Dead Cicada

See Chapter 100 This is the first time I read an article about unlimited streaming. The game is quite interesting. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it. It's just that the reasoning process is not very good. There are fewer emotional scenes between the two heroines I feel that something is missing from the author's description. I can't imagine the scene smoothly when I read it. It should be that some details are missing. It may be that the author subconsciously ignored something when writing. There are not many people watching [laughing and crying] If the language could be improved a bit, it would be a good book with great potential and a good story frame. [Blowing kiss]

A breath of fresh air in tomatoes. Unlike the curiosity-seeking articles that are all over the Internet now, this can be said to be a more successful work about dual heroines and unlimited streaming. There is much for us to study. The early plot may be a little difficult to understand, but at this rate it will only get better and better. Now that I have a holiday every week, I listen to this when I go to bed at night 🙂

Hmm... Edible The problem is that I always feel that there is something missing in the text. It is not natural, which prevents me from fully immersing myself in it and understanding the emotions of the characters (it may also be my problem (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣, I am not in good spirits) Also, when the protagonist is playing the game, he always feels that the details are not described enough - I think this may be due to the writing style. But after all, this type of novel always wants readers to feel involved. The protagonist has no derivation process, which made my head swell after reading it - huh? ! Why did the results suddenly come out? (It's also possible that I opened the Crimson King) There are also some plot-related questions that are placed on the protagonist's face, such as what the god's riddler said, and the god's purpose of playing this game. These should be made by the protagonist to reason, and from time to time, relevant plot issues should be made to make the protagonist recall and promote the cracking of the riddle. There are also relatively few descriptions of facial expressions, psychology, and actions when characters are having conversations. What the protagonist discovered and why he said those words must be supported by psychological descriptions. All in all, the author can try to use more "watery" words, and then it will be better to use different writing styles in different situations.

Okay, okay, okay, okay (what am I talking about) I think the emotional development between Bai Feng and Nian Chi is very delicate. I don't know how to describe it. It feels like mutual redemption (?) Anyway, five stars (シ_ _)シ

Taihao read it, the author please give me more encouragement, I will return after gaining weight [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's really good_(•̀ω•́ ‖∠)_

Xilin Xilinxi ●▽● Sai Qi Sai Qi Sai\(^O^)/

It's really good😋

It's beautiful and beautiful. I feel that the images written by the author are very artistic [laughs]

The author's writing style is very good [like][like][like]