That Girl Who Refuses to Follow the Plot

Well written. The writing style is also very good, and I personally feel that the author actually has a stream-of-consciousness style. The plot is novel, breaking out of the small frame, and the eyes are bright. The subsequent back and forth depends on whether the author can grasp the degree. In terms of character creation, the two heroines were slightly flat in the early stage, but there are many foreshadowings. In the subtleties, you can also feel the story of the characters. In terms of emotional lines, I have only read the revised full text. In the middle period, when the emotional lines rose, I felt a little dull. I don't know if it was the reason for the change. The advancement of the emotional lines was obviously accelerated, and the glass was mixed with sugar, which was also a foreshadowing detail. It's full, so when I look at the changes in the love line later, it doesn't seem abrupt, the foreshadowing echoes, the reasons are justifiable, and there is a feeling that they should be like this. Of course, because I only saw the revised full text (PS: Damn, I originally planned to raise it, but it turned out to be ambushed!), So it is purely subjective and will not be used as a reference. Finally, I still hope that the author can maintain his tacit understanding of writing the book and get rave reviews! (It would be better if it could be updated in a sparse manner, with twenty or thirty chapters [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

The book is very nice, the plot may be a bit cliche, but the writing is good. I have changed my view, it really looks good! Sister Wanwan (Sheng Huailang) is so cute! The dead pretending sister (Li Ming) is really pretending to be dead...

It's pretty good to watch. The previous plot may seem cliche but it's actually laying the groundwork for what's to come. The plot is very novel and the characters are very distinct. I don't think Li Ming's character is cold and cold, well... He's a bit mean and has a dark belly. He's decisive in doing things. He's good at hiding his true heart, but he's not a dull gourd emotionally. That's what it looks like at the moment. To be honest, I think both heroines have a slight sense of madness. After all, like attracts like. It's quite touching and makes me want to watch it. The best ending is he. You can torture me for a while and it'll be fine [smile]

The characters are relatively full-bodied, and the rating I see now is 7.9. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but after thinking about it, I gave it four stars. For me personally, the only difficulty is that the concept is vague in some places, especially in the successive updates (I re-read some of the previous plots after updates). I don't know how to express what I want to say. It may be the complicated identities of the two heroines, or the book emphasizes the aborigines and outsiders in this world. However, only a few people with the status of outsiders seem to have appeared, as well as Li Ming's bumpy life experience, and what is the relationship between the world she comes from and the main world where the system is located. The middle section describes Yu Yao's second awakening of self-consciousness. What is the purpose of this section? It just gives me the feeling that if it is not an ordinary romance novel and wants to improve the main theme, I don't understand that main line [what] [what] [what] It deserves five stars on Tomato, and I used to have no brains in rating, so it's not good to give four stars all of a sudden [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Absolutely novel plot direction, absolutely crazy and absolutely beautiful pictures, the characters of the two heroines that make people feel sad and cute at the same time, it has a sense of emotion and is very good. But I have a bit of a dilemma myself. Sometimes the descriptions of landscapes or character profiles are really beautiful and artistic, but the plot is very crazy. Sometimes the discussions on philosophy and human nature are very profound and extreme, and the angles are novel, but sometimes I feel guilty. It would be a bit shameful if I couldn't reach the second level of mental activity and description... So this book lingered in the category of my bookshelf. I saw the profound → wow, I saw it in the ultimate collection, and when I saw the second level → I quickly hid it, and hid it in the category where I have the most books. It was so difficult. Abstract, interesting, profound enough, imaginative, with many elements, multiple settings added, the content is rich enough, the language is beautiful enough, and the picture is very visual. It is very suitable to be expressed in animation. The expression can be similar to "Super Seminary". It is gorgeous, grand, powerful, feeling, delicate enough, and fascinating... In short, it is a relatively complex book. What I love most is that the author writes a book to satisfy his own writing needs and to be loyal to his own creative inspiration. That's right! For the rest, add some elements that cater to the public's tastes, cater to the trends of the times and new memes. If you feel comfortable writing it, we will also enjoy reading it. It's a win-win situation. (The only suggestion? If you set the outline of each character's position and the direction of the plot, it will be less confusing, it will be better to hide the foreshadowing, and it will be more ups and downs and exciting like detonating all the landmines in the picture. The effect may be a little better, and it may inhibit inspiration and restraint, but it can be modified) Just write as much as you want, hahahaha, let your imagination run wild!

Damn it, why did you take it off the shelves? They are not together yet. How can the author still write this (crying over sugar-free whole wheat bread)

I hope this book can be read by more people. Rouse wrote it very well! Also, when will Li Ming and Sheng Huailang be together? !

It's very interesting and the author's logic is very strong. If you are stupid like me, don't read it with your brain. The two heroines are very touching! ! ! The author's writing style is also very strong! ! ! Love this book so much! [Adoration]

The author's big pen is really great. I highly recommend you to read it.

Personally, I think it's beautiful. I was attracted by the characters of the two at first, and then purely because of the writing style and plot. The writing is very good, but it always stops updating (woo woo woo) Overall, it is considered a masterpiece in Tomato (referring to the theme of two female protagonists) I look forward to the author's great [sending heart][sending heart]