Harry Potter: The Serpent and the Phoenix

How should I put it? I hope that the heroine can always overpower Tom. I can no longer bear the idea of ​​a strong woman being stronger than a man or two people being at opposite extremes. Moreover, if you treat a person like Tom better, he will not only not be moved, but will take this opportunity to use you to squeeze out your value. I think the only way to do this is to strike hard and persecute him in all aspects.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I want to give it a thumbs up. What a special article... I was attracted by the first chapter. TR has a particularly good control over the intensity of his speech. They did not show any absolute coldness at first, and they still retained some of the innocence and childishness they should have at this age, because after all, they were still children at that time. There is also the sentence "She spread her right hand towards the angry Tom Riddle, with slender and beautiful fingers, and a red frostbite on the knuckles." A traditional and simple fanfic flavor comes to mind, which at least shows that this is not a perfect fairy tale world, and can also give a glimpse of the cruel situation that this world was in when it was famine and lacked everything. The characters of the two people are particularly refreshing, and the sense of fateful entanglement that can be glimpsed from the introduction all tempted me to read. It's particularly delicious... I'm really surprised, the character's strength is so well controlled! I really need to praise you again. The inner drama and dialogue between the two in the confrontation in the first chapter are also very good. It feels so good to let TR lose the upper hand, especially when the plot happens to be reasonable and the character setting is so "accidental" that there is no OOC. It becomes even more delicious... The plot of the story is fascinating. I fell to my knees. This is the person who knows how to speak TR best. It is worth reading.

Lily Lecce is from time travel. This has only been seen in the introduction and some small details (for example, she resisted the holly wood wand that is the brother's wand of Tom). Will it be discussed in detail in the future? I am very interested in the formation of Lilly Lecce's character, such as what kind of person she was in her previous life and what she experienced. It would be great if the following articles or extras could write about this. Lily Lecce does not have a surname. According to the original book, the "admission list" to Hogwarts is automatically recorded by the magic quill in the Ministry of Magic's registration office, regardless of whether the little wizard knows her life experience. Then wouldn't Lily Lecce's father's or mother's surname be automatically completed by magic? Or is it that Lily Lecce's parents are not recorded at all by the wizarding world, and their existence is not included in Muggle files? Anyway, this book written by the author is really to my liking. All in all, I really like it! And I can also get some of the jokes used by the author, so I also like to see what the author has to say, and the author himself talks cutely. The frequency of reading updates is also very high. The author should get up and work after taking a break (swinging the whip). You must continue to update when you transform into an octopus. Don't give up!

This book is really beautiful. Author, I will follow you forever [sending my heart]. Next is my evaluation of this book: First of all, the character of Riddle in this book is really not OOC at all. It is exactly the bad character shown in the original book, good at disguise, and unscrupulous in order to achieve the goal. Then I really love the setting of the heroine Bao Bao. She is a strong woman who is evenly matched with Tom. She is also very good at pretending to win people's hearts. Anyway, the characters in it are all very touching. Finally, my summary: Author, can you update 100 chapters at once? It scares me to death (๑•̀ω•́๑) [Blow kiss]

The heroine can act, but she is also sincere. Her unique talent will help her. I don't know if the heroine will realize her wish. The heroine and Riddle are the same kind of people, but they are not the same kind of people. They are similar but different. Now I think the plot is pretty good

It was pretty good, but it made me a little confused. I felt like they were all talking in code words, and they were all smart people. I was out of my mind, so who had the upper hand, the heroine or Tom? I really can't see through the two of them! It feels like Tom has the upper hand on the surface, but in fact I can't tell the deeper story.

It looks good, but I can't get enough of it. I want to keep it, but I'm afraid that I'll feed it to death, so I have no choice but to click on the power-generating and shit-yellow buttons. It's really beautiful. Kudos to the author! Just output ❤️ ❤️ steadily

It's very beautiful, every character is vivid and three-dimensional, and Tom's portrayal is very good. In this case, the heroine is not weaker than Tom, and it even gives people an image that everyone in Hogwarts should follow her. It is not simple. Love you author

Super invincible and beautiful!!! I won the first three chapters, so I added it to my bookshelf, followed Dada, and started to post three small ads [laughs] Dada, keep up the good work, don't let it end, keep up the good work, and I just hate why the meeting is not the end 😢

I'm really looking forward to the next plot! Pollux, you must not give up. It's okay if you write slowly, I will always support you! 🥹