
Is There Anything Wrong with Me Being a Magical Girl, Big Brother?
哥哥我是魔法少女有问题吗?
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- Urban
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- Urban High Martial Arts
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- 7mo ago
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Explore more →I've Been Into Gender-Bender Stories Lately. Please Recommend Some
The Protagonist Turns into a Little Girl
Are there any stories where the protagonist turns into a little girl?
Fantasy, Church, Sword and Sorcery, Young Girls
The protagonist is a church saint. Transformation stories are fine too.
Any Male-Oriented Novels with a Female Protagonist?
A sudden whim.
High Martial Arts, Action-Packed, No Hidden Strength, 200,000+ Words, No Idiot Plots
Recommend Urban Fiction. Don't Embarrass Yourself Unless It's Rated 9.5 or Higher
Little Girls, Anything Goes
Stories Where the Protagonist Transforms into a Mature, Attractive Woman
Looking for Stories with Two Female Leads and No Male Lead
Please, I'm in a reading slump. No male protagonist.
Any Tragic Stories About a Man Turning into a Woman?
Looking for books like *After the Proud Heroine Is Reborn, She Sets Her Sights on Me, the Formerly Useless Cutie*. Modern romance preferred.
The Second Personality Spoils the First Personality
I want books like *As Long as I'm Twisted Enough, I Can Become Invincible!*
I've Read Every Gender-Bender Novel on Tomato, So Don't Tell Me There's One I Haven't Read
Bring me something with transformation, a little girl protagonist, and no System.
Please Recommend Tomato's Best Western Fantasy, Magic, Otherworld, and Wild-Ideas Stories
I want a great story. It doesn't have to be wish fulfillment, and I don't mind a slow pace. I've read all the famous ones, but I'm open to recommendations that are worth sticking with. Give me all your good books! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )!
Bring Me Every Top-Tier Yandere in Your Collection
Help Me Find Some Books! I’m Out of Things to Read! (The Book Vault)
Looking for books to read, requesting books, sharing books, recommending books, and books I personally think are good. My book collection.
S-save... Me! I'm... in a Reading Slump
Any kind of book is fine ✧(≖◡≖✿)
Tomato Masterpieces! (Hall of Fame Edition)
I'm running out of books to read lately. Does anyone have a number-one favorite? Please recommend some good reads!
Tomato Has a True God
I’m looking for stories like *Asakura-kun Is a Saint on the Outside and a Demon on the Inside*. Look at my reading time: I’ve earned the right to have an opinion. Tomato is a god-tier platform, and this light novel is a hidden gem. I don’t know why nobody’s reading it. I’ve been reading for ten years, and if you’re out of books, you absolutely have to give this one a try. The male lead is fairly smart, with a bit of...
Any Highly Rated, Engaging Gender-Bender Novels Rated 9.0 or Above?
I've Been Reading Too Many Recommended-List Novels and My Cultivation Has Regressed. Fellow Daoists, Please Find Me an Antidote
Are These Really the Only Dual Female Lead Novels on Tomato?
Please, no gender-swapped stories.
Any Stories With Transformation, BL, and Multiple Female Leads?
Looking for Witch Stories 🌹
Big Herta is so beautiful. Now I suddenly want to read a story about a witch Σ>, (〃°ω°〃)♡→
Another World, Gender Transformation, Daily Life, Preferably with a White-Haired Character
I'd like books similar to Her Highness the Imperial Consort Wants to Kill the Demon King Again Today. You experts, I can't find anything like this (╥ω╥`)
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It's okay. Although the routine is a bit old (especially the part where the sister runs out, it can be called a classic special photography part, and there are a lot of people with low poison resistance in that part), but it's all about tomatoes. Most people have relatively high poison resistance, so this small poison point can be ignored. Also, the book is not forced, it is around chapter 50. When I was in the novel, the main character's waistcoat became popular with my sister. Among the novels I read with similar themes, this one's main character's waistcoat blew up really fast [Eat Melon]. The writing is not bad, and the character creation is also good. It's just that the various settings and a lot of dialogue in the early stage may be a bit overwhelming, but it will be much better later on.
Although most of the plot always feels like it is adapted from plots in other games, especially Mandala, which really gives me a feeling of being particularly like Seele, but the author is really good at tying all the plots together perfectly. And there is no poisonous point like most magical girls (they have strength but are always weak). The author explains the reasons why they can't use their strength in this book. The only shortcoming may be that these plots are too familiar, and there is no sense of surprise when you first see them. Overall, it looks good, and I look forward to continuing to update it. (Also, the background is not fully developed, and the Magic King's Court, Outer Gods and other forces don't have much role. In fact, looking at the background, I can write a big one. I hope the author can grasp the degree and not end it [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]) (First time commenting on stacked armor [love])
It turns out that the author is from blbrun. I said, "How can I get the fine chaff from tomatoes?" What? As an old blb user, I passed this book on Tomato? That's okay It feels like many people are saying that the plots overlap? It's possible that there are too many old fans. As a passerby, I don't think there's anything cliched (except for the beginning). As a traditional magical girl-themed transformation into a light girl, I think this article is completely qualified. In Tomato, it is a dimensionality reduction attack, which can bring a little BLB impact to many people who are exposed to this kind of novel for the first time. There is nothing to say about the plot. It can be said that there are almost no flaws in the control of the main plot. The emotions are controlled very well and the tension is also expressed, especially the transformation sequence. I would also say in BLB that the writing is good. The characters are well drawn. They are not stereotyped characters. They are unique as symbols of real-life identity. There are no characters so stupid that people would look at them with disdain. The villains are all considered to have online IQs. Finally, let's talk about the theme. I feel that this article emphasizes the transformation of self-identity very well. If you find multiple resonance points in the existing world view, then the theme can be raised to a higher level. But how to write it specifically, I can only wait and see how it changes. Judging from the data, this book does not have a trend of becoming a big hit, but after all, the popularity of Tomato is too large, and it is completely unpredictable when it will break out of the circle. But judging from the current quality, if it is written to about 2 million words, there should be an explosion of traffic, and then it will win the gold medal in one fell swoop...! Bar? Kick me if the prophecy is right, and Don't bring the bld's habit of being a eunuch when everything is fine to Tomato, woo woo by: Always support your Xiaoyou [love]
This type of book is my first exposure to this type of book. It feels very novel to me and I like it very much. The male protagonist can transform into a girl like Ranma in the anime. I wonder if the male protagonist will be given a partner to have family, friendship, and love. The male protagonist has a very hard life.
There is a new type of online novel about magical girls that I have never seen before. Although the theme of magical girls has been popular in the light novel industry for a long time, as far as I know, there don't seem to be many domestic novels, especially on the Internet. In terms of content, the setting that every magical girl has a flower name is interesting, unique and meaningful, and there is also the language of flowers, which is a transfer of personality, probably, not sure. Looking at it again, it is also a traditional one with a car and a house (taxi is also a car), both parents are dead (the father is dead, the mother is not clear), and the setting is strong and weakened at the beginning. It is also a classic. There are black and white personalities, which is rare, but I have seen it more, and I don't have much feeling. It's just cute. In terms of world view, it is a post-apocalyptic disaster background. It should be similar to the world setting of Mingchao, but it is not the same. The author likes to play tricks and is sometimes very dramatic. Currently, there is no clear heroine. Is there one, Lily? This remains to be verified. The article is not long at the moment, so that's all for now. If you want to read more, you can give it a try. Probably, there are weird things like defeat CG, but not much...
From a literary point of view, this book has a complete story line and is well developed. The author's descriptions are delicate, he has his own understanding of the characters' personalities, and his control can produce eye-catching effects. The author has a strong writing style and can completely outline a picture with strong storytelling. The author's writing is not sufficiently contradictory to attract many readers. Moreover, the author's articles do not echo each other very well. But in terms of transformation novels, the novels written by the author are completely unique and have their own writing style and storytelling methods. If you like to read transformation novels, she is definitely worth reading. Of course, as of now, there has been no anti-humanity or anti-social writing. I will review this book again after I finish it. The above is just my personal opinion.
There are some poisonous points and some reading points, but overall it's harmless. A good novel. The poisonous point is that the old girl leaves the shelter at the beginning. The first feeling is that rationality is sacrificed for the sake of story. Even if it is said that she is the old girl's best friend or something, it is a bit difficult to break out directly. It feels like it will dissuade some people. There are indeed a lot of reading points. The passion of youth is always the best. Even if the old man's line falls into darkness, I still want to be bright. The old girl's line still joins even though the old man dissuades me. It gives me the feeling that "the greatest courage of a person is to realize the cruelty of life and still love it." There are no low-energy scenes that make people red-hot, and the plot unfolds smoothly. Finally, let me predict the direction of the plot. My brother's "miracle" should take effect when protecting a province or even a country. (After all, there is a hint that the shield protecting the world will be broken.) Because the people behind my brother believe that miracles will happen, the "miracle" happened. This time it is no longer a confrontation between a few magical girls, but a confrontation between the people of the entire country. I hope to see a scene where the people and the magical girls are together. [Thinking] (Suppose I just make a secret. People who believe that miracles will happen are always as great as miracles. The source of magical girls' abilities is essentially the people's belief that magical girls can lead them to victory, so magical girls always need to perform because they need to inspire people and prevent people from collapse) [Learned]
Very good work, reminds me of Magical Girl Ruri [laughing]
"I'm Not Your Teacher" is my favorite among all the gender-changing and non-gender-changing magical girl novels I've read, and it's my favorite among all the novels I've read in which the protagonist is very strong from the beginning (referring to the first appearance of the protagonist). Both the plot and the characterization are very good. The friendship that remains unchanged after Li Haoran and Lao Man revealed their identities, the mutual love between Lao Man and Xiao Man, Lao Man's concern for his sister, responsibility, responsibility, and spirit of unity are all worth learning from. I loved this novel, it brought me value. I wish her a speedy return and a touching and happy ending.
The plot is compact and logical, and the characters are well-developed. Even in serious battle plots, interesting and humorous words like "spicy pills" will suddenly appear. The most important point... Let us congratulate Mandala (Nan Yuli) for winning the resurrection match! Come on!