Harry Potter: The Poetry and Magic of Ravenclaw

Tying mark. It's relatively new, but it does have a lot of minor issues. I thought it was pretty good-looking, very novel, and interesting to write. However, I think this book has many logical bugs and feels OOC. The heroine is set to be a British Aboriginal fan, but she made several behaviors that were inconsistent with the character. I guess the author either made the decision carelessly for the development of the plot, or the author forgot about it after writing it. The original characters also have some plots that I think are OOC. The overall plot has been greatly changed, and the butterfly effect is very strong. The author is editing it himself, but he often jumps out of it as he writes. This part makes the whole story a bit incoherent. The pit the author buried at the beginning - the protagonist was sucked into the Harry Potter book, and the book began to change. This setting, based on my experience in reading the novel, is probably to change the plot and write a large chapter, then turn to the perspective of readers in the real world. If the author forgot or didn't want to write this part, why not revise it? A very magical point. The author wrote that the heroine was brought to the parent generation by a time-space converter. Why not take the opportunity to write more? It ended really quickly, and the ending of this chapter was a bit ridiculous. The parents were more or less guilty, but the heroine didn't say anything and still wanted to hide it. And oh, the parent line here also lacks logic a bit. They accompany the heroine to steal the time turner, and forget about the Marauders following them. How could Snape get involved? Not to mention that the parent line has little plot, and there are only a few days. Overall, it's actually a pretty good book, but it's immature and lacks logic in some places. I'm very curious about how it will develop in the future, looking forward to it

Give yourself a good night~ Love you, I'll see you tomorrow haha Please friends, if you don't like it, can you please stop scolding me and just quietly change the book and read it? Don't scold me 🥺