NBA: Becoming a Legend at Point Guard

I have been reading for so long and this is the first time I leave a book review on Tomato Objectively speaking, this book is far from a perfect score among basketball articles. There are other platforms called Silent Love, with Gan Guoyang and Fisherman Zhuyu at the forefront. It seems that the score of 6.2 For this article is also reasonable. But for a new author, and it is a free novel, it is already considered a good masterpiece in Tomato. In terms of advantages: rigorous data (no invincibility at the start and self-contradictory data before and after), reasonable transactions (no whimsical and obscene transactions), and logical player profiles (the protagonist is not so outrageous as to interfere with the team's personnel rights). The most important thing is that I have researched a lot of information, and I clearly put a lot of thought into writing the article, not just opening my mouth. Different from the ordinary obscene articles in Tomato, this article is not like a coming-of-age article that only writes about the protagonist, but more like a group portrait article. The gossip background story of each player is written very seriously (although it is a bit watery), but the character portrayal is immature but very good, which is a bit like love sauce. The second is the system and rebirth that many people complain about. Maybe it's because I read more basketball articles outside the site. The basketball masterpieces in paid novels often do not have a system. Even rebirth will weaken this advantage (Gan Guoyang and Pride). In addition to the coaching article that requires rebirth of the golden finger (The Godfather and Over the Mountain), I think the weakening of the player article or the lack of system and rebirth is a bonus. I'm not afraid of firing map cannons. Tomato authors and readers seem to be the same without cheats and the system. Isn't the protagonist's talent the biggest cheat? It is unscientific to discuss yellow people playing in the NBA. Is the system scientific? A group of people are just looking at their buttocks. Good articles also pick readers. I have never seen paying readers criticize someone who has no system. The big fly next door has no system and does not have a big heart. He led the Bucks to win the championship in his second year. It is unreasonable for anyone to criticize MVP+FMVP. Secondly, Tomato fans are too glass-hearted. Jamie Comey has no brains. The author neither openly accuses nor accuses your boss of being black, nor does he blindly lick any star. This group of fans are just jumping up and down. If you are glass-hearted, don't read basketball articles. It's pretty good to treat everyone equally without being black-minded. So in terms of advantages, it's pretty good. It doesn't have too much of a tomato flavor. The characterization was stiff at first but became much smoother later on. It has a good grasp of the pacing. There are less than 200 pictures in 2 seasons. It doesn't use too much nonsense to write boring plots such as high school college leagues and preseason summer leagues. There is no brainless criticism or bragging about stars. Even Michael Jordan will mention his shortcomings, and a popular black star like James Kobe will also point out his merits. His writing style is completely glass-hearted. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. First, the quality at the beginning was poor and too novice. If it weren't for the Heat, I wouldn't have seen the improvement later on. The reading time of negative reviews and positive reviews can illustrate this point. Those who gave negative reviews were basically within half an hour, while those who gave positive reviews took longer to read. If you can resist the first wave of poison, then the following ones will not disappoint you. The author's progress is more obvious than that of the protagonist, and the subsequent writings are obviously more comfortable and reasonable. Second, the progress of the protagonist is completely replaced by training and competition. There is no specific process, that is, the points added in the system text. The most obvious technical characteristics are good three-pointers, good passing and excellent outside defense, poor finishing at the basket, and vague technical characteristics without detailed analysis. This needs to be polished. Fortunately, it is the third season, and there is still an opportunity to make changes. Thirdly, if you come here to watch a female star sleeping with Ruo Ruo Wu's emotional drama, there is no need to watch it. At present, the original single female protagonist of this article has a prototype. Unless there is a bloody plot in the future, there is a high probability that this female protagonist will be the one. This heroine is more of a tool, and is most likely used to make up for the protagonist's emotional line, so if it is present or not, it is not important. Those who watch the game can ignore it. If you pursue perfection, it is a poisonous point. Overall, I have thought about it so much. In the context of basketball literature, I would give it a passing score of 6 points, and in a tomato book, I would give it a 9 points. But in order to increase the points, I would give it a perfect score. 6.2 Points is really too little. If this kind of quality gets 6.2 Points, I can only give two or three points to 99% of Tomato Basketball articles. Give me 5 points as a token of encouragement. I will give you a follow-up review later. I hope you won't waste my initial tomato review.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe I can see it in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard", if I watch one more episode, I will miss one less. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded and made me finish it halfway. Now, I can only stabilize my mood at this moment by leaving a message in the comments. I hope you can see it with a sense of luck. Come on, author, looking forward to every next chapter of yours, dear readers first 2025.6.18 High emotional intelligence: Looking forward to the next chapter Low emotional intelligence: The author will update soon

The plot is very well written. The author also knows the characteristics of each star very well.

Powerful for love, Niubi, the protagonist's personality is a bit soft at the beginning, like a good old guy, but it gets much better later on, the starting time period is well chosen, from Jordan to Kobe, James, Curry and Durant. Overall, it is much higher than the average tomato level, above average, with some minor flaws, but the flaws do not hide the advantages.

It would be better to arrange a rebirth for the author.

Where is the heroine? Why can't I see the heroine?

Although I felt that the author's writing was very green when I first read it, the writing became more mature as time went on. Moreover, among the current time-travel system novels, it is rare to find such a novel that does not have time-travel and no system. The descriptions of the characters are also flesh-and-blood. Can you ask for more?

The plot is very attractive, and this is one of the few Heat fanfics I have read.

The author's writing style is very good and sophisticated, combining both Chinese and English. I'm afraid you won't understand English but I'll give you Chinese subtitles. The plot is also full of passion, but the boy is uneducated and can only "popularize science" in four words (Ocean, you are all water)

I also started reading the book when it was only around 80 chapters, which is quite good.