Night's Pardoner

It's a good book, but I can't give it full marks. I think the subject matter is good. You will understand the advantages after reading the book, I will only mention the highlights. This book uses a large number of words to describe the male protagonist's inner monologue and analysis of the situation to reflect the male protagonist's rationality. The dominant thing in a novel should be its plot core. It's not the male protagonist's monologue. This book often breaks into long bursts of analysis and monologues mid-conversation. Then, just as the plot was reaching its climax, it was interrupted by monologues and analysis. Then there is the plot of Wei and Jin. To be honest, I really don't understand why the male protagonist wants to avenge Wei Jin so much. Logically speaking, their relationship can only be regarded as colleagues. The male protagonist's emotions are far-fetched, and this plot feels a bit forced to attract hatred. Even if the male protagonist wants to kill Nie Xun, it should be out of his humiliation to himself, not out of revenge for Wei and Jin. Overall, it's a good book, with some quirks, but the flaws don't hide the good points.

This is based on the author's previous book, which was also a perfect work, but I personally feel that this book is much better than the previous one. I probably read more than 500 chapters of the last book, but I don't really want to read it. This book feels like I can keep following it forever. The setting is very interesting. Every term such as twilighter, lamplighter, and night guest has a sense of story. The rhythm of the opening is also very tight. The character creation, world view presentation, and plot foreshadowing have not fallen behind at all. In addition, the author has always been a strong point, and the portrayal of characters from all walks of life is also online. It's really hard to find such a patient author of old white novels nowadays. Please read and cherish them.

Brothers, here is the long review. It is absolutely true. I am a bookworm who has been reading Tomato for 6 years. To summarize, IQ is online, humane, in-depth, novel in plot, humorous in language, and group portraits. There is too much history in Tomato, and there are only a few good ones, including Zone 9, Dragon City, The Early Ninth Empire, God Eaters, Under the City, etc. (I personally like group portraits). The beginning of this book is heart-stopping, the setting is novel, and the human nature is deeply portrayed. It is a little more awesome than the beginning of the author's previous book (the beginning of the previous book was very awesome). Lao Li is really talented. I have been short of books for a few months, and I want to wait for this book to read again. I just can't bear it anymore. I didn't bother to comment, but you are so awesome. I'm sorry if I don't comment on your writing style and ideas. In general, everyone is smart, everyone's character is outstanding, and the protagonist's growth process is not abrupt. There is no absolute right or wrong, only positions. Good depth, five-star praise! Brother Ma, update!!!

It's good to watch, and has a bit of the flavor of "Under the City", but overall it looks very different. Yami is similar to Li Tiandao in the coffin. (It) They make the protagonist stronger, but it feels like there is a malicious intention without knowing the purpose. Other characters are also described with flesh and blood, such as Liang Chao, who has a hard time balancing loyalty and filial piety, Huo Kui, who is responsible for the team, etc. In short, I believe this book will also achieve good results. Come on, Lao Ma. [Smile]

Finished reading it in one sitting! It still continues the intensity and excitement of "The Offender", with clear logic and interlocking links. And the setting of some names is very clever. For example, the Information Bureau, which specializes in intelligence, uses "library" to describe it. This is something I did not expect. When I think about it, it is really very appropriate and completely in line with people's desire for information! A good novel is about the depiction of characters. Whether they are protagonists, supporting characters or cannon fodder, they all have very clear descriptions. For example, the protagonist's younger brother Yang, the helplessness and helplessness of the low-level people, the desire to survive, and the twisted psychological characteristics bred by fear of death, were portrayed in just a few chapters. Especially Brother Chao and Brother Jin, who are not Liu, are really relatable. This kind of false friendship that happened by chance, in the end, they protected Chen Yan's dignity and secret with their lives. Although the protagonist is very rational and a little too rational, he is ultimately made more complicated by this inexplicable emotion, that is, growth! As for the plot, it goes without saying that there are constant twists and turns, the rhythm is tight, the IQ of all the members is online, and even the most inconspicuous supporting characters have basic logical support. At the same time, the protagonist's growth slowly begins to change from a silly and naive person. Although the process is a bit twisty and long, this slow transformation process is often the most exciting and attractive. Finally, I would like to make two requests to Lao Ma: First, don't make it unfinished, and don't make it too big like the "offenders", so as not to end it in such a hurry in the later stage! By the way, the author likes to create dream settings. There is something in the protagonist that can help him grow. In fact, there is no need to do this next time. Hehe, but this setting is not bad! I bring it up here because this dream is basically the same as "the one who committed the crime"! Second, update it quickly, it's not enough. For a book-hungry person like me, these chapters are simply not enough. Update it quickly, update it quickly, speed up the progress! Lao Ma, after 200 chapters, it became a bit flat, too thin and bland. Please pick up the rhythm, advance the main plot, and please make the characters more fleshed out ~ and the team building must also start ~ it is best not to have so many settings all the time, please start Yanzi's powerful performance and spiritual leader's style ~ Also, please add a few more chapters a day!!! You really didn't save the manuscript, did you?? 🥲

My biggest feeling after reading "The Night Pardoner": It's rare to see a work on Tomato that doesn't follow the routine of mindless and cool writing. As night falls, oblivion appears, and light is the only refuge for humans. Some people live above the light, while others struggle in the mud and darkness. The book is unsystematic, the protagonist is not born strong, he struggles and transforms along the way, and his growth trajectory is real and unobtrusive. The group portraits are brilliantly created. Each supporting character has his own desires and difficulties. There is no absolute good or evil. The light source can resist monsters, but it cannot shine into the complex human heart. It is not only a thrilling night survival, but also a portrayal of human nature. The pace is tight and the foreshadowing is well laid out. It is suitable for readers who are tired of mindless cheating and prefer plot-oriented and dark realistic styles. Looking forward to the follow-up plot!

The battle of wits is awesome, reversing and reversing, but the pace is too slow and even after a long time, I still don't have the ability to fight alone in the dark. Also, when he saw a woman, he couldn't walk. He was originally super invincible and furious and wanted to kill Nie Xu and a few others. However, Nie Xiaoke was able to hold the protagonist back for a long time without any equipment.

The world view is similar to the previous one, but there are differences. I have only seen a dozen pictures now, and I am looking forward to the plot behind it. The writing is as good as ever, and both the villains and the heroes have IQs. It feels so awkward, after chapter 20. After chapter 50, I felt that it was very confusing. I talked about a lot of useless things without summarizing them. I wanted to write an inscrutable feeling, but it was very annoying.

Yes, the setting is relatively new, and maybe the protagonist is not that appealing, but the characterization and intrigue are very good and there are explanations, and the protagonist's performance and plot after the secret is exposed are not out of the ordinary. I am looking forward to it! @ Come on^0^~It will be more stable! [Please update]

The previous book was actually quite good. The story lines in the previous chapters were indeed well written, but I only saw about 600 chapters. Mainly because of the relationship issues between the male and female protagonists, I couldn't read it. The updated version of this book that I have seen so far is indeed as attractive as the previous book. It is very attractive and very beautiful. I am really picky about reading books. There are very few books that I can keep reading, but there are not many interesting things. I hope the author will make some progress in handling emotional lines. However, the author does a good job in shaping the characters. Whether it is the Wild Dog House in the previous book or Buliu in this book, they are all written with their own characteristics. Anyway, I am looking forward to the scene where the male protagonist develops a novice village and meets his sister. The author will update it soon! I don't know if there is a female protagonist in this book, and I don't know who the female protagonist is. I only said that the previous book had a male and female protagonist, but I don't know about this book. Anyway, I don't think Chen Yan has any ideas about the little princess and Xiao Ke. Also, my comment is to praise the author for his good writing, not a lightning protection post. (Can you read clearly what my review says? Can you read Chinese? Also, it's the first time I've written such a long one. You can avoid it yourself. Can you please stop leaving comments to pick on the issue? If you don't like it, just read the next one. Or, can you post a post yourself to avoid it?