The Knight Lady Will Eventually Fall to Her Yandere Maid

The author's writing is really good, but the plot in the back story is a bit hard to understand. It was obvious that the story would take about 100 chapters to tell, but it was compressed into 30 chapters. Then there is the plot that is too Riddler. Due to the short length, the plot is a bit stiff, and there are many details that could be used to make a fuss and foreshadowing, so the viewing experience is not particularly good. In fact, I think the author can go back and polish it a bit, and the emotional line can remain unchanged, which is really delicate. The main thing is to rewind the plot, and the author can write more to polish it. I feel that there is no problem with the author's writing style. If the problem with the backend is solved, this book has the potential to become a god.

It's still good, and I can watch it. Although I can't tell the story, the story is really good, but it's not too sudden, and I don't see much emotional warming. Furthermore, it was discovered too early, and it was quite annoying not being able to see enough at once. If you are short of books and like lilies, you can chase them.

It looks good, but I feel like the author was too anxious when writing the if line. I just finished reading the first section of the third chapter, and I personally feel that the if should be placed at least after the extra chapter and before the third chapter. I understand the author's desire to write a wonderful story, but the map needs to be laid out slowly. In my personal opinion, I was still learning to write with the housekeeper in the last section, and the next second it has already started to reeeee. I can feel that the setting is very exciting, but don't rush it (otherwise, how could I have written more than 1,000 chapters [laughs]

It's a pity that so few people read this book. This plot is already considered the peak of Tomato.

Readers are like this. The author only needs to generate electricity, but the readers have a lot to consider [laughter] Great book, looking forward to the follow-up

I feel like a god after reading it, but I don't know whether I am a god, or the people in it, or the author, or everyone who touches this book will be a god.

It's good to watch, I hope it's more twisted (when can we see the basement plot?)

Super sweet, super sweet, super sweet, but the author is a bitch~[Making faces]

[The author of Miscellaneous Fish and her reader (bushi)] All in all, it's very beautiful [laughs evilly]

Your writing style is crazy, but I don't know why there is something that makes up for it👍