Hunter X Hunter: The Phantom Troupe's Insect Soul

It can be seen that I have not read the original setting at all, and I have not even read the animation information at all, so I just wrote it out of curiosity 🤦

The writing is average, the writing style is poor, and the setting of the original novel does not match. I feel like I haven't read much and my head is burning so I started writing. In terms of writing style, I don't like paragraphs to be branched. I like to describe a lot of psychology and environment, but it doesn't have much effect on the article. The logic is not clear, the structure is problematic, and there are many loopholes. Many settings in the original work were taken over by the author. For example, the establishment of the most classic brigade was directly changed by the author. The transformation of the brigade can be said to be an important plot point in Hunter, because it is related to the birth of the spider and the foreshadowing of the Cajun Empire later.

After reading the previous ten chapters, the author knows the hunter world very well. In the first few chapters, he clearly wrote the most important system of the novel "What should the protagonist do 🤔 🤔 🤔". I have read many fans, and they have been laying the groundwork in the early stage without a clear process. This consumes a lot of readers' patience 🤦 🤦 🤦 , the important thing is that the author of this fanfic writes well. After all, it is difficult to write a hunter fanfic. The character of the old thief (who just loves to play mahjong 😠😠😠) is very three-dimensional, and his perfect "psychic ability" system is perfect. It is difficult for the same author to write 😳😳😳. But we can't blame them for not writing well. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. 🤔🤔🤔 The advantage of doujin is that the general direction has already been grasped, and you only need to grasp your own direction. Writing is mainly about writing the stories and adventures you want to write, and it is easy to start 🙂🙂🙂. And its disadvantage is that it is too easy to get started, which leads to many fans writing not so exciting, causing readers' aesthetic fatigue 🤦 🤦 🤦, and don't want to read the first few chapters when they are boring 🤦 🤦 🤦. The fan system is the most difficult to write. The system is like a god, and all explanations belong to God. The logic is confusing, etc. These are common problems in system writing 🤔 🤔 🤔. The main line of the fandom is grafted on a big tree. If the grafting is not done well, it will easily become necrotic, causing a piece of the big tree to rot. Perhaps it can also be said that the vines growing on the big tree are full of thorns or full of flowers (some people like thorns, and some like flowers, it depends on the reader's preference 🤔 🤔 🤔). Having said all this, I just hope that the author will continue writing without interruption 🙂🙂🙂, and it does not need to be unfinished. After all, there are very few hunter fan stories that are so good. The last one I thought was good was Kusuo's. Don't interrupt updates and unfinished work!!! Please 😘😘😘!!!

I saw the latest chapter, a newcomer's work, and there are many problems. There are problems in the characters, plot, and writing. I originally wanted to give it two stars, but after thinking about it, it is not easy to write a niche fan. I have to change the habit of writing a long paragraph and a long paragraph.

First person, I can't stand it, I don't know why

The writing is very good. I like the calm character of the protagonist very much.

At least the ability of Nian is not that abnormal, and the restrictions are more consistent, but what is the ending!

The first person perspective has always been uncomfortable

The Hunter fandom is very good and deserves to be encouraged.

Why is there no ability to repair the body?