The Outcast: Six Treasury Immortal Thief

It's very interesting, but the rating seems low. It should be 8.8 Or higher. In my opinion, it's better than some 9-point movies. First of all, the logic is good and you can read it. There are no vulgar descriptions of pornographic feces and farts. The author does not use pornographic accents to create confrontations, nor does he argue with various All kinds of people engage in ambiguous and prostitution. The protagonist and everyone are normal people. The way they get along with each other is very comfortable, and then they fill in the holes. I think it is reasonable. I don't write about all the sexes for the sake of being evil. The most enjoyable part is to blow up my little life. It's really cool.

The protagonist's combat power is among the strongest among his peers, and the combination of innate lightning and lightning + Liuku Immortal Thief is also very interesting, I like it very much. It's not like some Under One Man fandom who always have a lot of superpowers that rival the Heavenly Master... It's just that it was written relatively early and was backstabbed a lot by the original (laughs). The relationship between the protagonist and Zhang Chulan seems to be unilaterally helping Zhang, but Zhang Chulan's character is indeed difficult to trust people, and it seems uncomfortable, but it is not to the point of being poisonous. The original plot that rises to the level of family and country feelings does not feel so natural, but it is done as well as possible. Overall, the look and feel is okay, but the score feels a little low.

The writing of this book is okay, but it is written a little early, so many plots are actually incompatible with the original work, and it is numb in the back. Apart from this, the other plots are enjoyable to watch. Although the final ending is very satisfactory, if you really study it closely with the original work, it is not that reasonable. If 36 thieves really did this for such a purpose mark, there wouldn't be so many sects chasing after them recklessly. If they were all blocked by the ban and couldn't tell the truth, Master Tian wouldn't have gotten the truth from Zhang Huaiyi. But the author did write with his own ideas. I feel that he wrote the fanfic very wonderfully. This is enough, so I am still willing to give him four stars.

It's very good-looking, one of the best among the fanfics, and the changes are quite good. The protagonist is established, and he doesn't help Zhang Chulan without asking for any reward. Everything is paid for with money or promises to solve something. It's very well written. I've been reading some fanfics where he always participates in Zhang Chulan's plot. I don't know what Zhang Chulan gave him, so hard.

Author, the plot and content are good, but this writing style reminds me a bit of the essay I wrote in junior high school. The Chinese teacher said it was just a running account. I don't mean to criticize you, but simply suggest that you improve your writing style. This novel will definitely be popular, so I will give it four stars first. Come on, baby

It's really awesome. It's not a pure Long Aotian Invincible style. The plot is very compact. The main reason is that the author really has two brushes in writing books. This book is considered to be top-notch among the fans under one person. It can be read first-hand.

The plot felt very good. Then I didn't read much of this one, but I felt that the plot was very good. Then I didn't read much of this one. I also explained it sideways. My doubt about the comic I read was whether any big boss knew about the Jiashen Rebellion. Why is this comic still finished? Can any boss explain to me why the company didn't eradicate Quan Xing when the Heavenly Master went down to kill Quan Xing but was stopped by others? Because the brand new ones I saw in the anime are no different from lunatics. Don't they know that this group of people will cause significant harm to society? Why don't companies eradicate it completely? (◇)

It's quite good-looking, and it makes up for a lot of one person's regrets. One person's famous scenes are not missed, and it doesn't purely focus on the main plot, but it feels a bit fast. The Chen Duo chapter is over after about a hundred chapters. It seems that the progress will soon reach March 1st. Have you thought about what to do if the main plot is exceeded? (Curious)

The writing is very natural and does not feel like a running account! It's a really good article!

I think the reason for the Jiashen Rebellion is the best among the many fan books I have read. The righteousness of family and country is what binds those proud men of heaven!