Harry Potter: Double the Romance

The narrative is as bland as a running account, and only dialogues and actions are used to complete the entire text. But as a newcomer, I have to say that I am making rapid progress, and the further I go, the more natural it becomes. In fact, I really hope to add more plot and environment, but there is too little magic. The main theme is a love atmosphere, and the characters and plot design are ignored. I came here for the sandwich biscuits. If you are like me and plan to challenge 🍅, those who are interested in reading will be disappointed. The full text focuses on daily life, with a lot of kisses and hugs, and there is only a light-up part in the finale. As the title of the author's book says, he prefers romance novels that are light-hearted, without any plots or disasters, and the time jump is large, so the main events of the original work can be passed through. So, are there any twin sandwich cookies that you would recommend to me for a sweet and consensual threesome? Suddenly I found this track to be pretty.

The content is very good, but the writing style needs to be improved. It looks a bit like narrating the content, and the punctuation marks are not appropriate, and there is even no punctuation between sentences. Some words that should be said by the characters are described or narrated, but the plot is very good, so pure love 🥺 Overall it is really good, come on! You must keep writing, you are the only one who can write a novel about twins and twins🥺😫 Your writing is getting better and better, the improvement is so obvious😙You are really one of the best writers on this subject, which has very few books to begin with.

It's the replacement for "HP: Love Is Enemy" and it's a little sweeter Because he was banned, he was very depressed and wanted to cry. He was not bad, so I highly recommend that people who have read that book should look for it to reflect on it. Give it full marks without hesitation

This is the only Gemini cp fanfic on my bookshelf. I like it very much... I can see that the author's writing style may be a little immature, but the sentence breaks and punctuation are a bit weird. If there are words with a high repetition rate within a few sentences, it may seem very stiff. I would like to see more detailed descriptions (I don't mean to say bad! I am just giving a small suggestion (ノへ`,). You can see that the author has been slowly improving. The most important thing for writing a book is that the author is happy)

It's super good-looking. It doesn't have much to do with the original work or the main plot. It's just a short story between them. It's also very short and not tiring to read. It's just a bit lacking in meat. No, it's not there. I cried to death.

The story is the story of the twins Blair and Weasley. The Horcruxes were released in advance, Voldemort was not resurrected, and Harry checked into Godfather Sirius's home in advance. Harry learned about the wizarding world before entering school. The twins will also go on dates with Lyle in the Muggle world, go to shops and amusement parks, and play go-kart racing. Lyle's birthday is on Christmas, and the twins' birthday is on April Fool's Day. Valentine's Day inevitably makes many appearances. Cedric wins the Triwizard Tournament.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! The content is very rich and not as monotonous as other fanfics. Moreover, they are the Weasley twins, which are irresistible and irresistible. The ending should not be be. (I really feel sorry for everyone in the original book who stabbed everyone again - "After you left, I saw every mirror was the Mirror of Erised") The relationship between Lyle and Lyle is also sweet and in love (●♡∀♡), and the character's personality is also quite restored. 1V2, it is another happy day.

It is indeed a young book, but... But it is surprisingly good. There is not too much description, just the warm feeling that comes out naturally. The appearance of the protagonist is not described in detail after a book, but it gives the reader the feeling that there is no need to use appearance to express it. It seems that the twins are not attracted by the appearance of the protagonist, but their souls are attracted to each other... Great, when I first saw so many people recommending it, I didn't want to read it, but there was really no book left, but now I don't regret it at all!

Super pretty and really sweet! ! ! I have decided to start updating in a fancy way every day. From now on, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, big, out there out there outs, update soon! ! ! ! !

First of all, let me explain that this is not the first time I have read this article. It is the second time today. The second time I read it, it turned out to be a super sweet cookie. The author's writing is indeed a little immature, but the overall performance is very good. The ending is a bit sudden, but it is also forgivable. The overall development is not deep in sadomasochism, and there are no ups and downs. It is more like a daily cookie. The feeling this article gives me is the love between Gemini and Blair, really. It's really just living how others want you to live, laughing and having fun together, and it's natural to be overly emotional in the middle. I didn't say it was too abrupt or anything, it just felt like everything was going with the flow and naturally, which was really great.