Harry Potter: A Hufflepuff’s Record of Taming the Young Dark Lord

[Damp heart criticism + sunny Xi, 1V1, pure love, Tom is not very OOC at the moment, I hope there is no betrayal, deception or exploitation in the love line (bushi feels it is impossible), the heroine is very cute, everything is fine, give me He] Tom doesn't have a bad character, and he's not OOC, but he doesn't want it to turn into an egg in the later stage, ('-ωก̀). It's fine if the update is slow, and the details are controlled to taste. The current chapters of the book are not embarrassing, and there are no big surprises, as long as the heroine does not become a spoiled wife. The one I read before was about a spoiled wife + a love brain + easy to be PUA + ignore the efforts of relatives and want to get married + run with the ball, but that one made me sick. Hope this one doesn't. In this book, the heroine's character is well developed, and I hope she won't fall apart in the later stages, and will still stick to her heart, and the sun will shine brightly. Although it is difficult to make Tom give up the Horcrux just by relying on love, the details will depend on the author's practical outline. Alas, it's difficult. . .

Hello author! I really praise this book, I like it very much and it is well written. Even though I know it's impossible selfishly, I still want to say that I want the heroine and Malfoy to be together! Her gaze always follows his figure, and the way he looks at her is anything but innocent. The writing is so beautiful! The description of a two-way secret love really makes my heart move. I am grateful to have come across such a good book. It is good to read and well received. Hehehe [laughs]

I felt comfortable after reading a few chapters. It didn't feel awkward like other HP novels at the beginning, and the writing style was very mature and smooth. Tom is quite sweet, better than other Tom fans who are sweet just for the sake of being sweet. I don't know if it's be or he. I've read a lot of Tom Be's articles. Some people may be persuaded to leave the heroine academy (after all, some people like to watch Twin Snakes Academy), but I think the character of the heroine should be Badger Academy. Every college is very charming. Although Badger is always ignored, I still like this college very much. At least in the Tom fanfic, if you try to "influence" him, the real Little Sun is still happy to watch. It's so novel that I couldn't help but comment hh first.

It looks good~ Before watching it, I was worried whether the heroine's character would be very flat, because characters like Little Sun are very popular and can be sketched out without much effort. After watching it, I felt that it was pretty good! The heroine has her own story, her own friends, and her relationship with the hero is very well described, but the story is told from the heroine's perspective, and it depicts more of the heroine's own life. She occasionally meets the hero to have a sweet moment, and the rhythm is very well controlled. It's great! The commentary is also very good. I believe some people came to read this book for Tom, but when he did bad things, the commentary did not favor him. The commentary was also very sweet when he was talking about the controversy about house elves. I really like the expression in the article. Even if they are used to being oppressed, and it is even considered to be their nature, oppression is oppression.

Nice! ! ! ! Two small cakes, Cirilli and Tom 😭 It feels like Cirilli is a sweet cream cupcake, and Tom is a bitter black forest cake (it looks sweet, but actually hides a murderous intention, and is always ready to assassinate)

Super pretty! ! I'm really not exaggerating when I say that out of all the HP books I've read, this is the only one I'm still reading! Really like it! ! Cirelli is the little sun! ! The character design is really perfect! All the plots in the article are interesting and interesting, and everyone has their own characteristics! No matter who interacts with whom, it is always fun. After reading so many fan fiction authors, Abu is my favorite! I really love it! The author's emotional lines are so well written! ! I eat it very much! ! I don't think Riddle is OOC right now. The fact that Riddle invited others to the Christmas ball really showed Riddle's nature to the fullest! It just hurts Cirelli's heart so much [crying] (I'm curious whether Riddle fell in love with Cirelli first or Cirelli fell in love with Riddle first? [Thinking]) It makes me even more likely to sneer at Bush [eat melon] [smirk] Bush really smacks each other (although there is no chance for them at all. . [Crying]) Ahem, if possible, I hope the author will do more extras like accidentally eating love potions in the future [shy] [sending heart] The author will work harder [sending heart] (cough cough, is it possible that the author made a big fuss when I woke up? [Laughing]) It would be better not to stop~~ [sending heart]

My sister is really good, kind, loyal, cheerful, and a real little sunshine! ! Damn Tom, if you don't cherish me anymore, why don't you give me your little sister, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo …

It's so beautiful. I feel it's so satisfying to me. The author should write more quickly. I really can't wait. I originally wanted to save it, but in the end I couldn't help it. It's so beautiful. There are so few of them. Wow🥹 The author should write quickly [Blow kiss]

Suddenly I thought about what if Tom didn't realize his feelings at the beginning, and then followed the same path as the original work, and betrothed the heroine to Abu Malfoy as a reward for Abu. As a result, he later understood his feelings, so Abu also died young like the original work. Who knew that the heroine fell in love with Abu in the process. This be is also very good.

It's really super invincible and explosive! The descriptions are particularly delicate, the heroine's image is very plump, and Tom doesn't feel OOC at all. In short, everything is perfect, all emotions are traceable, and the long and flowing daily life is the most beautiful, except for one thing! Boss updates too slowly, please don't update constantly! This is the best Tom fanfic I have ever seen [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]