Online Game: My Pet Can Evolve into a Beautiful Girl

A good book, the author is complex, but very easy to understand... The most important thing is that the author is very skilled and has a lot of bushi pictures... Ahem, it is a good book anyway, I followed it 😏

[Adore][Adore] It's very beautiful. The author's car is a bit fast, but I like it very much. The article is delicate and the author's writing is good. But the author's pictures are a little lacking. I hope the author will pay attention to it. [Adore][Adore][Adore]@author, like 👍

I haven't seen such a favorite book in a long, long time. So far, the novel is well conceived, very innovative, and the content is rigorous. It can be seen that the follow-up world view is also large enough. I hope the author will update it soon so that it doesn't end unfinished. I would like to make some small comments. Regarding various data such as skill attributes, the frequency can be appropriately reduced, or the key points that have been changed can be written down. For example, if the "Destiny Talent" reaches level 10 and unlocks new attributes, you can just write the new attributes directly. You don't need to list the entire talent. Then, you can list the complete list every few times to give readers a deeper impression. Of course, this frequency still has to be determined by the author himself. This is what online game novels are like. If the attributes are too simple, it will give people the impression that they are not rigorous and their combat power is unclear. Writing too much and too rigorously will make people feel cumbersome and affect the reading experience, so it is not easy to grasp this scale. Of course, if the author feels that he is not very sure, then I personally recommend writing the data in detail. After all, being detailed is definitely better than being confused. Finally, cheers to the author! Update soon!

This book is the only online game I've read recently that didn't make me feel uncomfortable or bored. It can be said that this book is of top quality and can be placed anywhere.

The author provides a lot of benefits (not to mention what benefits), and the plot is reasonable, the routines are not too old, and there are not enemies everywhere you go. Apart from a little bit of venom (really small, easily overlooked in the past) the rest of it is pretty funny.

The Mountain Ointment Soldier, the Angry Bear, the Yellow Leaf Thief, the Yellow Leaf Thief Leader, the Iron-armored Flying Insect, the Shallow Sea Crab, the Shallow Sea Turtle, the Patrol Scout, the Shark Clothes City Guard, the Nanhai Youyong, Li Qi, the Iron-clawed Bear Monster, the Phantom Blood Lizard, the Snowy Stone Monster, the Evil Ghost, the Drunk Giant Leader, the Long Right Samurai, the Green Villager, and the Green Leader. These can be added to the list. Great author, come on!

It looks very comfortable now. The author is very strict in controlling the game values. There should be an outline. Well, the completion is guaranteed. I would like to remind the author to eat meat if he has it, and not to be a eunuch [code] Complex ingredients 🤦

Super beautiful, light-hearted and funny, a magical book in online games, good luck to the author.

This is my first time to comment on Tomato's novel. This novel is considered to be a top-quality and enjoyable article [only my personal opinion] 1. With Pokémon elements [basically the protagonist himself] 2. In the later stage, there are places to operate the city [a little less, but very good, I hope I can describe it more later, I feel it is good to have some farming elements] 3. The supporting characters and opponents are not exaggerated in terms of general and intelligence [I still praise the author here, at least the author is writing in a reasonable way, rather than writing based on personal feelings] 4. In terms of plot advancement, I feel that there are very few novels written after the game is released into the world. Even in the market, the early game articles are okay, but in the later stages they will become more data-based. Just looking at a bunch of data, I feel that the author is confused, and we are also confused. The plot currently being handled by the author is okay [everything that needs to be explained so far has been written down], so I still look forward to the author's writing and plot advancement in the future. 5. Don't whisper~(⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)

The overall effect is very good, and the author benefits are very good