Harry Potter: From the Start, I Gathered My Teammates

Style: It's very comfortable, and it's rare to see a HP fan who doesn't frown the whole time. First of all, there are many excellent female supporting characters, and I can feel that the author consciously created them. Since HP's book itself has a majority of high-profile male characters, it's really good to be able to work hard to discover and create original female characters. Secondly, it is rare for the heroine not to pretend, and the overall style is still in the magical world. Recently, I have been reading several HP fanfictions in a row and all the words are like "Dumbledore is playing a big game, and my gifted protagonist sees through it sharply" and "The wizarding world is so backward and decadent that no one feels the external threat"... From my personal experience, Harry Potter 123 is a fairy tale written purely for children. Everything paves the way for plots that interest children from a child's perspective. It is normal to have exaggerated and unreasonable parts; 4567 has the ambition to target a wider group of people, but the scope of the entire story frame and background construction has not been expanded, and it is still confined to Hogwarts and the British wizarding world. Some fan protagonists directly use this perspective to reduce the dimensionality and attack with originality, which can only be said to be very inconsistent [laughing awkwardly] Finally, there is no such thing as Snape's dream girl being highly praised, not to mention that the heroine loves Lily the most, so yay! The world has been suffering from Snape's dream girl for a long time! It can make me transform from a little girl who was originally very sad about Snape's death to an abandoned scholar whose heart skips a beat when I see the Slytherin heroine. You all don't know... No, you should all know what I have gone through. (There is a Hufflepuff book that I like very much. The heroine actually has the same father-daughter relationship with Snape. Later, it was described that Snape became like this because of the predators and bullying. There was nothing wrong with him, and it was not him who caused Lily. The phenomenon of human-to-human transmission of brainwashing kits has spread to Hufflepuff😇) Plot: This area needs to be strengthened, which is why I gave it four stars. First of all, the plot in Tomato is pretty good ~ I have defeated most people! But there are still some small problems, you can refer to them. In terms of wording and paragraph structure, it is sometimes a bit off-kilter. Especially in the first few chapters, the author will omit some descriptions that he knows the idea of, but the readers will not understand well if he does not write them out. After all, online novels are not literary works. They focus on being straightforward, bright, and easy to read. If you still have to think about the meaning of the paragraph, it will affect the immersive reading experience. It was improved later, but problems like this still occur occasionally. In terms of the compactness of the plot and the fluctuation of the plot, it is a bit too ordinary and everyday. The author can write interesting plots, and the writing style can also support dramatic plots, such as saving Lily, fighting in the secret room, and practicing magic in Nurmengard. But they were short-lived and soon returned to ordinary daily life. For online novels, the plot that attracts readers is very important. Let's just say that the updates so far are more like popular science and travelogue style than the previous two chapters, which are not as attractive as the return to the magical world in the latest two chapters. In short, based on the style of this article, it is a pity not to write a plot that makes people want to put it down. For the sake of a better novel, I hope the author will work harder (x

This is one of the most detailed Harry Potter novels I have ever read. Just like the title of the book says, the protagonist is a student of Hufflepuff House, but it is not the parent generation, nor the child generation, but the 7 years in between. He is Lily's school sister, and Harry Potter's school sister and professor. I really like the character of the protagonist, a bit big and rough, but not lacking in delicacy and super cute! There are some spoilers below, please read with caution The protagonist travels through time, but there is no golden finger. Unlike traditional system novels, the system in this book has always had a strong emotional bond with the protagonist's mother. The biggest difference between the protagonist himself is that he is liked by animals and is good at the languages ​​of various animals, but there is not much space in the article. The protagonist also has no memory of the plot. The Harry Potter plot mainly flashes in formats based on the tasks given by the system. In the later stage, there are no tasks anymore. My favorite part of the whole story is when the protagonist just graduated. An account of traveling the world in pursuit of becoming a magizoologist. The writing is very serious, without any skipping or one sentence, but it is very serious about dealing with every magical animal in every country. It is super touching. This is the first time I have seen so many descriptions of magical animals in Harry Potter fans. This is also the biggest difference between this book and other Harry novels. There are no spoilers below, feel free to refer to it There is no CP in the whole text, and it does not fall into the traditional sense of being a fan. From the perspective of the protagonist, you will not feel that the protagonist is very popular and powerful, but from other people's experiences and feelings, you can see that the protagonist has really changed a lot. This is one of the reasons why I like this book very much. I really like it, everyone is welcome to eat [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I have read this book in its entirety and there is no OOC. The protagonist is not Long Aotian Hou Gong Shuang Wen. The only one injured in the whole story is Voldemort hahahaha. The heroine is a hard-working, diligent, cute, smart, and beautiful girl. The description of the background and past life is detailed and simple, and will not steal the spotlight, nor is it used to make the story miserable. It revolves around the protagonist, who is neither the parent generation nor the descendant generation, but it turns out! It makes people feel so immersed in watching it. The description is very delicate, sweeping away everyone's stereotypes about Hufflepuff. Especially the description of the heroine's hard work during the exam, and the description of Quidditch. It's normal to succeed and fail. Especially picturesque. This is the only one that makes my nose sore when I see Harry. There is no deliberate comparison with the original work, and there is no writing of a terrible dream. It's just a happy and joyful daily life that makes people feel wonderful. What I really like is the heroine's affirmation of herself and her calm acceptance of praise from people around her, turning it into something that makes her love life even more. I really came to life from the book. As I write, I want to continue reading it and will review it when it is finished.

It feels like a very good book www But let me correct the author: Otome-oriented is not female-oriented/heartthrob all-oriented! There is no mention of "Micro Otome" in the introduction. Otome means that you can experience the story on behalf of the heroine (that is, the heroine = reader, the heroine has no independent personality). This book belongs to the original heroine, and the heroine has an independent personality instead of a leather cover. Either there's a female protagonist or it's an Otome character I suggest you remove the "Micro Otome" in the introduction, because there are times when I see an Otome and think that I can substitute her, so I just assume the role of the heroine ()

The heroine is very charming, and the relationship line with the system mother is also very touching. What's even more rare is that after reading so many HP fics, there is finally a protagonist who is a fan of magical animals! Everyone survived, the plot was changed beautifully, and Bill's secret love line was delicious. The girls in the book are all so good, and they all have their own achievements in the extra chapters. It's a very good group portrait. The first part is about the protagonist studying at Hogwarts, the middle part is about graduating and traveling around the world to see various customs, customs and magical animals, and the last part is about collecting expired plans to kill Voldemort. The plot is well arranged and kept me entertained until I finished reading it in one day.

I really like this writing style. It focuses on daily life, but the writing style is very good and doesn't feel like a rundown. The plot is light-hearted and pleasant, and the language style is lightly humorous. Although it should be considered a heroine-driven novel, every supporting role is outstanding. The article does not describe the "empty" heartthrob halo, but you can feel the heroine's personal charm between the lines of the author's words, and you will really fall in love with this beautiful human being unconsciously - imagine an outgoing, funny, cute, omnipotent, hard-working and self-improving, almost an all-round version of Newt [OK] except that she is really an emotional block [face covering] The main line is the career line/personal development of the heroine, and the Horcrux line is just a very small branch line. It is rare to see the heroine of Badger Academy who is really focusing on developing her beloved personal career. Moreover, from the main line, I can feel that the author has sufficient knowledge reserves and researched information. I personally think it is the most detailed setting among the HP fics I have seen so far, and the original plot is both novel and restored to the original work [Like] The only thing I feel a little regretful about is the opening chapter. At first glance, I feel that the heroine Goldfinger is a bit inexplicable and too strong to be buggy. It is still a Veela setting. If I don't like watching Pure Mary Sue, I almost quit [laughing and crying] Fortunately, I persisted and read two more chapters. I didn't miss a good article. I added it to my reading list [OK]

Super comfortable article! ! ! ! ! ! But why is the score so low? When I first looked at the score, I thought there was something wrong with it, so I gave it a high score in the hope that the score would be higher! . But one thing is that I feel that Sirius's emotional line is a bit abrupt. I felt that in the early stage, he felt like an elder, but later on, he suddenly fell in love with him, and considering the age difference, it was a bit like falling in love with him (ahhhhhh, although the average age of people in the magic world is very long, this can be ignored, but it is also too weird Aaaa)

Why is this score so low? This is a great read. Everyone becomes a better version of themselves. I think Ivy is worth it. Everyone has their own growth line. And the most ingenious thing is that the era Ivy lives in is a link between the past and the future. He strung all the so-called parent and descendant generations onto a sugar-coated haws. The entire worldview extends far beyond the fragments mentioned in the book. If I am to be picky, I think this article is too short. Not enough to watch at all. My heart felt soft when I saw it. Ivy's life is very fulfilling, rich and wonderful. For this article, I think it is not particularly important whether there is CP or not. Everyone lives happily in their own life trajectory. Harry is no longer the poor orphan. He has many possibilities. So does Lily. I think Lily was a particularly good witch in the original work. She deserves to have a richer and more exciting life. After graduating, Ivy traveled almost around the world while collecting information on magical animals. After collecting this information, I received another exciting offer. He just returned to Hogwarts to teach, and he happened to be teaching Harry and his generation. At this time he was only 20 years old. What an exciting life trajectory! I feel so happy, so free, and such a vital article. Ivy's life😭😭😭😭 my dream.

This book is very good! Time travel, system, heroine, extra 1v1 without cp in the main text, fan fiction, easy transition to parent generation and child generation, happy ending. Some of the settings are novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The heroine is lively and cheerful, naughty and cute, beautiful and kind, smart and clever, highly approachable, humble and studious, calm and decisive, and powerful. In this book, the male characters show shocking power with their courage, perseverance and wisdom. The female characters are equally radiant. They are either gentle and intelligent, resolving crises with delicate thoughts; some are brave and fearless, shining brightly in difficult situations; some are talented, outlining everything in the world with delicate brushstrokes; Every choice they make and every step they take makes the brilliance of life shine between the lines. Great, keep up the good work^O^~ "Extraordinary wisdom is mankind's greatest wealth." "Love is mankind's greatest magic."

Well, it's a very novel setting, but the pace may be a little faster (than normal HP fans). Weiwei is really cute. I saw Graduation. There is no poisonous point at the moment (I think), but there are very few love lines and there will be a little bit later, but I like this [blowing kiss]