The Witch's Final Hour

Supplementary comments. Overall, the writing is pretty good. There is no problem with the description. In terms of setting, compared with a lot of similar settings on the Tomato platform, it cannot be said that it is not new. The story line is not bad, at least I haven't seen anything that is too abrupt so far. But to be honest, first of all, this novel was not very attractive to me at first. I also skipped two chapters before I felt like I could continue reading. I don't know if it was my personal illusion in terms of writing. I always felt it was a little immature, and some parts of the description were a bit redundant and seemed a bit deliberate. The writing is not bad, but it felt very bland when I read it. At least I personally felt that I lacked the desire to read on. However, although I really want to give you some advice, I am just a reader (scratching my head). If you ask me to write about it, I will feel better after reading it. If you ask me to write it myself, I may not be able to write it at all, so I can only say to work on it.

This reader is very good and secretly gave the author a five-star rating. Jpg

This reader was very kind, so he gave the author a five-star review. Jpg (laughs

This unknown creature passed by quietly and left a five-star review

It's not brainless, it's comfortable to watch no matter how you read it, the content is also very substantial, coherent and fluent, so many reviews for the time being.

I was attracted by the beginning, a rare western fantasy witch story, I like it

Come back and see if it's okay

It's good-looking, but it's not good enough.

Looks good, the setting is interesting