Third Junior Sister, Stop Acting Like a Hooligan!

Personal feelings! ! [Adoration](◦˙▽˙◦)[Blowing kiss] What should I say? It's a bit tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. I really like the heroine's character and the senior fellow apprentices are pretty good. But she looked very boring from the time I went to that village to kill evil cultivators. The heroine's second senior brother Mu Luo. How should I put it? That woman was crying that her wife was dead. I personally think he has become a golden elixir. He must have experienced a lot. It's not that the empathy is not good, but I always felt weird when I read that paragraph. Later the heroine was very gentle to the two dogs. And the little junior brother later felt that he was too useless, so he went out and bumped into Ergou, and what Ergou said to him, even though he was a child, I felt that the portrayal was too childlike and innocent. Then I felt a bit old-fashioned, but I could guess a little bit behind. When I was studying, I would immerse myself in the book and fantasize about the details, so I thought it was okay. If I encountered something that seemed uncomfortable, I would mentally defend it. But some people may not be able to watch it all at once and feel uncomfortable. I used to be like this too. I have read more than 50 chapters now. I will read it later and hope you can see it. I suggest that the plot should not be too tacky and cliche. In fact, the writing is very good at the beginning and makes people want to read on. The characters are also very good. Also, the sense of justice should not be too strong. Some empathy may be a bit difficult to read because of the writing. I can think of that scene, but some people will not think about it so carefully. But I really like Baby Yan Qing. I can also see that Da Da is very serious in shaping this character. It's so cute. Keep up the good work in writing. Some places should be carefully thought about and not so modern in writing. For example, the host and the gentleman seem a bit uncomfortable. Although there are shortcomings, there are many advantages. Da Da continue to work. I will keep reading [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very good book. I like it as well as Xie Qing's ability to cause trouble.

Omg this article hits all my preferences perfectly. You, the author, are my mother-in-law, and my heart is pounding. Update soon.

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Here I go, a book I haven't read for a long time was suddenly updated! In fact, I think this is quite new. I really like it, I must write it down.

Looks good, looks good, looks good!

Hee hee, it's so beautiful. The author writes it well.