Wasteland Days with Mecha Girls

When I saw it, I thought of my friend. The content and writing style gave people a familiar feeling, so I decided to write a long review. I have finished watching it now, and the plot development can be more refined, such as why the protagonist hopes to take the heroine with him, and when he gradually regards the heroine as his own. But there is no doubt that as a web article this aspect is already very good (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ. The author's description of life and machines' attempts to understand human beings is quite delicate, and he also has his own understanding of emotions. The overall writing style clearly gives you the feeling of a light novel, and you can feel the obvious Japanese style. As a road novel (I understood it correctly, it should be a road novel), it is already very good emotionally, but the story could be stronger and more characters (in addition to the protagonist) could be written to further enhance the description of the world view and the overall shaping. Currently, only the repairman has obvious shaping. You can add some cool points. Although this type of article does not pay attention to this, the author should consider this aspect if he wants to become more popular on Tomato. Okay, I'll write it here first. I hope the author can write better and support me.

Personally I like it very much, try harder and don't stop talking! This kind of lightly thoughtful characters and the depressive atmosphere of life in the wasteland is well created. It is a unique existence in the current Internet literature. I hope it can stick to it because there are many people watching it. However, I personally feel that sometimes there is too much description of the environment, which is a bit overwhelming, and therefore the interaction between the two protagonists (or the portrayal of the protagonist?) Is a bit lacking, but if this is your style, just take it as my word. I hope it sells well, if the author doesn't turn into a cat girl and continue writing😋()

Finally I got some gold! I read more than 400 chapters in one go, it was so delicious [lick the screen], this is a real novel, the slow pace of the plot is not a shortcoming. Only after you have tasted the first two hundred chapters can you experience the extremely shocking and delicious story of a machine girl learning human nature and learning love [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen]! Of course, the previous content will not be boring. It is like reading a road novel, and it is good to savor it carefully. The author's writing style is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and he is good at using subtle details to express the delicate emotions of the characters. It is very good to read! This article should only exist in heaven, how many times can a tomato be smelled! ! ! Big cheers for the author! Take good care of you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is definitely a very good realistic science fiction book on Tomato! Regarding my personal feelings, the first point is that the environment and character descriptions are sufficient, and the second point is that like most chapters in the first volume, there is a corresponding ending at the end, just like each movement in a narrative avant-garde song. I think this is what this novel should be like, at least this part of it should be. Of course, five does not mean perfect, and I don't know if I didn't read it carefully enough. After reading through it, I think that the process from wandering to temporary settlement in the second volume, the mentality of the protagonist like Loken, and the change of actions, I always feel that there are still some transitions that are not natural enough. But don't care, it's just right, and it's enough to taste. In short, the author Cia (add)llo (oil)~(∠ω< )⌒☆

I rarely write book reviews, and I almost never write long reviews, but this is one of those rare novels that makes me want to write something. Although a slight sense of oppression hangs over the story (so far) of struggling in the wasteland, the theme of healing is clearly expressed. The author likes to add some details and descriptions of the environment between the lines. If you don't mind, you don't have to read it, but I think these are bonus points with the support of the author's writing skills. I may have had the idea of ​​writing before, but due to a series of factors such as my own writing style and energy, I finally chose to give up. Although the subject matter and setting are completely different, I still wanted to say at the first sight: This is exactly the story I want to tell, so I will conclude this review with the theme I once set for my novel - a journey about love and redemption.

The writing style of this book is really good, but it is a pity that it is a slow-burning book. It is not popular in this fast-paced era. This should be the reason why so few people read it. I can only say that it came at a bad time [face covering] and the author must persist and don't cut it in half [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [crying] [crying]

It's very interesting to watch. I can see that the quality of the plot is increasing step by step. In today's era where formulaic writing is very obvious, I can tell that the plot of this book must have been thought through. It is different from those formulaic writings. It can be seen that the future potential is very great. The evaluation is not based on a general overview. I objectively feel that this book is well written, and the plot of the book is compact. From the detailed description of the environment, you can see the desolation of this wasteland, and the tenacious life that still stands in it. I hope some readers who are planning to enter the trap will see that this book has great potential. Time and plot can witness everything. The pace of this book is relatively slow, and you need to calm down and read it to be interesting. The whole book will definitely be a good book. I very much hope that the author can continue to update it in the future. I will wait until this book is completely completed. I believe that this kind of seed can bloom into charming wasteland flowers in the future!

I'm not a buddy (it seems like the author is a girl, but that doesn't matter). Why is the writing so good? The plot is a bit confusing, but it makes people want to read on. I personally think the personality traits of the two characters are pretty good, mainly because of the writing! The book about bird food is the first among the books I have read. Take your time and I believe that the author will definitely give us an excellent and great story. I want to find your traces and interest in life from the book.

Full marks for this, this type of movie is in line with my taste. Although the plot is not clear yet, the writing is very good, and the description of the relationship is very comfortable. There is a lot of psychological journey, at least I can't find faults. I hope it doesn't break down and I can maintain the status quo. I support you. Come on, come on, it's been going well so far.

Let me start with the conclusion: highly recommended! I accidentally discovered this book and originally thought it was a very ordinary apocalyptic article. However, after reading it carefully, I found that it is not: one person and a machine saving each other, thoughts on survival and death, the collision of life and non-life, the confrontation between efficiency and emotion... In short, it is thought-provoking. As it stands, this is definitely a good book. It triggered my thinking many times in just one afternoon: What am I living for? Is physical signs really what distinguish humans from others? Does acting just for so-called efficiency, so-called work, and so-called learning count as a kind of alienation? … When was the last time you thought this way? In short, these thoughts are something I have never experienced in fast-paced, brainless and cool articles. I even read it in a way that far exceeded my usual concentration. For me, this is already a work, because it triggered my thinking. The current data in the book is not very good, so you must persevere! Finally, regarding the content of this book: it is difficult to agree upon the same, and the feedback from readers is absolutely diverse. It is not necessary to adapt to everyone. It is best to write in your own style. There are occasional typos in the article, which is inevitable. It seems that feedback on typos will affect the author's reward? I don't know if it's true or not, but in short, I will @ the author in the corresponding paragraph to modify it (I forgot when I read it before, I will read it again, come on, author -v-). Regarding tipping, I am a high school student and cannot support too much. Generating electricity every day and occasionally giving gifts is my limit QwQ. Don't be stingy with Dian Dian, everyone, and support the author, Meow. Regarding the writing style and plot development, I am limited by my language skills as a fool who only likes science, so I can't give you any valuable suggestions, so I won't go into details. In short, it feels great. Limited by my ability to express myself and the limited content of the current novel, this is all I will write. Anyway, good luck to the author! (Looking forward to the author's reply to QvQ)