The Magician Beneath the Stars

Give yourself high marks and encourage yourself. It's not too much.

This article is like a slowly unfolding landscape scroll, with flowing clouds and flowing water, and a long and lasting artistic conception. Poetry flows between the words, like pearls and jade falling on a plate, crisp and sweet; the description of the situation is fascinating, making people feel like they are there, and they are intoxicated without realizing it. Its thoughts are profound and thought-provoking. After reading it for a long time, the aftertaste still lingers in my heart, making people unable to bear to put it down. It is truly a work of exquisite detail and beautiful chapters.

How to put it, so far, compared to other novels, the protagonist does not have the huge advantage of being reborn, and many things have changed after rebirth, not the original ones. I kind of doubt that there is some being who deliberately reborn the protagonist and changed his original appearance so that the protagonist can become stronger in this environment (the above are all personal conjectures) In short, the author keeps up the good work

I can read it faster, it's pretty good, and I support it with five stars. I just have a small suggestion. The paragraphs are relatively long now, and it is tiring to read. If possible, break it into paragraphs more frequently, so that it looks more refreshing and breathable.

Although I only saw a little bit of it, it is generally good. It is not poisonous for the time being and can be eaten.

I think it's actually pretty good, but I don't understand why there's no traffic.

It looks good, but some of the articles are still a bit immature. I hope it won't stop updating.

The plot is quite good, but the connection between the plots can be smoother. Find some transitions, descriptions of characters, etc., And it will feel better. I look forward to continuing and working hard.

If cuteness could be graded, you would definitely be a special grader

It's pretty good, the characters' emotions are well described, the logic is fairly self-consistent, and the visual potential is not low. Good luck to the author.