
Harry Potter: In Private, I Smoke and Drink
HP:我私底下就是烟酒都来啊
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Good-looking and good-looking. I like this kind of protagonist who has a very charismatic personality, is easy to handle, and has great dog fishing skills. The smile never left my lips after reading the whole article. The author knows how to write a lot, and I love reading it.
The writing is very smooth, the interaction is fun, and it feels like a real person. When you see Ethan, you have discovered a treasure (o˚̑̑̑̑̑ 3˚̑̑̑̑̑ o) (I'm not flattering, it's just that the words are more human-machine)
Well written. Found a treasure...! ! Ethan is just like a mother (what the hell🥺🤲It feels so good to be alive... I eat, eat, eat)
Super Invincible Explosion is great to watch. The protagonist's gentle and slightly evil character is really attractive. The emotional line with Sirius is also sweet. All I can say is that it is indeed a fishing series! Sirius, you are so lucky.
It's really good to watch. I don't understand why the score is so low. The writing is very comfortable to read. Except for the emotional line, which feels a bit fast at first (but in fact, the ambiguity in this part is also delicious, and the other atmosphere and physical contact that are not right at the beginning) are all very well written. If the plot line is divided into the protagonist before and after graduation, the pre-graduation plot progresses very quickly, but it feels like a campus and a living person when reading. It is not boring and makes people feel very real. This is the first time I have seen the main character written in such detail in HP. The Hogwarts life of doing homework, preparing for NEWT exams, etc. Is very fulfilling (I really feel the pain of Ethan, Draco, Harry, and others preparing for exams, hahahaha). It is also very interesting. The main plot after graduation is that the protagonist joins the Order of the Phoenix to fight against Voldemort. The plot becomes more serious, but this is actually slowly revealed with the progress of the original plot before graduation. Some of the conversations between Sirius and the protagonist are reflected in the fact that when Harry and others are in school, the Order of the Phoenix is actually in action outside. In short, the plot and emotional lines are very delicious, and they are also very friendly to the original characters. Each character is very cute without stereotypes or erasing their advantages. Currently, he is my favorite HP fan... Teacher, are you okay? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] I will always wait for your update [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] This book is so good that I have reread it twice. It is my favorite novel among HP fans... I really like the Ethan and Sirius you created, Teacher, and this little couple... Teacher, I miss you so much [cry][cry][cry][cry]
Ethan is the male protagonist of the Snake House. He is beautiful, powerful and ambitious. His portrayal of him as a neutral and mild-mannered old man is very appropriate. Every time Ethan weighs interests, he will feel extremely sexy. The little girl is like an ambitious handsome man, which is very refreshing to watch. The interaction between Sirius as Ethan's lover is also very hormonal. Sirius perfectly combines Sirius' image of a rebellious young and middle-aged man with his romantic role. With Ethan, he is a mature and uninhibited older dog man and a young, beautiful and willful boyfriend. There are many traumas and regrets in the parent generation, and the author did not forcefully fill them in or avoid them. Therefore, some plots will have a little memory scar of the parent generation, which will be slowly healed in the new and vivid story of the child generation (the main line of the story is the current struggle between Ethan and the protagonist group in the child generation), so it will have a stronger realistic flavor. There are very few Tomato HP double male protagonists, and those of this quality are even rarer. The author xp really suits my taste, and I will continue to support subsequent works.
The character of the protagonist Ethan Prescott is simply amazing - on the surface he is a Slytherin prefect and president of the student union, but in reality he is a hapless guy who smokes and drinks alcohol and is forced to read minds. He is full of contrasts, his venomous tongue is cruel and cute, and the more he looks at it, the more he becomes addicted. The interaction with Sirius was very high-energy throughout. He was bitten when they first met, and then kicked away, but Ethan read Sirius's heart and allowed Sirius to do something, which finally evolved into "The Love Story of Padfoot and Orange Chicken"! The plot was written from the third grade to the end of the war. It is not brainless, not OOC, and does not forcibly tamper with the main line of the original work, but it cleverly makes up for a lot of confusion. The emotional line is naturally unobtrusive. It can bring Sirius's story to a new level, and it can also create the original protagonist in such a vivid and three-dimensional way. The author's writing style and plot control are superb. It is a good HP double-male novel that the more you read it, the more you read it, the more you read it, the more you like it!
It's very lively, the text has a strong sense of life, and the writing style is pretty good. However, there are some parts that are a bit immature at the beginning, but it's still very interesting, including the protagonist's character and large descriptions. The protagonist is very vivid in Dada's writing, just like what I said at the beginning. [Like] Come on, Dada. I look forward to the content behind it.
This is my first book review, and this book is one of the few HP fans I can read with gusto. The whole book is logically online, has a complete structure, and there are basically no OOC characters in the original book. Everyone's characters are very distinct, and the protagonist is particularly well-shaped. He has his own growth path, and does not interfere or help too much with the original protagonist group, but he has a kind of appreciation and concern for smart people towards Hermione. As for the emotional line, cp Sirius is completely a beauty training a dog. They are emotionally tolerant of each other, but the protagonist will lose his temper a little more, and the interactions are also very loving.
The content is large and the content is full, the plot is awesome and full, there is no drag on the vernacular at all, and the sense of life is explosive💥I like it so much [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]