The World's Ending, and You Still Want to Kiss Me, Virtual Girlfriend?

The logic is self-consistent and the plot transitions are relatively smooth, which are advantages. However, there are some plots in the novel that are too cliche, which are disadvantages. Overall it's pretty good, the writing is also good, the plot advances and it's very comfortable to watch. It's much better than the one next door. Many plots are handled very comfortably, and it looks really enjoyable, with a feeling of going on in one breath. But I'm wondering why you didn't just put the artifact in when you could pick up the equipment at the beginning? It would be so convenient to be able to directly pick up the things in the picture. Is it my problem? Why does it become more and more boring the more I watch it? [Thinking] It's been getting worse and worse lately. Let's change it again depending on the author's performance. The kids are not good, I moistened them first. The more I see behind it, the less I can stand it [smile]

Advantages - The plot setting is novel: it combines elements of doomsday survival and electronic girlfriend. Jiang Yu, whose legs are disabled in reality, establishes contact with the pixel villain Su Qianyue through the game, and unfolds a unique love and survival story in the doomsday background. This setting is relatively rare in similar novels and can attract readers' interest. - The logic is relatively self-consistent: the novel can maintain a certain degree of logic during the development of the plot. For example, Jiang Yu relied on his calm mind and planning, and used his advantages in the game to help Su Qianyue avoid danger time and time again in the doomsday. Su Qianyue also gradually grew up, and the changes in the characters and the advancement of the plot were in line with the story setting. - Smooth and natural writing style: The author's writing style is relatively smooth, allowing readers to read smoothly. In terms of describing doomsday scenes, character emotions and interactions, it can be vivid and vivid, giving readers a strong sense of involvement. Disadvantages - Some plots are cliched: Although the overall setting is novel, there are still some common clichéd plots in the novel, which may make some readers feel that there is a lack of novelty. - Insufficient characterization: The images of some supporting characters may be relatively single. In the context of doomsday, the character's personality and behavioral changes can be more delicate and in-depth to better show the complex changes of human nature in extreme environments.

At present, the plot is smooth and has no poisonous points, and the emotional lines are also delicately written. It would be better to compare with the real female partner. Just compare without meeting. If we meet later, it would be better to reduce the number of times. And the author, keep up the good work!

The writing is very good, thank you to the author! ! !

Disadvantages: The female channel flavor is a bit strong. I have read several high-scoring female channel articles, and this is the taste [face covering]. The plot is okay but some settings are too outrageous, there are also the classic protagonist group package distribution, and too many appearances of T0 ex-girlfriends. However, the above problems can be solved by skipping, basically no more than half a chapter. Advantages: The male protagonist's genius and cleverness are well established, the contrast between the female protagonist is also interesting, and the candy-making plot is also written with a sense of feeling. Overall, worth reading

It looks good, what the protagonist says and does is not distorted, and the background setting of the electronic girlfriend is completely reasonable. Should this track be driven by a penguin? But the Penguin book was really tiring to read. The background setting of the electronic girlfriend in the book "Cultivation to Immortality + Regret" is very torturous. The main character's words will also be distorted. The innocent villain spends money and has his own expression distorted, and sells it miserably to make money... It's not just a comment.

You can do an event to boost your favorability w(ﾟДﾟ)w, the progress is too slow now, the 100% favorability on the introduction is probably a few hundred pictures based on the current progress, but the author's writing is really good [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's time to survive in the apocalypse. Stop kissing your electronic girlfriend. Saturn and Mars together In terms of plot, the theme of raising a girlfriend in the clouds is always quite relaxing, at least for me I like it. In terms of characters, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also written in more detail. It is different from similar works and also has a slightly cute interaction, which is quite good. Five-star support.

Not bad, not bad. This is the first book that I have updated before it reached the 100th chapter [Blow a kiss] The character creation is pretty good, and the protagonist's IQ is on point, better than Chen Xianzun's Zhong Er (although I also watched it) (the quality of the pictures is not as high as Chen Xianzun [shy]). The plot is also very reasonable, for example, the story about Bai Qiehei is foreshadowed in the first dozens of chapters; and the conceptual setting of the disaster is quite good Finally, I want to read Tie Tie! Be religious!

This book is well written, the subject matter is relatively novel, and the characters are well drawn. The male and female protagonists don't procrastinate and do whatever they have to do. Compared with other books, this book has scenes that arrange encounters between the male protagonist and his ex-girlfriend, but not many times, so it's okay. I hope the author will try his best to write as few things as possible, such as face-slapping scenes and encounters between the male protagonist and his ex-girlfriend, etc. He can consider adding some details about the daily lives of the male and female protagonists. The author, please consider turning this book into a comic. It will definitely be interesting.