary plot and setting. However, I still believe that the important people around you should not be ignored. Instead of so-called rebirth, it is better to grasp the present moment. After all, the coordinate of time is one-way.