I Became a Girl and Now I’m Invincible

Generally speaking, it's good, but in the recent pictures, the author is not sure about one point. The mental power is inherent in it, and just using it will not have any side effects, because it is already possessed; cutting the mental power will cause irreparable damage to the mental power, which is equivalent to cutting the flesh on the human body. If you only cut a little, it can grow back, but if you cut off a large piece, such as a finger or a foot, it will not grow back. And this is the problem. When writing the article, the author disrupted and reorganized the logical chain between the two, and clearly cut off most of the mental power. Afterwards, except for the excessive consumption of mental power, there were basically no side effects, and he showed that he didn't care. However, when cutting, he also focused on writing about the great pain caused by cutting off the mental power, which resulted in a disconnect in the article, which seemed a bit uncomfortable. And looking at it comprehensively, you will find that you have a question in your heart: Is it necessary to pay such a high price for a long-distance communication device? Of course, it doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good. At present, this is the only problem. Overall, the writing is very good. Come on [Like] The author made it up later! It also adds a lot of interesting settings. It's really beautiful. I can't live without the author's novels in my current life [crying] The best spiritual condiment every day, which makes me relax every day. It's great [crying]

Very good, the type I like to watch. The heroine has a copy of the superpower. The author did not focus too much on the description of the heroine's superpower. It is like two parallel lines. I personally think that the content is more about the relationship and life of the heroine and other characters. All in all, I like it very much

In fact, I think it's okay, but the setting can actually be added first, so the outline is very important. Many novels write the outline first and then add the details, so if you add the setting later, it will look a bit messy, but after looking at it, I think it's okay. The main reason is that the protagonist's setting is a bit messy. There is no foreshadowing in the front and what comes later is a bit abrupt. Come on, author.

Support me, I'm afraid the author won't write anymore. Judging from the current reviews, the rating will definitely not be high after it comes out.

Good looking! It's my favorite I've read recently, good luck to the author!

I haven't read such a creative book in a long time. It's well written but a bit short! [Sending Hearts]

The writing was okay, but in the end he came up with a sentence, creating a myth to make me laugh [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's beautiful. Good luck to the author.

The imagination has some emotional lines and some characters are relatively clear. The protagonist is not weak, and it is a book that suits my taste. Unfortunately, it is a bit short due to poor traffic, but it is not unfinished, which is great to celebrate.

The setting is very interesting. I can see that he is not experienced enough, but he does have talent. Maybe it would be a better choice to change the website and then just finish the Golden Three Chapters and streamline them.