A Journey to Another World, Starting with the Elves

A very good Western fantasy novel. The author's delicate ideas and settings are eye-catching [laughs]. The story described in the first three chapters is impressive and is also the source of the theme of this article. The characters of the protagonist and Beibei are very vivid. However, in the first few chapters after reincarnation, the author seems to be eager to show the grand background of the story. Many important characters appear in a short period of time and a lot of foreshadowing is laid. It is a bit confusing [thinking]. There are too many characters and foreshadowings, causing the reader's focus that should be on the protagonist to shift to the background and supporting characters of the story, which is a bit "visual fatigue" and a waste of brains. I originally thought that the protagonist would experience the pain and helplessness of his previous life, and after reincarnation, he would have a relaxing and joyful trip to another world. However, the background that unfolded at the beginning brought a bit of depression and urgency [grievance] to the story. I hope the author will consider the readers' little minds [shyness], and I also hope that the protagonist will have a meaningful and unforgettable trip [you can savor it carefully].

Thank you for your comments, I will try my best to update. [Sending Hearts] It's so difficult to write novels [crying], why do what I write every time is always different from what's in my mind. Regarding many problems in my novel, I will make overall revisions, including major changes to the entire second volume. New readers don't need to worry, just take a look first, just in case it turns out to be good [face covering]

Needless to say, it is probably one of the best books in Western fantasy. It is very healing. It is like being able to eat such a bowl of carefully cooked soup among the many bad books that are like fast food nowadays. It is great, needless to say!

A true five-star The writing style is very good, and the description is also very detailed, with a feeling of craftsmanship and detailed feelings. Character creation: I would like to give full marks. Each character is very three-dimensional and vivid, with their own unique characteristics and rich memories. Storyline: It seems to be a perfect score so far. It is very delicious and tends to be relaxed in daily life (personal feeling). Some people have joys and sorrows in life, just like a plate of delicious food with all colors, flavors and tastes. The western fantasy theme and the numerous foreshadowings at the beginning (probably) make people very interested. There is no clichéd plot (at least I haven't seen it). Reading this book makes me feel like I'm raising a daughter (?) The most delicious thing about this book is that the emotional cards he plays are delicate and the characters are "live". Every scene can be accurately presented, and there are no miscellaneous and strange modifiers or descriptions. Personally, I don't think it is toxic at all (excluding some XP people, timid people who cannot see a knife, and other abnormal people) I can't find any shortcomings based on my level. If there are any, I will add them later. Author, I like you! (Escape)

Excellent, both in terms of rhythm and world view structure. The authors of medium and light books are very serious in writing books. If possible, I would like to accompany this book to the end. Everyone is so awesome. Obviously no one will read them. I fucked him for eight hours [covering my face]

With a relaxed pace and melodious melody, the green world bends and green leaves float down, and the girl's heels are lifted. Suddenly the wind started to blow. She raised her eyes and saw the sword and magic, thousands of miles of mountains and rivers, the sun and the moon. She smiled sweetly. This is my impression after reading this book (so far)

I like the Western fantasy style very much. I hope the author will do his best [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's beautiful. The writing is exquisite and the expressions of characters and emotions are very vivid and concrete. The world view is also well developed (it can be vaguely seen that the world view is big). The relationship between the emotions before and after reincarnation and the world are also very harmonious. It has the illusion of watching "The Witch's Journey" plus Lillian.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

Haojian Aikan, I need more updates. Can I write novels for a lifetime? Yi Xiuni