Hunter X Hunter: A Red-Eyed Zoldyck Starting with Red and Blue Hands

👍👍👍I read 82 chapters in one go! To be honest, judging from the descriptions of logic, battles, story, and abilities, it's a pretty good fanfic, easily ranking in the top ten of Hunter x Hunter logic-based fanfics. However, it also has significant flaws.

While the story's premise is undeniably excellent, a quick read revealed that the excessive internal monologues and explanations contributed to reader fatigue, leading me to skip over many unnecessary parts. However, the overall plot and character development are quite good.

As a new author and a new book, I'd give it 4 stars... The author has thought about it, but lack of experience leads to a slow pace... And it's quite inconsistent in some ways. However, Hunter x Hunter is generally inconsistent, after all, it's a world of my imagination.

It's really well-written. However, to be honest, the setup for the protagonist's growth in the gangster section was a bit too long. This delayed the climax too much. It gets better and better as it goes on. I suggest keeping it under 15 chapters. If 15 chapters isn't enough, you can write the outline and then fill in the gaps with flashbacks after an intense battle scene.

I suggest stopping around chapter 90. The first 90 chapters are brilliantly crafted, showcasing the protagonist's meticulous psychological warfare and exceptional intelligence. His decisive and ruthless actions make this novel feel more like a story where the protagonist rises through talent and hard work, unlike many system-based novels. Combined with the struggles of supporting characters like Old John, it's simply a masterpiece! 👍👍👍 After chapter 90...🤮🤮🤮

Honestly, it's pretty good so far. The setting and explanations are decent, except for some unnecessary parts that could be removed. Not everyone has the patience to read densely packed novels. There are so few Hunter x Hunter fanfics by Tomato, and even those that exist aren't very high quality. Keep it up! Don't let it stop! It's really well written.

Overall, it's alright. The battle description was spot-on (too much padding). Fan fiction is mostly read by people who have watched the anime, so there's no need to write too much detail.

It's a thought-provoking read; the characters are intelligent, logically sound, and very much in the Hunter x Hunter genre. The portrayal of their inner thoughts and character development is, to date, the best Hunter x Hunter fanfiction by Tomato Novels. The downside is that the added characters are too conspicuous. At least change their names and make minor adjustments to their abilities, otherwise it's too easy to break the immersion.

Good news! While some parts are a bit disorganized, it's clear the author has their own understanding of Hunter x Hunter; it's not just a mindless plot-driven novel. Keep it up! Tomato has hardly written Hunter x Hunter, but Dian and Lu have some works. When you're experiencing writer's block, consider learning from them to expand your ideas and knowledge base.

The writing style and setting are good, but there's just too much focus on the gangsters, which I don't like.