After Awakening, I Refuse to Be the Unlucky Second Senior Brother in an Immortal Cultivation Novel

It's nice to watch, but I have a small suggestion (a little bit🤏), don't make all the female supporting characters vicious. The male characters in it are all different, and the ones that focus more on are the protagonists. There are very few female characters, except for his mother, who is quite flamboyant and protective. And the villains, except for Long Aotian, who doesn't have a role at the moment, are vicious. Female supporting characters, vicious female supporting characters, can actually create some vicious male supporting characters. The female cultivator has always been jealous of the protagonist and is a bit tired of hurting the protagonist all the time. It's okay to have some male cultivators [to send my heart], (∀) (most women are actually admirers of strength rather than jealous of it) and create some female characters with three-dimensional characters. All vicious female characters are very...

This article! ! ! ! ! So cool! ! ! ! ! At first, I thought it would be the kind of story where the original heroine had her luck stolen and had to be careful at all times. But the author wrote it so well. If the original heroine had good things, the protagonist would have even better ones. Some things also affected the original heroine's chances. The supporting characters were not too brainless. It was really good-looking!

Really enjoyed this one. There are many double male protagonists on Tomato who are soft and waxy. They are just like changing the gender of the heroine in romance novels. (I don't mean to insult women here) Those novels focus on appearance description, such as small faces, which makes me physically uncomfortable. But the appearance, plot and plot of this novel are all well connected, so you won't feel bored while reading it. (Personal perception) Moreover, this shou is not very strong at the beginning, it is not a brainless cool novel, it is upgraded step by step, and then leads to success. It has a process, unlike some novels where the shou is very powerful after rebirth or time travel, and then the attack becomes even more powerful. This book contains fighting, daily life, upgrades, romance, and some introductions to the story background or situations. I think this is a very nice novel. It's worth seeing. Looking forward to what comes next.

It's good-looking, but it's too little. I'll sit down and update it. I really like it. In fact, to be honest, the relationship line can also be pushed forward a little. Don't misunderstand me. When I say push, I don't mean to get them together immediately. After all, feelings are accumulated bit by bit. We can do it bit by bit. Otherwise, being together will be too sudden. Even if it is because of closely related life lines, it is not reasonable. What is the difference between that and forced? To be honest, if you really don't add a little bit, it will feel very abrupt. I came in because of the two male protagonists. If you want to read cool articles, just mark them without female protagonists. It doesn't mean that you have to rush to the limit, especially fast, but what I want to express is that you have to accumulate bit by bit, you There should be a little bit of increase in the process of experience. What I feel now is that once there is a paragraph, there is no increase at all, and there is a big paragraph after another. Anyway, there is no accumulation bit by bit. Some people say that if you like watching romantic movies, you can go to see Love Line. Why do you dislike it here? But damn, this is a double male protagonist. When I came to the first place, I just wanted to see the love line, but I found that besides the love line, the plot and other plots are also more interesting. But what I want to express is that the love line should be arranged in a reasonable way and accumulated bit by bit, not completely. No, otherwise you don't have that kind of love line in a large part of your middle. Suddenly there is a part where you come to engage in that love line, and it feels weird (those who criticize me have no mothers). There is no need to criticize me. I am giving advice. Of course, it doesn't matter if you don't listen. If you can criticize me objectively, don't come.

It can almost be regarded as a micro-group portrait novel without CP images. The concept of the world line is very broad and deep. There is also a lot of content. One opportunity and one secret realm are intertwined. The writing style is also good. ⚠️If you like to watch cp, you can avoid lightning. I have read 512 chapters and cp has not been together for more than 20 chapters. Almost none. If there are people, there are very few. Many of them are about the two sides missing each other and meeting each other. It is almost like a lover missing. It makes people want to see the next development, but it is also very unbearable. There is no feeling of two men at all. It's very strange that there is CP but there is almost no writing. If there is only a little bit of writing, it feels like the two male protagonists are hanging in front of you and you continue to read. It is equal to Chapter 512. The only place where you can see the two male protagonists is the little bit where the two become Taoist couples. ❗️If you like to watch without cp, you can watch it. You only need to skip a little bit and it will not affect the rest of the article. At least the first 512 chapters are like this.

It's very interesting, and the plot rhythm is very good☺️Also, after reading so many articles, the protagonist can only feel the love from blood relatives with his mother or mother's relatives. I can only say that my father is really useless most of the time🙃

It's very good, the plot is not draggy and it goes with the flow, and the protagonist is not a coward and can be scolded at will. Another male protagonist appears in Chapter 36 (finally released). I highly recommend it. The descriptions of other characters are also quite cute. I especially like the dragon. He is cute and straightforward. I also like the protagonist. He is cool and cold but very cute in relationships, whether it is with friends. The Taoist couples are still dumb but very serious. The overall article is relatively relaxing to read. The fighting and killing is not very tiring or too bloody. It is suitable for reading when relaxing. There are many desperate straight men in the comment area. I suggest the author add a sentence at the beginning or in the introduction to prevent accidental entry. They are very desperate and wailing hahahahaha. They are as desperate as I was when I knocked on CP.

The writing of the article is delicate and the characters are vivid and lifelike. The vivid three-dimensionality attracts people's imagination, and there is nothing too angry or aggrieved. The plots are intertwined and the suspense is just right. Every time I feel bored, I just jump to another perspective without being abrupt and just right every time. It's a group portrait, and there aren't many love scenes, but it's still the finishing touch, and there will be no misunderstandings. Very sweet. Sometimes it seems like there is no emotional line, although it doesn't have much impact. But I also hope to see sweet love [laughing][laughing][shy]

At first, I thought this book was the same as other rebirth stories. It was a slap in the face + doting on the attacker + being robbed of opportunities + making progress all the way + sweet, greasy, and mean life. But the result was completely different. This book is a bit like a group portrait. Just the fact that multiple novels and humanistic versions of Long Aotian gathered together in this book to compete with each other for luck is better than other rebirth stories with fixed routines and no new ideas. It's a big improvement. Secondly, the emotional line between the male protagonists does not occupy most of the plot. The plot is still a little more career-oriented, and the plot supplements are also perfect. There is no cliché plot in other novels where you fall in love at first sight after seeing the love and being attracted by some magical operation that is different from others. Then, the plot is not embarrassing, and there is no situation where I need to skip many chapters to avoid embarrassment. Highly recommended, it is a breath of fresh air in the rebirth world. It is the only novel that I can rarely read and follow up. (Everyone has different thoughts and different choices of reading articles. My words only represent my personal opinions and views.)

It's so cool! ! ! I thought he was the type who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, and is careful to use his strength in the later stage, but I didn't expect that the protagonist will just do it when he encounters trouble, and take revenge on the spot! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]