[Harry Potter fanfiction + Voldemort x original heroine + yandere and obsessive + redemption]
Flora, whose beauty never fades, brings the orphan Tom to the fairytale-like Venus Manor.
She builds him a sanctuary with her everlasting tenderness: sunlit breakfasts, whispered bedtime stories, the joys of amusement parks, the freedom of splashing through the waves, birthday candles and eager wishes, forgiveness when he makes mistakes, and the comfort of knowing he is fiercely protected.
The carefree childhood that should have been his, the fragments of play, trust, and love, are pieced back together one by one by her, becoming the only light in Tom's gloomy life.
From resistance to reliance, from guardedness to surrender, he gradually changes through the “normal childhood” she gives him. And the bond that began as shelter will, with time, grow into a deeper and more obsessive devotion.
She is his moonlight, and the only redemption and home he will ever know.
What surprised me was the author's writing style. It was very delicate and I liked it very much. It was very enjoyable to read. I have read so many online articles and it was really good. Although it is a bit slow-paced, it allows readers to feel the changes in this complex individual, which is very shocking. My self-feeling is that the author focuses on using some environmental descriptions to correspond to Riddell's state. At first glance, it looks good, but you must pay attention to the amount. Too many environmental descriptions will make people feel a little uncomfortable, but it's okay. I mean when describing the atmosphere in the manor. Sometimes maybe it can be the other way around... Using happy scenes to complement sadness? (Of course it's just an analogy, just a personal opinion. The author can just write based on his own ideas and does not force it. The important thing is that the writing method matches the plot) Riddle's fragility is a bit hard for me to imagine? It should be described like this. Maybe it makes me feel that it is a little different from the original work, but it is very good to use his vulnerability and the vulnerability deep in his heart to show Flora's special position in his heart. The overall feeling is very good, I hope the author will update it soon😘Look forward to it🌹
Big boost for the author, super super super super super super nice😳 I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I also like your other books ❤️❤️❤️ The author thinks the story line is too long. Tom is not in school yet. I think Tom is too squishy! 🤦Tom, hurry up and become independent. The story line is too long, and the heroine has become Tom's mother. Although raising children is fun, you have to pay attention to the focus🤦
Very well written!!! Why is no one watching? I have always wanted to find a CP like Riddle!!
The writing is superb! Very delicate!
The writing is very good, thank you!