The World Sinks into Eternal Night, Civilization Drowns in the Light of the Stars

I think it is an article with potential at the moment. The author can actually write it with care and construct a world view. This novel can definitely be written in pursuit of quality. Otherwise, the middle story line will not be carried out later. Some of the author's previous story lines are not very good, such as the blacksmith, the first encounter with the four investigators, and the relationship between the brothers and sisters in Lime City. I will not talk about it. The plot is not a brainless novel. This novel has the potential to be popular and the author can write it well. If you can have a good idea and are not in a hurry, you can refer to the work of Teacher Pengpai. The emotional line of the character of Teacher Lazw Dao Buyu is very good. Please give it a try.

There are really too many themes in this book, and the subject matter is not very novel, but this book is awesome. His writing style is so good that I can't recommend it. It is much better than some famous novices. The writing style is very delicate and the writing is great.

The first fifty chapters are relatively flat, then it starts to pick up slowly, and then it explodes. The protagonist is written in a very three-dimensional way. Compared with Mu Mushan in the author's previous book, he is no longer emotionally indifferent or perfectionistic, but has a touch of pride and tenderness immersed in his bones. Really endearing. The protagonists in many Tomato books are indifferent and heartless. When there is a heroine, he suddenly becomes warm and affectionate, and the heroine also comes out of nowhere. This book can be considered unique. The protagonist makes me feel like a young boy who has gone through many hardships but still has tenderness in his heart. You can completely understand why there are some things that others can't do. Only the protagonist can do it, so he should be a genius. There are a lot of foreshadowings in this book, and every plot advancement is not sudden, but has been planned by the author. Generally speaking, as long as the author fine-tunes the front part and keeps the back part, he has a chance to become Tomato's next hit [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Anyway, I feel very excited about it now and am looking forward to it [Blow kiss] I feel so bad if I don't watch it for a day. . . . . Hurry up ✌🏻Update [angry][angry][angry]

It is very similar to the previous book, with a grand background and very deep water. However, the difference is that the outline of the previous book is not obvious. This book clearly has a main line. Although the protagonist of this book is not that kind of Long Aotian, you will feel very happy when you look at it. It is not excessive, not rampant, very ordinary, but real enough.

From the last book. It may be a little uncomfortable when you first read it because the world view has not yet been developed, but after finishing Lime City (Volume 1), the entire world view becomes very clear. But the direction of the big plot is gradual and not abrupt. The level of depiction of group portraits is similar to that of exotic beasts (but the length is now very short, so it may not be as vivid). The most important thing is that the conflicts between the characters in the novel are really good. There is no real right or wrong, there are just different positions (the author describes it from the perspective of the entire race and civilization, which is also the style of the previous book). The protagonist's choices between different positions are very real. There are also many famous quotes in it, which are really inspiring. I hope no one will be killed (even though the last book didn't have much)

This is the first time I have seen such a high-level Gao Wuwen in Tomato. The world view is grand and suspenseful. The combat system seems to be well established so far. I look forward to more exciting plots in the future [OK] (I agree with Yibai👍🏻)

I'm really looking forward to the new book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] It's just that Fang Bai is much funnier than Mu Mu. For now, it's not as good as Gray Fog, but it's just the beginning and it can improve the world view. Overall, I'm still looking forward to it and I'm very confident. I hope the new book will be a new peak for static electricity

Yes, static electricity's new book. Compared with the previous one, I feel that the beginning of this one is quite good, and the writing style has also been significantly improved. Your book still makes me want to read it. I have been following the author's books for more than two years. I hope I can still stay with static electricity.

I just read Chapter 224, and I feel that the setting is complete, the plot is okay, and the character creation is okay in the early stage, but it becomes a bit formulaic later on, especially Elaine, who is always shy and does not fit the previous characters. There are too many characters. The author may want to write group portraits, but it is obvious that the author's writing skills are insufficient. There are too many new characters, too few old characters appear, and insufficient character description. In the Deep Sea chapter, the characters gradually become flat, so there should be fewer new characters and more roles for the old characters. There is also the female protagonist. Judging from the chapters I have read so far, the female protagonist seems to be Elaine, but the author also describes female characters such as Su Xiaotang. I have read most of the inquiries about the female protagonist, but the author has not answered, and there are too many female characters. From my perspective, the author wants to stay and watch multiple women, but also wants to stay and watch single and no women. The author should explain it in advance, otherwise it is easy to be scolded. The pace is a bit slow. I looked at the table of contents and found that there are more than 300 chapters, and they are still centered around the academy. It seems that there should be one to two hundred chapters, or even more. I hope the author can control the time well. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better, the author will get better and better, and my life will get better and better.