Harry Potter: The Scent of Irises

I like the setting so far, but I feel that the author's writing style is a bit childish. For example, adding some small theaters, and too many emojis are not objectionable. The small theaters and emojis added in the first chapter are a bit awkward. It's really hard to describe the writing in one sentence. When describing sadness, sadness and shock, it's all replaced by a series of "ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh" and exclamation marks, and using emojis to express emotions. I like the setting of the introduction very much, but from the current point of view, the first part is really weak. I don't know if the writing style will be improved in the later chapters.

I don't know how to express it, because I came in because I was attracted by the Weasley Twin CP label. I have read a lot of Weasley Gemini CP stories recently, whether they are male or female or male-male Gemini CP stories. This is the second male-male Gemini CP story that I have read. But this article is very readable. Although there are not many emotional scenes, and it is not the most readable among my many Gemini cp articles, it is still very readable. I do not mean to slander the author. But it's really good-looking and well-written, and it made me cry during the fight at the end, really. Maybe I really don't like abuse, and I prefer plain love stories. This may be the reason why this Gemini cp story doesn't rank very high in my mind. But it's really good-looking, and it made me feel better when I cried. I'm also very grateful for this article. Because for a while I went crazy looking for Gemini CP articles, and I realized that life can't always be smooth. Reading the chapter "Original Ending" in it made me cry and felt much better. Although it's very sharp, it's highly recommended for anyone who likes a little abuse, peace, and meat. Let me say it again, the teacher is my god. (I weakly ask the teacher if you have any idea of ​​​​opening a second book. Although this one is not finished yet, the extra chapters are still being updated. I make a small wish, I hope it will be a warm and not so sad HP novel, please, please) If some treasures think it is not good, please don't insult the author. After all, I have worked hard to update it. Everyone has different tastes. Please, please [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Come on, author! I really like this book. To be honest, I liked it very much when I saw the introduction. My favorite is the Weasley Twins (two boys), but it is really difficult to find a book. Thank you to the author. Don't be unfinished or abandon the book. ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆC)

It's super good-looking, the only two good-looking Gemini articles I've ever read! ! ! ! I really recommend everyone to read this book, don't miss it! ! ! !

It's so good. It's one of the few books I particularly like. I'll update it soon ⊙ω⊙ @minute

Um. If you don't watch the prequel, it's just a pure and good-looking duo, you won't be traumatized.

This book is really nice Good looking, super good looking

The author used stars to compare Asta, which really hit me hard! Sandwich biscuits, etc., I really like them! (*'▽'*)♪

The author will update soon! ! ! It's not enough to watch! ! ! ! !

The author's book is so great. Keep writing and it will make you happy along the way! Keep writing, and the future is promising! [Code live][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned]