You Were Born to Be a Magical Girl. It’s Your Destiny

Five-star encouragement and personal poison point record. The protagonist's mind does not match his age. Either you change the age of 34, or you still apply a patch to explain. This patch should be applied very early before the chapter. Earlier, Suzuran transformed into her true form and asked the protagonist to show her transformation as well. The article describes, "I didn't force you to show it to me! Mo Lan immediately refused this kind of "kidnapping" request." But in the follow-up, "Forget Me Not" said that she has always been protecting the protagonist's sister. The description of the article is as follows: "Mo Lan sneered for a moment in her heart... Then why didn't she protect Mo Yu... And protect Mo Yu and her parents?" Wardfa, are you serious? It feels like you are starving to death, and someone brings you food, and you complain about why they didn't bring you food earlier. Situations like this As a guardian of the city, do you want to ask why you didn't save everyone? "Why didn't you save my parents!" How many thousands of people are there in the city? Do you think it is a necessary item for the body, or is it a strange rule? Everyone has a "guardian". When everyone encounters danger, the "guardian" appears automatically.

Read Chapter 104. Leave a comment. The overall concept is very good. Slow heat type. The information between the protagonist and other people is too different. There are also a lot of doubts and suspense, it all depends on what the author writes next. At present, it seems that the protagonist has a tendency to transform into a female. But the line developed slowly. There is a problem that affects the perception of the novel so far. One is that the identity of the protagonist has not been resolved. The second is that many times the characters' behavior is not very logical. For example, when the protagonist goes to school to find a magical girl, a normal person in his thirties who has experienced the workplace would not think of wandering around the whole school (of course it can be explained by the different minds in the transformed state. However, the author hardly wrote about this point before, and only added later that he wanted to regain his masculinity, but this line also ended very abruptly). There is a serious disconnect between the plot and the image. There are several more. Worth reading. Looking forward to further developments.

What should I say? After reading it for so long, I realized that there is no rating, so I'll give it a rating. Overall, the plot is pretty good. It focuses on daily life, and the daily writing is also good. There are some minor flaws, but they are understandable. In my opinion, there are three biggest problems: First, the main line is pushed too slowly. At this stage, the main plot of the book is that Mo Yu is looking for his sister Mo Yu, but after more than 100 chapters, there is no clue about Mo Yu's current situation. It is said that if life and death are unclear, then it is dead. Is Laoyu really sleeping peacefully in the cool summer night? At least give some clues and let the protagonist work hard in the direction (not saying that daily life is not good, just saying that there must be at least some clear direction, and there is no description of the protagonist doing research in this regard). The second point is the character and position of Mo Lan (Mo Yu). Mo Yu is set as a middle-aged man in his 30s, but after transforming into Mo Lan, he behaves like an immature child, without the maturity and stability that a middle-aged person should have. And this involves another position issue - because the position of a mature and stable character has been occupied by Forget-Me-Not, Mo Lan can only be in another position. But in this direction, Mo Lan is obviously not the kind of reliable junior character, but appears to be neither above nor below: the problem of identity puts a distance between her and senior characters like Forget-Me-Not, psychologically This problem also creates a distance between him and junior characters such as Suzuran, which gives the impression that the protagonist has no one who can truly trust him except Kiri Ying, who has been hurting him in his heart all day long. The things that the protagonist hides in his heart, such as his true identity and the purpose of finding his sister, in the play, there is no one except Kiri Ying who the protagonist can completely trust. Forget-me-not trusts her only because of Wu Ying. Rather than saying that she trusts the protagonist, it is more that she trusts Wu Ying. People like Suzuran simply don't know anything about the protagonist. The protagonist will probably have to consider whether they will help him if his true identity is exposed (of course they should still help, but whether they will do so and whether the protagonist can trust them is another matter). Wuying is the third problem of this book. This master who hides in the protagonist's heart and hurts him every day is the golden finger of the protagonist in this book. There are a lot of small problems with her, such as her appearance being too sudden, her mouth being cold and her heart being like iMoTV, and being an old person who has lived for who knows how many years, like the protagonist, she really becomes a child when she is put in a child's body, and she is also a magic pill. But I think the most important problem is the relationship between her and the protagonist. As mentioned above, she, the master, should be the only person who the protagonist can entrust everything to (although that is also because she stays in the protagonist's heart and knows everything the protagonist thinks), but the relationship between the two people At the beginning of the series, Wu Ying was forced to become a grasshopper tied to a rope with the protagonist. Later, she accepted the protagonist as his apprentice at the request of Forget-Me-Not. The relationship between the two people was limited to this, which made her more like a cheat cheat to the protagonist than a companion. I still hope that there will be more about the relationship between her and the protagonist in the future, to reverse the negative impressions she has accumulated in the past, and to allow Mo Lan's own plot line to develop. Generally speaking, I still hope that the author can continue to work hard and give a five-star rating to encourage him.

I said give yourself a 5-star review, does anyone understand? [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Nice frame and characters. It just feels like the focus of the protagonist is a bit wrong. It feels like forget-me-not is the protagonist (`Δ´)! . At least let the old magician also get some highlights. The rest were pretty good. I can read a thousand more chapters

It's a very good book. The author's unique description of magical girls is very good. I want to see the plot development of the protagonist more and more.

Slow-heat type. The protagonist slowly grows up from scratch. He is not invincible right away.

The author can add tags to the introduction, such as 100-year-old, magical girl, black disability, and sexual transformation. Wait for this kind of label, so more people may see it.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, finally found a meal replacement.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on